Date: Nov 17, 2018 11:23 am Title: Chapter 16
I didn't realize part of a bodyguard's job description included babysitting. And for no really good reason. Good thing Mel walked in on Lindsay's conversation with Deb and heard it from Lindsay's mouth about the affair. With. A. Man. Otherwise, I have to wonder how forthcoming Lindsay would have been. It would serve her lying, cheating ass if Mel asked her to leave for a while. And yes, this situation could prove troublesome for Gus.
It's so refreshing when Deb doesn't fall for Michael's bullshit, instead of standing up for him and condoning everything he does. Although I enjoy stories like that, like I said, this is refreshing. Apologize for giving birth to him? You Go Deb!
My-oh-my, but Collier has bit off more than he can chew. First he's got the idiot running around, and telling the Peterson's he's Brian's best friend, is not going to make brownie points with Brian if that tidbit of information gets back to him Then Collier staging his accidental meeting with the Peterson's, might blow up in his face when Mommy Maria comes to Pittsburgh, if Jennifer should decide to have a little chat with her when Maria gets to town.
Good update. Looking forward to the next chapter.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Nov 17, 2018 7:40 am Title: Chapter 16
Now that Lindsey's secret is out, she should go back to her family and make a point.
Date: Nov 17, 2018 12:49 am Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter. Love this story.

Date: Nov 17, 2018 12:21 am Title: Chapter 16
Deb the voice of reason. I like. Michael doesn't know how to manipulate, maybe Collier can fix that. I like that Mel is talking to Lindsay rather then at Lindsay.

Date: Nov 16, 2018 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 16
Well Melanie knows about the affair where they from here is their choice just so long as Gus isn't hurt all will be good.
Maria Hartline is coming to town maybe she would like a front row seat to her son's behavior so they can stop pretending it is just a crush that went a little too far <eye roll>
Nancy and Lynette want all the notables at this wedding perhaps they should be careful what they wish for?
Collier turned Michael into a low rate Justin who still can't get any respect, it will take more than just dropping Brian's name for people to look at him, as for the ugly Justin clone look Collier is really off his rocker if he thinks Michael will be able to pull that off.
Deb meeting Justin's family went very well they will probably have a lot of fun getting to know one another. :)
Date: Nov 16, 2018 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 16
I get so excited every time I see an update from you and I'm never disappointed. I have read and re-read all of your stories and love them all. I think this one has the potential to become one my favourites. It's a wonderful read so far. thanks for doing what you do and the hours of enjoyment I have gotten from getting lost in the worlds you create x0x
Date: Nov 13, 2018 5:58 pm Title: Chapter 15
I can't wait to see how the Peterson will try to sneak into Justin's family.
Michael as a blond; that must be something nobody can forget! I bet Collier will have a nervous breakdown when he will try to get Michael to behave like a WASP. Hopefully he will be too difficult and he will have to find another accomplice.
Date: Nov 13, 2018 3:47 pm Title: Chapter 15
another great chapter!
Date: Nov 13, 2018 12:36 am Title: Chapter 15
I think Vangard Music is going to be out-of-business before too long, and Vance is gonna see the results of trying to shut Ted out. Serves him right for sticking up for that fucktard nephew of his.
Lord I would love to be a fly on the wall when Mel gets home to talk to Lindsay. I have to wonder how forthcoming she will be. If she knows what's good for her, she will tell her EVERYTHING, and then she better have a really good excuse ready why she didn't give everyone a head's up. And Nancy's try at sensationalism is going to blow up in her face. I want front row seats to that event too.
And dear lord. the cast of Dumb and Dumber just changed from Jim and Jeff to Michael and Collier. Those two imbecilic children, are going to get their asses handed to them when they try to show up at the country club. There is no way Collier will be able to change Michael's idiotic ways of eating. First, he will have problems learning how to hold a fork, as he's held his fork that way since he learned how to eat (Old habits die hard) and second, can he really learn to swallow before speaking? What's the old adage? A leopard can't change it's spots? Besides all that, Michael is the type of person who opens mouth and inserts foot. And Collier sounds like a real psychopath when it comes to attaching himself onto another person. He's definitely ready for the loony bin.
I cannot in my wildest imagination picture Michael being able to carry off the blond, cargo-wearing twink that is Justin. Doesn't the Peterson's know who he is? On second thought, they probably never bothered getting to know someone so beneath them. But what happens when Lindsay has to show up for one of these events, and Michael is there imposing as a blonde?
Loving this story, and looking forward to your next chapter.
XOXO ~ Cathy

Date: Nov 12, 2018 7:16 pm Title: Chapter 15
This ought to be fun, especially if Michael can't clean up his act.

Date: Nov 12, 2018 6:15 pm Title: Chapter 15
Lindsay should just confess and accept the consequences cause she is already in enough trouble.
The Petersons are about to learn how True Wasps Sting cause Taylors and Taylor-Kinneys are not playing their stupid games.
Michael blonde and trying to be cultured is going to be a Laugh Riot, the second he opens his mouth the illusion Colier is trying to cultivate will be shattered. (Collier's Parents sound like Idiots and that idiocy will cost them)
Won't they all be surprised when The Taylors don't show at these functions or do and snub them in front of everyone? <wicked grin>
Date: Nov 12, 2018 5:19 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oh, Collier and Mikey are a perfect pair. Stupid and stupider!!!!!! Love this story and your great writing.
Date: Nov 10, 2018 5:15 am Title: Chapter 14
Wow! Wow! Wow! LOTS happening in this chapter. You must have had a blast writing the conversation between Michael and Collier. It was like, Okay, who can be the dumbest idiot. If Michael thinks he's gonna outsmart Collier, that's his first mistake. But his biggest mistake is him thinking if he can get Brian alone, that he can convince him he's making a mistake by not being with Michael. There's a few holes in that. One, Brian doesn't want anything to do with you, Michael, and two, he'd never give you the chance to be alone with him. And if Collier and Michael think they can show up at these elite events, I hope they realize that there will be an abundant amount of security, and they won't get anywhere near any of them, probably not even in the door.
Lindsay sure has herself in a fine mess. I think she's on her way to losing not only her wife, but her son, too. (Lindsay, that will include any status and clout you may have right now, plus financial gain.) Brian will crucify her. He will probably end up taking Gus with him to the Bahamas. If Lindsay was smart (I know that's probably not possible), she would open up to Mel and confess everything to her. Then proceed to tell her what Nancy and Lynette are trying to do. The best form of attack, is to let them know everything beforehand. I hope she learned that from the wedding announcement showing up in the paper. But I'm sure she will do the exact opposite, and try to sneak Gus to functions with her family. But Justin or his family will never put in an appearance.
I'm so happy for Daphne. She gets to marry the man of her dreams, (without all the hubbub), and she has her Dream Star singing for her. I hope she can keep her mind on her husband and not the man singing.
LOVED this chapter. thanks for posting.
XOXO ~ Cathy

Date: Nov 10, 2018 2:02 am Title: Chapter 14
Lindsay walked into this situation by opening her mouth besides her legs and now Mommy and Sister Dear are going to put Lindsay on the proverbial street corner and work her Ass until they get what they want which means she will never be Free.
If Lindsay was smart she would spill everything to Mel and Brian but when has Lindsay ever been smart?
Them using Gus and doing that interview means they have have crossed a line and there is no coming back because Brian, Justin and The Taylors are going to Eradicate Them!!
I wish I could work up some sympathy but my supply ran out and a new shipment isn't due until next year <eye roll>
Michael and Colier are a match made in Hell and with this stupid plan they should be there shortly, but hopefully it will help keep Colier out in the open so they can block him hiding.
A private island and a wedding sounds like Paradise to me :)
Ben and Sean taking baby steps is good.
Date: Nov 10, 2018 12:16 am Title: Chapter 14
OH, wow, Mikey finds a fellow idiot and Lindsay just keeps making trouble. Great chapter. Terrific story.
Date: Nov 09, 2018 9:32 pm Title: Chapter 14
OMG!!!!! THE FUCKING NUTCASES HAVE HOOKED UP!!! AND THAT FUCKING BITCH!!! I wish Lindsay would tell Nancy, Lynette and drunk-sounding Guttersnipe Brandy to go fuck themselves, but knowing the weak-wiiled, easily-influenced, eternally-victimized Lindsay, I highly DOUBT she will! I can only hope Jennifer sees through the ploy and freezes Lindsay's family and HER out!! Lindsay is proving Brian and Corey's point about hwr being untrustworthy to the letter. There's no coming back from that!
Can't wait for MORE!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle

Date: Nov 09, 2018 9:12 pm Title: Chapter 14
Michael is going to be a big problem. Good that all the members of both bands want relationships. I hope they get their wishes. Lindsay unfortunately has sent the ball in motion and may not be able to stop the disaster that will be her life.
Date: Nov 09, 2018 7:53 pm Title: Chapter 14
Two different fronts will come to Brian and Justin: they better be far away for some time; if it's on a private beach, that's even better.
Michael and Collier are good together: talking about their obsession without listening to the other. Perfect combo of nutcases.
Lynette and Nancy are diabolical and Lindsay is quite in an impasse.
Date: Nov 05, 2018 12:20 am Title: Chapter 13
I loved how protective Brian was of Justin. Extra security protection, wanting to annihilate Collier if Brian finds him first. Speaking of Collier, he sounds like a loose cannon, and definitely needs finding ASAP.
I'm thinking Lindsay won't be happy when told the new rules. I just hope she doesn't do something stupid in retaliation, and subsequently put Gus in harm's way. If that happens, Brian will surely kill her. Lindsay doesn't even need Brian and Justin's new phone numbers. If she needs to contact Brian about Gus, she can contact Ted, (or Corey) and they can get a hold of Brian.ut, i don't see that being a problem.
Sounds like Landon was a good person to leave behind. How inappropriate to suggest to Justin's father that him and Justin be alone and he'd make Justin forget all about Brian. *sleazeball* And good riddance.
Kip is just all kinds of nasty. Kudos to Ben for calling security on him. I think that should have been brought to Ted's attention, and not simply to Vance. How did his ugly ass get access to Ben's room, anyway?
Dear, sweet Ben needs a love interest. Is Sean available? I know it's probably not the best grounds for a love interest being he's a fan, but he seems like a nice guy. Besides, Ben will have Travis to keep Sean in line if need be. But I don't think Sean will be a problem.
Great update. Looking forward to more.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Nov 03, 2018 7:38 pm Title: Chapter 13
we need more michael bullshit !!! pleaaaaaaaaaaseeee

Date: Nov 03, 2018 4:29 pm Title: Chapter 13
Blake and Teddy are going to enjoy time together. All the band memebers will end up happy except for stalkers.
Date: Nov 03, 2018 11:22 am Title: Chapter 13
Lindsay is definitely going to be pissed when she finds out that all her instant access to Brian is going to be blocked from here on out. Can anyone say Mikey, Jr.? And if Collier should find out who she is.... No doubt there is major trouble on the rise since all the idiotic, but apparently, smart bastard has to do is research what ties there are to Brian because the stupid, jealous, unreasonably-smug woman opened her mouth to prove that she was better than Lynette.
I can't help but wonder how Collier is escaping all detection. I mean, it's possible that his family now has control of his trust fund, but that woudn't stop them from 'helping' him, since they didn't believe that he was off his rocker before, would it? If his family is as well-off as on par with Justin's, that would mean they would possibly have more than one car lying around. And with a steady stream of cash, like an allowance from his trust, there's really no telling where he could be, or who he might be following around. Or even what he would do to draw Justin out of hiding!! Yep, my anxiety is up on this storyline!
LOVED the relationship between Ben and Blake. It kind of reminds me of the same vibe that Brian and Emmett have. Ben definitely needs someone steady in his life, if for no other reason than to prevent the Michael-induced haze he must have been in when he screwed the towel boy...Still having 'YUCK' and 'BLECH' moments on that one. UGH! Hopefully, the instant-attraction to Sean will pan out well for the both of them.
As for the business of Xtreme Misfits staying with Vanguard, based on Gardner's idiocy and Kip's antics, I certainly don't see them staying with that company. Which is a very good thing, because it's evident that Vance doesn't have the best interests of his artists at heart, but that of his sister. Well let her make up for the money Vance is about to lose from his two big moneymakers going off on their own. I wonder if the guys still own the copyrights to the songs they've written... Hmm, if they do, Vance is definitely about to lose big, because each band will lose NOTHING by not signing with Vanguard again. Owning those copyrights will ensure that the songwriters will still make money from the royalties each time their music is played. Vance has definitely lost big time!
Excellent Chapter, StarBaby. Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Nov 03, 2018 6:14 am Title: Chapter 13
Is Ben gonna let Sean do all the work or will he start the "game"?

Date: Nov 03, 2018 3:28 am Title: Chapter 13
With every new chapter I pulled further into this Fantastic Story and I enjoy waiting for the next update :)
Date: Nov 03, 2018 2:21 am Title: Chapter 13
Great update. Love this story.