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Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2018 11:34 am Title: Chapter 6: "Stronger"

Hot hot hot!!! Love bottom Brian, even OCD Brian! 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2018 1:26 am Title: Chapter 6: "Stronger"

HOT just HOT !!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2018 1:06 am Title: Chapter 5: “Cosmic Lover Pre-assigned”

Wow, what a fantastic chapter.  Could see and almost feel every moment of it.  Great story and wonderful ideas.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2018 12:44 am Title: Chapter 5: “Cosmic Lover Pre-assigned”

LOL nice to meet you, Mr. Kinney made me chuckle.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2018 12:28 am Title: Chapter 4: "Stain"

FUCKING, JOAN KINNEY, I knew that evil witch and Jack must have had something to do with his behavior. The poor guy.

I suffer from OCD too, nothing as bad as this, but I can 100% relate to how he would be feeling, when something isn't in your control it is the most terrifying feeling.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2018 12:19 am Title: Chapter 3: "Defaming"

Cynthia is so kick ass in this. It makes me wish we'd seen more of their work relationship in the show because I do think they were fond of each other... although Brian would never have told her that LOL.

I knew it had something to do with his childhood, that breaks my heart.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2018 5:47 pm Title: Chapter 5: “Cosmic Lover Pre-assigned”

Now that's a way to meet someone. 

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2018 4:20 pm Title: Chapter 2: "Brian's Box"

It's so weird seeing Brian so vulnerable, and I hope we learn why he is the way he is. I have a feeling his childhood is deeply connected to this. I love that Cynthia is not only his assistant but his childhood best friend. There is something reassuring about that.

YOU CAN DO IT, BRIAN!

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2018 9:26 pm Title: Chapter 4: "Stain"

Never have I felt that parents should never be parents except here.  I just want to wring Joanie's neck.  But it looks like Justin arrived just in time.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2018 8:34 pm Title: Chapter 4: "Stain"

Omg Brian is a hot mess. He really needs therapy and medication. I hope he goes, does he? Wow, I feel so bad for him, it's heartbreaking. Holy shit! Justin pulls up, finds him there and hugs him? Jesus, Brian must feel like a child, the poor thing.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2018 8:09 pm Title: Chapter 4: "Stain"

Wow, wow, wow,  Powerful chapter and powerful writing.  No wonder Brian has problems.  Parents like that should be punished for the harm they do.  Let's hope that Justin can heal him.

Reviewer: sandid Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2018 3:17 pm Title: Chapter 3: "Defaming"

Well, this is different.  A shy, anxious Brian.  What will you do next?

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2018 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 1: "The Words Left Unsaid"

I LOVE a good AU, and it's interesting to see Brian as a shy guy. I am interested to see where that goes. I admit I don't like this Jennifer or Daphne though, and I hope they lighten up a little.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2018 9:51 pm Title: Chapter 3: "Defaming"

A vulnerable Brain is so different.  I hope Justin can understand.  Please handle them carefully. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2018 8:45 pm Title: Chapter 3: "Defaming"

So they will finally get to meet.  I await with bated breath to see how it turns out.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2018 7:22 pm Title: Chapter 3: "Defaming"

Oh, wow, this story is getting better and better.  Just love it.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2018 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 2: "Brian's Box"

Wow! This is wicked different, Brian with no confidence or drive...wow! He's an emotional wreck, poor thing! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2018 4:14 am Title: Chapter 2: "Brian's Box"

This is totally interesting.  A Brian with panic attacks.  I want to learn more.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2018 3:58 am Title: Chapter 1: "The Words Left Unsaid"

Very interesting and different.  I am disappointed in Daphne and Jennifer but that only underscored the diffences and makes for a better story.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2018 12:59 am Title: Chapter 2: "Brian's Box"

Wow, this is really good.  Can't wait to read more of this wonderful story.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2018 12:48 am Title: Chapter 1: "The Words Left Unsaid"

Wow, great chapter for a new story.  Glad it is complete and will be updated regularly.  Off to read chapter 2.

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