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Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2019 5:15 pm Title: Speaking

The thought of Michael and Brian in the same bed is pretty disturbing.

Craig dead won't be a relief for Justin yet; I guess he will have to deal with some "legal" stuff and it might shed a light on some dark areas.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2019 4:15 pm Title: Speaking

Oops.  How did Craig die?  Poison?  Is Luther now a good guy?

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2019 12:04 am Title: Very Stupid Idea, The Size of Things and Good Riddance

Great update.  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2019 11:16 pm Title: Very Stupid Idea, The Size of Things and Good Riddance

Vance can have Lindsay every other man has cause she will spread her legs for a penny and a glass of champagne, but her tongue will see her back in prison where she belongs without a cent.

Zee is faithful to get husband, loyal to get family and friends so if that makes her Uncouth then let's celebrate it.

Justin is kubd, sweet, loving and faithful to Brian even when they were broken up so that should be celebrated too.

Lindsay's only loyalty is to herself, money and power everyone and everything else is incidental to get desires to be seen as a Queen, Gus and Jenny mean about as much to Lindsay as a condom wrapper they can't help her get to Brian so she doesn't care what happens to them anymore.

And Vice Versa for Gus and Jenny.

Zee is One Lucky Woman...Yowszer!!

I take it Craig is roasting in Hell?

Thanks For the Update

 

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2019 6:19 pm Title: Very Stupid Idea, The Size of Things and Good Riddance

Vance can keep lindsay. There whining together a match.

What is Faal doing? This is one of my favourite series. Can't stop thinking about it. There so much going on. Excited to read More ...soon. ❤

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2019 6:02 pm Title: Very Stupid Idea, The Size of Things and Good Riddance

Who is dead? Craig?

It seems that Faal has some serious material in the neither region, or did I understand incorrectly?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2019 1:29 pm Title: Very Stupid Idea, The Size of Things and Good Riddance

Okay who died?  With so many great stories I sometimes get lost.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2019 6:17 pm Title: All Gathered Together

Ha ha ha! The keys for the doors inside the house are a great idea; I hope these are glass doors so Lindsey could see what she is missing.

Will Justin still feel the closure is done a few days after visiting his father? What actually happened with Craig and Justin?

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2019 5:47 pm Title: Sibling Shock

Taylor is adorable and very caring.

Hank and Jenny seem to have fun.

I would have liked to see Lindsay when she saw "her" room and I would like to see her face when she will see Mel next time.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2019 12:18 am Title: All Gathered Together

Great update.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2019 7:33 am Title: All Gathered Together

"Until he came along, captured his heart." cause Justin is the Only one believes in Brian's heart. Unlike 2 morons M&L who never believed in Brian. Good to see Lindsay drowning in jeolousy. Gus & Jenny did good. Lindsay should see what she lost cause of her own pathetic attempts. Not Justin fault.

Glad Justin able to have last words with his Sperminator* (Not that Craig would hav tried to force Justin for Organ? right?) 

ThankYou for the update. Enjoyed it. Wish you luck. Hugs❤

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2019 5:15 pm Title: All Gathered Together

Lindsay You Pathetic Cunt can ride Gardner until Hell Freezes Over but it won't change that you are at the bottom and will never rise any higher than the meaningless Whore you always have and will be.

Jenny will be a judge before she graduates from high school lol

That young lady is fierce when she sees an injustice and doggedly determined to right a wrong.

Thank Goodness Mel's genes savaged Michael's!

Justin finally got the closure he needed and now Craig has no more hold on him and he is free to be Incandescently Happy.

So is Lindsay getting the full amount of a $1.50 all in pennies back? lol

Yes Revenge Is A Dish Best Served Happy and Catered😂

Thanks For the Update!😀

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2019 2:14 pm Title: All Gathered Together

I didn 't think that Lindsay was allowed to join them.  Isn't Jenny looking into Gardner?

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2019 11:30 am Title: Sibling Shock

Great  chapter.  Love it when Linds and Mikey are in trouble.  Fantastic writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2019 1:33 am Title: Sibling Shock

Yes Mel and Leda Are Getting Married!

Is Mel Pregnant?

Lindsay should definitely go to this shower and try to get that letter but I doubt she will succeed she needs to have even the lint in her pockets taken away.

Oh this party is going to be so much Fun!!

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2019 5:58 pm Title: Sibling Shock

Just when you think you're rid of them they come back. Lindsay going to a shower for Mel should be fun.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2019 9:32 am Title: Sibling Shock

Awesome! loving your updates.🙂

Hank concerns are right. Hope Jenny messege still gets to idiot.

Micheal & his petulant behaviour is famous in QaF. Wish to slap it off Micheal face many times. His Nut brain needs to kicked. So of Linds. Their is a huge debt to be paid off. No more princess.

Wonderful written. Seeing Delusional duos M&L jealous & in trouble is always bliss. Curious to know, what will happen next. Also, Why Is Craig trasfered back? What his motive behind?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2019 4:18 pm Title: Ill Met and Catharsis

Craig is back and already/still lying about Justin, but worse also lying about Molly. What a jerk.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 5:35 pm Title: Ill Met and Catharsis

Jenny is going to be One Hell Of An Amazing Lawyer before she even gets out of high school and she will be a Fantastic Judge before she gets out of Law  School.

Perhaps Luther can't be their father anymore because that ship has sailed but maybe he could be an excellent friend to his kids?

Justin is right to be upset and wish that all The Haters would just fall into a bottomless abyss to never return, he just wants to enjoy his husband, daughter, son and family without looking over his back constantly waiting for the next shoe to drop and snowball to come crawling out from under their rock.

Craig lying to his fellow inmates is not surprising he will do anything to look Superior to everyone else.

You find friendship inn the strangest of plaves.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 12:08 pm Title: Ill Met and Catharsis

Interesting chapter.  Where does Archie fit in?



Author's Response:

Hey, you good? Archie fits in as the one thing that Luther has never really had - a friend.

Happy reading.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 9:41 am Title: Ill Met and Catharsis

Great update.  No sorrow for Craig.  Getting what he deserves.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2019 4:05 pm Title: Reason for the Ad-Vancing and More S-Luthering

Ah ah ah, the end is hilarious! I bet "boy wonder" will have a thorough analysis of the "patient".

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2019 8:17 pm Title: Reason for the Ad-Vancing and More S-Luthering

Hi, I have a question; I know at the start of this series in 2012, Jenny & Gus are 12 & 14 respectively, how old is Hunter?  Going by cannon he should be 22/23.

Also, if we are still going by the premise that Justin & Brain met in 2000 when he & Daph were seventeen, how come Daph was still doing exams etc when she was 29? And would she really give her children away when she was 33 in the hopes she'd still be fertile enough to have more later, when her career is already somewhat established due to her age in 2016?

I'm not sure if I've asked this before but it's really irritating me.  As you know I absolutely adore this series so it is in no way a complaint, just a bug in my brain!

Ta

Deb L



Author's Response:

Hiya, um you haven’t asked this before,  well noticed, and thanks as you have given me a bit of a plot point! Hopefully it will clear answer your question later in the story. Thank you kindly Deb!

Nicole

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2019 9:56 am Title: Reason for the Ad-Vancing and More S-Luthering

Just a quick question.  Didn't Michael get 50 years sentance at the end of Rattle of Snakes, not 40?

Still loving all your current stories, although, 'Secrets' is maybe my fave even though I'm having difficulty following the plot!!

Ta

Deb L



Author's Response:

Hey Deb, had to go back and read and you are indeed right, he got 50 years in total. I had forgotten about the New York sentence.

Glad you are enjoying my writing - SECRETS will start to get less convoluted, hones!

Best

Nicole

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2019 5:01 pm Title: Reason for the Ad-Vancing and More S-Luthering

Vance getting creepy. I remember in S-4 Justin was a crackshot, might get Brian turned on by it again. Though totally looking forward to those evaluation. Great !

Thankyou for the update. Hugs❤

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