[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2019 12:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Poor David. He's had it bad for a good well. At least he feels that Brian should know what his 'best friends' are saying behind his back.
[Report This]Date: Sep 10, 2018 9:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great continuation...can’t wait to see future installments of this series. And to see what you have in store for David, Lindsay and whiny Michael. lol Thanks!
Date: Sep 04, 2018 2:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh this was great... but that ending makes me think there is more to come???? I hope so, I can't wait to see what Petty and Jealous think they can do to ruin someone else's happines...
Poor David... I never liked him, but damn, that's awful for him.
Date: Aug 30, 2018 6:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Date: Aug 30, 2018 2:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Fairy Tale meeting and current life. I'm glad that he connected with everyone, and how they truly liked him. Mel's apology was great to hear. I actually felt sorry for David's demise. Although, I never liked him in canon, You brought him in as a character that seems humbled from his mistakes. Pretty Tea Cafe... is apparently in Pittsburgh? But, why is David in Pittsburgh? How will he support himself and Hank? Unless, he got a settlement from the car accident, or Hank will inherit from his mother? The Dumb Duo just never know when to be discrete. David to the rescue? Good...
Date: Aug 29, 2018 8:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love how the ‘family’ are just spectators in Brian and Justin’s life yay I Do hope that David does follow through and forwarn Brian about the whiny two
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2018 6:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting bringing David into the picture along with some back story of his life after Michael, feel so bad for him and Hank the tragedies just piled on suddenly, but perhaps if he willing to help Brian and Justin his life can look up, one good deed could lead to others?
Mel acknowledging that she really misjudged Brian and her apologizing to him at long last is the beginning of a wonderful new start for both of them.
Michael and Lindsay complaining in public is not surprising they have to make sure everyone knows how hurt they are, too bad they never realized that their loud voices carry <eye roll>
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter:)
Date: Aug 29, 2018 5:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey Sandy! Absolutely wonderful addition to this series! The backstory of Brian and Justin was simply amazing. I honestly can't wait for Lindsay and Michael to find out that they couldn't be more wrong about 'this Justin'. The fact that they are, once again, judging people by their own actions, behaviors and standards, is very telling. I can't wait for David to get the real scoop from Brian himself!
Strangely, I feel a bit sorry for David. I never really liked his character. I found him to be arrogant and egotistical. But upon studying the circumstances in which he was a part of Michael's life, and therefore the periphery of the gang's collective lives, I always thought that he may have had some redeeming quality about him. Jealousy does strange things to people and distorts the reality of a situation by its very nature. So with that theory in mind, I thought that David's view of Brian was completely colored by Michael's hero-worshipping 3D glasses (the 1980's kind). It will be interesting to see how he acts towards Brian now- whether it will be based upon his own experience with Kevin, or based upon the fact that he knows Michael and Lindsay's own envious, cock-blocking natures.
Oh, I'm so excited for the next installment!!
HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2018 4:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
So Cameron is going to be a good guy? Love the look at Brian and Justin's past.
Date: Aug 29, 2018 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
II like how everyone is happy for them. And with them explaining their reasoning as to why she wasn't, why they all weren't at the wedding gave her no reason to complain about not being there. Mel apologizing for her past behavior was priceless and long over due.
Geeze Dr. Dave has had a streak of bad luck hasn't he. What's he doing back in Pittsburgh?
Can't wait for more.
Date: Aug 29, 2018 4:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great chapter. Love this story. Always love when Brian & Justin are happy.