Date: Oct 06, 2018 6:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nicely done! Really enjoyed it!
Deb
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. I hadn't done a short story on here before. It was fun.
[Report This]Date: Oct 06, 2018 8:45 am Title: Chapter 1
It was intense!! Thank you for this moment of Brian's thoughts in this ambulance
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: Oct 06, 2018 8:37 am Title: Chapter 1
I think it's the first time I read about what could have happened in the ambulance. Thank you for filling the gap.
Author's Response:
Love this kind of stuff.
[Report This]Date: Oct 06, 2018 1:21 am Title: Chapter 1
An excellant look of that period of time.
Author's Response:
Love the psycology end of stuff.
Date: Oct 05, 2018 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was intense. All the feels!!! Thank you for writing this!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. I kinda love the drama and the psychology of the characters. I do it in my other stories too.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. I kinda love the drama and the psychology of the characters. I do it in my other stories too.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. I kinda love the drama and the psychology of the characters. I do it in my other stories too.
Date: Oct 05, 2018 9:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so heartwrenching. You captured Brian's thoughts so completely. Thank you for giving us a little insight to the workings of Brian's mind as he goes on that horrendous, heart stopping moment of being in that ambulance.
Hugs, Cathy
Author's Response:
If you enjoyed it you would probably like my other stories too. I love the psycology side.