




Date: May 01, 2019 2:07 am Title: Chapter 14 - What Perfection Is
Brian has come a long way.




Date: May 01, 2019 1:54 am Title: Chapter 1: "The Words Left Unsaid"
An interesting plot for our boys. I enjoyed this story immensely. It kept me on an emotional roller coaster and on the edge of my seat.
Can’t wait to read more from this writer! However I do agree with the completeness of this AU. We are all broken and a tad bit crazy...not everything can be cured, nor does it need to be even in a fictional world. Embracing and celebrating our imperfections should be what drives us not perfection.





Date: May 01, 2019 12:39 am Title: Chapter 16 - Everything
Wonderful story. Great ending. Fantastic writing.





Date: Apr 30, 2019 8:36 pm Title: Chapter 13 - To Overcome
It's about time that Brian stepped up to the plate. I know he can't help what he does, but he's trying.

Date: Sep 08, 2018 12:54 am Title: Chapter 12: "Lament"
Yay, Brian might be coming around. I think he'll be a great dad.
Date: Sep 07, 2018 8:43 pm Title: Chapter 12: "Lament"
Oh this is getting even better. Such a great story. Don't know if I mentioned that I love happy endings!!! Hint, hint LOL
Date: Sep 04, 2018 9:44 am Title: Chapter 11: "Affect, Effect, Infect"
Wow that was so intense and sadly life for some children today. It must be so difficult to move beyond that abuse and trauma

Date: Sep 04, 2018 1:21 am Title: Chapter 11: "Affect, Effect, Infect"
I'm thinking the damage was done before Cynthia's father managed to get him away. It's nice to know that Claire didn't know. Poor Justin. What is Jennifer thinking?
Date: Sep 03, 2018 5:58 pm Title: Chapter 11: "Affect, Effect, Infect"
Wow, such a powerful chapter. Never could understand abusing a child, but that goes on way too much. So well written. Out came the tissue box.
Date: Aug 26, 2018 11:11 am Title: Chapter 10: "My Only Decision"
Oh wow I didn’t expect Brian to jump for joy but omg over reacting already lol chill pill Brian listen to Justin
Date: Aug 25, 2018 6:36 pm Title: Chapter 10: "My Only Decision"
What a difficult chapter. Tissue time. Since I have complete faith in you giving us a happy ending, I will endure the toment and pain. Great writing.

Date: Aug 25, 2018 5:22 pm Title: Chapter 10: "My Only Decision"
This is painful, but Justin is right Brian can't know. Frankly I think this might even be good for him.

Date: Aug 19, 2018 1:27 am Title: Chapter 9: "Ch...Ch...Cha...Changes"
Once you hear a child inside you, I don't see how you can do anything but love it.
Date: Aug 18, 2018 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 9: "Ch...Ch...Cha...Changes"
Wow it’s becoming real for Justin it will be interesting to see if and when Brian is told his response
Date: Aug 18, 2018 7:13 pm Title: Chapter 9: "Ch...Ch...Cha...Changes"
Great chapter. Now the drama begins. Poor Justin, but he is strong and loves Brian so let's hope that is enough.

Date: Aug 16, 2018 8:40 pm Title: Chapter 8: "What I Can Never Give"
Jennifer and Daphne aren't playing with a full deck. I can't wait to find out what Jon tells Justin. I have an idea but I could be wrong.
Date: Aug 15, 2018 8:46 am Title: Chapter 8: "What I Can Never Give"
Justin’s pregnant lol the boys are going to get all angsty over this lol
Date: Aug 14, 2018 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 8: "What I Can Never Give"
Okay, Justin is a very intelligent man, he doesn't realize he's pregnant? With the weight gain & vomiting, come on! Brian is going to freak!
Date: Aug 14, 2018 8:36 pm Title: Chapter 8: "What I Can Never Give"
Great chapter. I think we all know where this is going !!!! Hope they can get thru this ok. Love this story.
Date: Aug 14, 2018 8:22 pm Title: Chapter 8: "What I Can Never Give"
Please don’t leave us hanging like that....I really can’t think of anything else other than that to say. Cliffhangers do me in every time.
Date: Aug 10, 2018 4:26 pm Title: Chapter 7: "Losing It"
Great update. Hope Brian doesn't freak too badly when he realizes what happened.
Date: Aug 10, 2018 4:00 pm Title: Chapter 7: "Losing It"
I adore this story so far. I love a good AU vulnerable Brian story as long as it is as well written as this. Can't wait for the next update! ðŸ˜

Date: Aug 10, 2018 3:03 pm Title: Chapter 7: "Losing It"
Opps! What will happen when they realize no condom?
Date: Aug 10, 2018 2:32 pm Title: Chapter 7: "Losing It"
Did you write they didn't notice the lack of protection? Did they do it raw?

Date: Aug 10, 2018 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 6: "Stronger"
Is there anyway for Brian to get better with Justin's help. Nice scene!