Date: Oct 03, 2020 6:04 am Title: Chapter 16 - Everything
This was a great story, thank you for sharing it with us!!ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Date: Aug 26, 2019 4:05 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Everything
Love it
Date: Jun 26, 2019 2:34 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Everything
Just love your story. I see there a 5 off them now and there will be more. You are a great writer
Date: Jun 26, 2019 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 4: "Stain"
Hope Joan and Jack rot in hell
Date: Jun 26, 2019 11:54 am Title: Chapter 1: "The Words Left Unsaid"
darn Jennifer and Daphne
Date: May 21, 2019 7:49 pm Title: Chapter 1: "The Words Left Unsaid"
~Constructive Con-Crit~
Your writing is impeccable and very emotionally moving. It is very hard for me to read something that is too far OOC, and this fic would fit into that category for me. The premise is a good one, but I will have to save this read for a rainy day. I would use the tag of OOC in this, because I really haven't been able to pick up on any of canon Brian. Justin was a little more in character, he always did have a need to take care of Brian (that is, if Brian would let him) Please don't read this review as negative, because it's not. Many people have commented at how great they find this story. You write wonderfully and I look forward to reading more of your fics. This story is just not my cup of tea, but thank you for posting it.
~Quinn
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2019 2:48 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Everything
Great ending! Brian is getting better every day and Justin is there to help him move forward.
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2019 2:16 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Truth
That's surprising and maybe good for Justin to have his father alive.
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2019 1:57 pm Title: Chapter 14 - What Perfection Is
Hot mess and Brian is basking in it!
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2019 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 12: "Lament"
There is hope, thanks to Cynthia.
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2019 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 11: "Affect, Effect, Infect"
Maybe Claire could help and show Brian that he didn't inherit bad genes.
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2019 11:27 am Title: Chapter 10: "My Only Decision"
Brian really should talk to his shrink because I doubt that his disabilities could be transmitted to his child/children.
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2019 11:00 am Title: Chapter 9: "Ch...Ch...Cha...Changes"
Brian is going to freak out big time!
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2019 10:46 am Title: Chapter 8: "What I Can Never Give"
Jennifer is awful here and Daphne isn't better.
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2019 9:58 am Title: Chapter 7: "Losing It"
They are getting better at dealing with Brian's OCD. How will Brian react once he will see that there is no condom?
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2019 9:34 am Title: Chapter 6: "Stronger"
They didn't lose time! Hot and sweaty mess.
I find it weird when Justin calls Brian "baby".
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2019 8:26 am Title: Chapter 5: “Cosmic Lover Pre-assignedâ€
Justin is taking matters in hand without second thoughts, but who wouldn't anyway?
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2019 7:31 am Title: Chapter 4: "Stain"
Powerful and disturbing: what a childhood! How to mark someone for life, both inside and outside. It's criminal.
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2019 6:46 am Title: Chapter 3: "Defaming"
Justin is a fighter and maybe he could instill some into Brian.
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2019 6:33 am Title: Chapter 2: "Brian's Box"
Intriguing Brian: so weak and lost! Glad he has Cynthia with him.
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2019 6:19 am Title: Chapter 1: "The Words Left Unsaid"
Great beginning! Jennifer and Daphne sound like Nancy Peterson in this chapter. Poor Justin!
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2019 7:27 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Everything
Very OOC for both characters but still well written. TAG
Date: May 01, 2019 8:59 am Title: Chapter 16 - Everything
it's was very hard to see Brian so vulnerable but it's a great story about love and trust. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2019 3:07 am Title: Chapter 16 - Everything
Love how everything turned out. It's disappointing to find out that Daphne wasn't his best friend, but Brian and the twins more than made up for it.
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2019 2:33 am Title: Chapter 15 - Truth
Now that was an interesting twist. A good one.