Date: Nov 01, 2018 12:43 am Title: Chapter 12
Hope there will be more. Thanks
Date: Oct 30, 2018 6:22 pm Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter. Thanks for telling who Collier is. I remembered him from the party when you explained it. No sympathy for Mikey !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Happy Halloween to you !!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2018 4:48 pm Title: Chapter 12
Not surprising Ethan is avoiding responsibility he must be related to Michael.
Did enjoy him having to deal with Michael's sick all over him.
I do hope he gets what's coming to him very soon.
Collier Hartline is the one who questioned Gus and is stalking Justin, he is extremely violent so everyone is on high alert until this psycho is caught.
No wonder Justin didn't recognize him he is one of those people Ethan enjoys having around to kiss his Ass, Justin had better things to do with his time then hang around anyone who thought Ethan was more important.
Ethan's need to be Grand (Michael 1.0), Amazing brought a delusional person to Justin's door. (Funny It Still Sounds Like Michael <shrugs>)
Hope Michael went to jail again and gets a bill for the mess he made :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2018 1:19 pm Title: Chapter 12
Another highly interesting chapter. The mystery deepens.
Date: Oct 30, 2018 8:29 am Title: Chapter 12
So in the end, it all inadvertently, lead back to the slimy Chinrat. God I hate that guy! He's another one, not only the character he played, but the real life person, I can't stand either. Anyway, it sounds like Collier is a loose cannon. A missing loose cannon. I don't think Justin will hold any grudge against Eric, especially since he's already aware of the affair. But, Ethan better hide. Because Justin and Brian are going to skin him alive if they see him. But then, Ethan will probably have to wait it out in jail for a while. Unless he can get old cheapskate Novotny to cough up the money, which I doubt. They will have to get Justin to draw a picture of him, with Eric explaining what he looks like with the new 'doo. I'm thinking when it's explained to Justin who Collier is, he might have an idea what the guy looks like.
So Michael is a falldown, vomiting drunk. Not surprised. Both him and Ethan are gonna reek come morning, especially if Ethan has to do some jail time. He better learn gag reflex really quick.
Great update. Well the cat's out of the bag. They just need a surefire way to find and confine Collier. No jail right away, if he's able to pay bail.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Oct 30, 2018 4:51 am Title: Chapter 12
HA! StarBaby, I LOVE the way you think!! You took the most abstract, and probably unremarkable character of the "Ethan Era" and made him relevant in the most vicious way. Great job!! I can't wait to read how all of this plays out. Now we not only have a name, but a lunatic with unlimited funds, even if his parents are supposedly controlling his trust fund. Somehow, all I can think of is that he is like Michael and Lindsay, where he only shows the side of himself that he wants people to believe, yet he's rotten underneath all that sweetness. Should be interesting to see exactly what Collier's family believes when they find out he's stalking Justin.
Michael+Ethan= People who should have been swallowed, instead of birthed. Film at eleven!
Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 30, 2018 4:32 am Title: Chapter 12
Collier was such a pretentious ass; Justin's words were great towards the guy.
Ethan and Michael: what a duo of losers!
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2018 6:40 pm Title: Chapter 11
Michael should get use to the feeling of knowing that all the perks and free access to the best things are closed to him Forever!
As a matter of fact he should get a t-shirt with a big question mark on it and wear it cause no one cares or wants him.
Well except for Ethan who is obviously desperate and use to bad sex with nobodies.
Was really hoping the video would show who approached Gus but life and really good stories are never that easy lol
Ted taking a theater and converting it into offices and studio space is Brilliant, plus him and Blake living upstairs sounds nice and cozy;)
Anyone not willing to come to Pittsburgh and work with Ted is an Idiot not worthy of his time anyway, Ted is way Smart and he knows how to protect his clients, plus it isn't about the money for him it's about making sure his clients are well taken care of so they don't have to worry.
Fantastic Update :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2018 2:11 pm Title: Chapter 11
Love how the band gathers around Ted to help make things happen. Ted's idea is a good one. Michael is not seeing that without the ones who worked for their success he's nothing. Wonder what Ethan is up to.
Date: Oct 27, 2018 1:54 pm Title: Chapter 11
OMG, Michael and Ethan !!!! Now that is a pair that deserve each other. Great idea !!!!
Date: Oct 27, 2018 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 11
Well, too bad the security cameras couldn't give a better view. I have to wonder if the Kiddie Gym will update their security cameras now? They should have a really good one at the door that clearly depicts who's coming and going. And Corey is definitely right about having a camera facing the customer. They could still have one facing the cash register if they felt it so important. Why would they do that anyway? Don't they trust their employees? But if the gym owners could only afford the poor quality ones when they opened the doors, why haven't they upgraded over time?
I was so happy Ted had been working on the old theater. And Brian and Emmett willing to sell their homes to help Ted finance the project, should give a Ted a little faith in himself, as Brian and Emmett surely have.
Was happy to see Michael treated with all the respect he deserved at Babylon. hehe... Woody's wasn't much better. Michael trying to use his "connection" to the band, just goes to show him how important he really was, by not being recognized.
Does Michael even have the $140 the bottle of Jameson's cost? And EEWW, EEWW, EEWW! Michael and Ethan! (But what do two slime's make?) I almost get the feeling Ethan must know who Michael is, and planning on using him to keep tabs on Justin. (As if that will work in his favor!) Or is he looking for a free night of drinking the good stuff? But if Michael plans to drink a lot and he gets drunk, I can't even begin to imagine all the crap that will come out of his mouth. And Lord help him when word gets back to Ted, Brian and Emmett with what I'm sure will spew from his mouth. Has Howard kicked him out, yet?
Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the next chapter.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Oct 26, 2018 11:34 am Title: Chapter 10
Is it me or this story gets even more intresting by the paragraph!!!
Date: Oct 26, 2018 5:37 am Title: Chapter 10
Howard really is a stupid dumbass. I have to wonder how much money he forked over for Michael's bail. And why is he still allowing that leech to stay with him? If Michael won't leave, all Howard has to do is pick up the phone and tell Michael he's calling the cops and having him arrested for trespassing. I would think Michael would leave rather quickly, especially since he was just brought in on similar charges. It appears Old Howie got the shaft. No newspaper is going to want him on their paper ever again, so he better take what is offered by the one he's working for right now, and hope he doesn't once more screw up. Howard commented he "only wrote what he heard". ONLY HEARD. Hello, Howard. Don't you realize you can't print what you Hear? What about facts? What about checking out your source?
Sounds like Brandon is a little vindictive and evil, too. Not quite the, "I just reported the facts" reporter. He screwed up first by not notifying Ted of the article. Then he mentioned Gus during his interview. Maybe if he hadn't mentioned Gus, he might have had a little more than three paragraphs of nothing for his newspaper article.
Vance sure acted like an ass. First by trying to boot out Ted, then telling Ted he'd do his best to destroy them after Brian and Emmett turned Vance down. It seems Vance should know loyalty to his sleazebag of a nephew, was not the way to go. He just should have been upfront with Ted from the beginning. And the way Kip acted with Brian... *shudders* Why does he think Brian would want his ugly ass? And to act that way in the presence of Justin? That's just all kinds of wrong.
By Gus saying that the guy was younger than Kip, and that his hair was lighter, well, Eric would fit that bill.
Thanks for the update. Looking forward to more.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Oct 26, 2018 4:09 am Title: Chapter 9
So we have another player in the mix. Not sure I trust Eric to not be a bit interested in Justin, and that's only saying if Ethan has truly given up on Justin. Not sure there, either. I got the impression Alisha was angrier at Justin for not telling her everything, than she was about the danger of a stalker. But why would she need to know Justin was married? That should have nothing to do with him painting and selling his art.
I was happy to hear about the friendship of Drew and Sierra, and that it was "just a friend, helping out a friend", situation. I liked how close Emmett and Sierra appear to be, too. I found Sierra to be a very good friend when she told Leda she didn't want Drew's story to cast her as "the naive victim, while Emmett is seen as a homewrecker." And Drew saying if he had to choose, that he'd drop his career first in order to have the happiness he has with Emmett, caused my heart to pitter-patter. Drew is such a great guy. Not many NFL players would give up a career for love and happiness.
I think any further interviews should be with only Leda. She's honest and straight-forth. Hmm... Do I sense something brewing between Leda and Sierra? (Neither want marriage...)
Oh Goody... Vance and Kip are coming up to be dealt with. Let's see Vance finagle his way out of trying to get Brandon to not reveal him and Kip.
Sorry I'm late with my reviews. I'm behind a little on my reading, as I've had a couple of busy days.
XOXO ~ Cathy
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2018 1:58 am Title: Chapter 10
Interesting chapter. We have whiney Michael who somehow got out of jail! Then we need to find who it was that Gus talked to since Kip is out. Each chapter answers some questions then gives us more that need answers. Loving this.
Date: Oct 25, 2018 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter. Love how this story is playing out. Great idea for the storyline.
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2018 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 10
Alex was right about Michael and Howie should enjoy listening to the succulenting whine of Michael and enjoy him shoveling food in his mouth while screehing.
Plus now that he is in it is going to take the police to get him out lol
Whatever Brandon and Howie come up with it will ruin them in the news business and they won't get job writing phone books <giggles>
Vanguard must be hemorrhaging money if he is so desperate to hold onto Brian and Emmett??
Brian, Emmett and Ted starting their own company is a good business tactic, it protects them from having to cater to people like Vanguard, plus they can have more creative control while also helping new talent find their own success, and help them navigate this minefield without losing their heads or anything else.
Kip should definitely be watched but the video will hopefully show who approached Gus and who they have to protect Brian and Justin against.
The Mystery Deepens ;)
Date: Oct 25, 2018 2:42 pm Title: Chapter 9
Maybe Leda will help outing Drew the best way possible considering the situation.
Date: Oct 25, 2018 5:00 am Title: Chapter 9
Straight forward and honest., Leda will write the perfect article and scoop both Brandon and Bellwether. Keeping Michael's name out of the article is a smart move.
Ted and Corey just gave Justin's stalker his new info. Eric!
Date: Oct 25, 2018 2:03 am Title: Chapter 9
Great update. Love the whole concept of this story. Terrific writing as usual.
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2018 2:01 am Title: Chapter 9
Anyone is up for suspicion at this point so I am Ruling No One Out just because they are Acting Nonchalant.
Leda has been introduced and Ethan got a mention.
Like that Leda is the one they trusted to tell the Full Story for Emmett, Drew and Sierra, Justin and Brian adding their bit of the story is good too they are showing how United they are.
Making sure Michael's name is nowhere in the article is Smooth, cause it will drive him crazy and he is already being forgotten.
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2018 1:35 am Title: Chapter 9
Now we have Leda and Ethan. My money is on Eric.
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2018 12:50 am Title: Chapter 8
Bellwether, Gardner, Kip and Michael the soon to be the fourth forgotten stooge, all the idiots have been identified now to see who would use a child to find out about Brian.
Brandon went into the interview hoping for dirt and got the tables turned against him by Justin, Brian and Emmett who made sure they controlled the narrative while giving out enough to dangle against The Mindless Wonder and The Huh? who think they have a chance with Brian <eye roll>
Corey will find out what he needs to protect his clients while they do what they need to protect their public personas.
Did Michael bail himself out?
Did Deb change the locks?
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter:)
Date: Oct 24, 2018 6:27 pm Title: Chapter 8
Brandon, Kip, Connor and Gardner: what a bad combination! And Howard is there too!
The news are getting in the air and we will see how people will react. I fear the worst will be for Drew.
[Report This]Date: Oct 24, 2018 11:53 am Title: Chapter 8
I love how you intergrate the cast from the series into this story. How did he learn about Gus? How is Gardner involved in outing the marriage?