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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2018 4:39 pm Title: Chapter 14

Interesting scene with Debbie and Michael.



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We'll see how their relationship will evolve in future chapters...

More will be up soon!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2018 2:25 pm Title: Chapter 14

Great chapter.  Could just see Brian holding Luke so gently.  A tiny Justin is so cute.  Now as for the idiot of Pittsburgh.  Wish I could give him a slap, too.  So glad that everyone else is seeing just what a nasty creature he is.



Author's Response:

Yes, who wouldn't love to have a tiny Justin? I wouldn't complain :P 

It's about time that people start to see Michael for the idiot and jerk he is. The Brian and Mikey show is definitely over!

More will be up soon :) 

Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2018 1:34 pm Title: Chapter 14

Hi! Great chapter! I really love this new side of Brian and that he rather stays at home with his "baby sunshine" (that nickname so cute and beautiful by the way) than going out... That reminded me of this leather ball in S1 when he left Gus with Justin. I found his behavior in this situation so pathetic and it made me really sad. So, I really love this matured and grown-up Brian. Still so sad, that there isn't Justin by his side... He would have loved to see this Brian... They could have been so good together... Although there still enough demons left to fight and enough issues to deal with. I'm curious, but you don't have to spoil anything... There is still the therapy to come, but if I understood right, this just comes up after Lindsay tried to kidnap Luke...

If it wouldn't be so sad than one could laugh about the way you let Michael act... "What baby?" These things Michael is saying are so cruel and hurtful and I'm so glad that Brian finally has enough of his shit. He's just so stupid and pathetic. And it seems as if Ben slowly also realises this. Warmest regard!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I hated the leather ball scene and it made me cringe :/ I guess it made sense with who Brian was at the time, but now... years later, after everything he has been through and after having carried Luke himself and having given birth to him himself, he is a different man. Good for him!

Yes, I am sure Justin would have loved this "new" Brian and they could have been really happy as a family together. If only Brian hadn't been such a fool about his pregnancy :/

Yes. the therapy will only come later in the story, after the kidnapping and the custody battle for Gus. Not really a spoiler as Brian himself mentioned the timeline in the other story, so all good ;)

The Brian and Mikey show is finally over - and if you ask me, that was long overdue. I am glad Brian finally sees Michael for the jerk he is...

More will be up soon :)

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2018 3:30 am Title: Chapter 14

VERY GOOD CHAPTER!!!  No disappointment at all.  Thank you for the Debbie smack-down. Seeing that I read the other story first, and knowing that Brian and Deb are going to go through a rough patch, I can't help but wonder, "Why"?, as it's clear Debbie doesn't support Michael, right now.  Seeing Michael not yet supporting Brian or Luke, and not giving Brian a gift for the baby, am I surprised?  ABSOLUTELY NOT! Thank you for the quick update...



Author's Response:

I am glad you liked the chapter :)

We'll find out what will happen to Brian's and Debbie's relationship and how Michael might be involved in that...

More will be up soon :) 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2018 1:45 am Title: Chapter 14

How sweet of Ben to give Brian books for Luke.  How stupid of Mikey to think Brian would give his son away. 



Author's Response:

Michael is an idiot :( It's about time everyone realises that!

More will be up soon!

Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 7:26 pm Title: Chapter 13

Hi! This is really what I've expected, but it's so hard to read how Lindsay behaves and how she calls herself "Mommy" in front of Luke and how she thinks she couls replace Justin. That bitch! Arggghh! I'm just so glad, that Brian discovers this at an early stage so Luke didn't got used to Lindsay too much. What a terrible thought... So, Mel... Hm, too bad that Brian didn't call Mel. Would be interesting to discover what really happened between them... And now that Lindsay realizes that she will never get from Brian what she was hoping for, she has to change her sick plans. She's probably telling Mel some lies to make up for them. But I still can't believe that Mel is involved in the kidnapping plans. I could imagine that Lindsay will now tell Mel lies about Brian, what a bad father he is an so on... It remains exciting, but as I said before, I'm soooo glad Brian recognized what Lindsay was trying to do. And I'm feeling sad for Gus. No parent should be using her or his own kid like that. Warmest regards!



Author's Response:

Yes, this certainly was Lindsay at her best with all her delusional ideas...

We'll see if Brian will go and contact Melanie or not. Would probably be really interesting to hear from her.

Yes, I feel bad for Gus, too. Poor guy - I am really putting him through a lot :( 

As always, thanks for your kind review! More will be up soon :) 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 4:11 pm Title: Chapter 13

The parts with Gus are amazing. The parts with Linday were predictable, but she didn't lose her time. Too bad Brian did stop calling Mel; it would have been very interesting knowing her POV.



Author's Response:

I just love Gus <3 

We'll see if Brian will go and contact Melanie or not. 

More will be up soon :) 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 12:34 am Title: Chapter 13

Lindsay is on her way out.  Goody.



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It's about time if you ask me ;) 

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2018 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 13

Hey... Just recently read this, same as your other Back for Good story.  I'm enjoying this one much more.  Lindsay needs a good smacking... although, I really think Brian should touch base with Melanie...  Thanks for updating as often as you do...



Author's Response:

Hi, I am glad you're enjoying this story :)

We'll see about Melanie and if Brian will actually contact her or not. 

More will be up soon :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2018 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 13

Great chapter.  So happy Brian is seeing the real Lindsay.  What a delusional Waspy Witch she is.



Author's Response:

Indeed, indeed - couldn't agree more!

More will be up soon :)

Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2018 5:15 pm Title: Chapter 12

Great, amazing chapter! I love how you described Brian giving birth to Luke, how he shows his emotions and his love, how he thinks about Justin... But these are also all the moments which are forever lost to Justin - and that's what makes this chapter also so damned terrible sad. And Jennifer... I still can't accept her apologies and explanations for not telling Justin. All the others... I somehow can understand, but Jennifer, I don't know why I feel that way... Maybe that's why: I think you have characterized all the characters of the show so fabulously and I could imagine them all to act just like you let them. But not Jennifer. I just can't imagine her not telling Justin something so important (although you have given her the right reasons).... and it's your story, but in my opinion, it would have been better if she woulnd't had been included in the whole betrayal.

I could kill Lindsay for playing mother and wife... And I asked myself how Mel dealed with this. She stays away... Why? Because she's working? She could have joined them on their visitations to Brian. But I'm sure, Lindsay would have had something against it... That bitch! She's trying to take Justin's place... i'm very curious how this continues and when Brian will start to realise what Lindsay tries to accomplish... Thanks for sharing and warmest regards!



Author's Response:

I can see your point when it comes to Jennifer, but I wanted to include her in the betrayal, so it would be a complete betrayal for Justin when he came back from New York. I like drama and angst and wanted to go all the way on this story ;) 

As for her character here - she herself got married too young and got children instead of focusing on her career and herself and she didn't want Justin to make the same mistake. Obviously that would have implied that Brian would have treated Justin the way Craig had treated her, but that's another story. She wanted Justin to have a chance to further his career and his art and in the end agreed with Brian that having a baby might have shifted his focus away from his art.

Yes, why does Mel stay away? Good question! We'll hear more about Mel and Lindsay in upcoming chapters, but... lets just say things aren't going as smoothly in Canada as they might want everyone to believe. There will come a point when Brian will grow suspicious of Mel's absence as well and it will be discussed.

As will Lindsay's role in Luke's life ;) 

Thanks for your comment! More will be up soon :) 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2018 2:51 pm Title: Chapter 12

Great news! Until now, the situation is smooth. I guess Lindsay will start trying to manage Luke as if she was the mother.



Author's Response:

We'll find out about Lindsay and her intentions soon :)
Thanks for your comment! More will be up soon :D 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2018 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 12

The baby is finally here.  Why the name Luke?  I'm glad that Brian is happy, but sad that Justin doesn't know.



Author's Response:

It's just a name that I like ;) No real reason for it! I was thinking about what name and knew I wanted Victor as a second name because of Brian's connection to Vic and Taylor as his hyphenated last name because he was Justin's son, but the first name is really just because I like it ;)

More will be up soon :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2018 10:09 am Title: Chapter 12

Wow, great chapter.  Happy that everything went well, but sad that Justin missed out.



Author's Response:

Yes, sad indeed :( 

I am glad you enjoyed it! More will be up soon!

Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2018 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 11

Hi! Again, amazing chapter, but so much pain and hurt. The "two best friends" It's amazing how you pictured, characterized them so well. Although I don't believe that the makers of the Shów had so intended, that is what many of us see in them. Both think only of themselves. Michael with a pathetic stupidity, but at least an obvious one. And Lindsay with a manipulative sneakiness. In my opinion, the latter is unfortunately much worse, because she makes it so clever and she so deceives Brian. That's why for me, it's harder to read her part in this and to endure how Brian doesn't see through her bullshit. What a bitch. I think, she wouldn't like it to hear Brian think about her as "aunt Lindsay". She seems to already imagine herself to be the mother. Pathetic... I am so glad that her plans have failed...

And then, you nearly made my cry. How Brian talks to the baby about Justin... It's soooo sadand so tragic, because they could have been so happy! Warmest regards!



Author's Response:

Yes, I agree that Lindsay is much worse in her sneakiness. 

What always annoyed me about both Michael and Lindsay was how they knew exactly which buttons to push with Brian to get him to do what they wanted and they never felt bad about using that knowledge. They both pushed Brian's buttons again and again to get their way and that annoyed the hell out of me - as a friend you shouldn't be using and manipulating your friends like that :(

You are on the right track about the way she will see herself in Luke's life. 

We'll find out more about that soon and will see how Brian reacts once he finds out ;)

Yes, they could have been very happy, but then I had to go in and mess it up for all of them :( 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2018 5:23 pm Title: Chapter 11

Surely Ben will tell Mikey off.  Mikey sems to have a one track mind.



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We'll see Ben soon and will find out how he feels about all of this :) 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2018 3:33 am Title: Chapter 11

I bet Lindsey was delighted to paint a mural for the baby and come every 3 weeks without paying anything.



Author's Response:

She loved it - for sure! We all know what she's like ;)

And we'll see more of her soon!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2018 12:02 am Title: Chapter 11

Great update.  Oh that Michael is so clueless or is he just crafty in his ways?  Still hate him.  LOL



Author's Response:

I think it's a mixture of both :/ 

We'll see more of him, so you can hate him even more ;)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2018 5:39 pm Title: Chapter 10

Michael is such a weazle. 



Author's Response:

He is indeed :/ 

Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2018 11:36 am Title: Chapter 10

Hi! So, this wasn't as hard to read as I thought! Amazing chapter, fantastic writing-style and again, I love how you pictured those characters and how you let them react. I don't know, maybe if the show would had been continued, Michael wouldn't be as bad as you characterized him, but who cares! I love stories in which Michael is characterized a bit or very exaggerated. And thank you for finally letting Brian tell Michael how it's really like ... that he loves or loved Justin, that Justin was his partner and nothing else, no blond boy ass, no boy toy or anythng else ... And thanks especially for this "He is not YOU". It was all overdue. If I remember correctly, in the show Brian has actually only once really put Michael in his place (at the garden party in S3). And with all the hateful things Michael says not only about Justin but also about the baby, Brian finally realizes, that there's no friendship left. It must be somehow painful for Brian, but thanks for that! Well, now only "one best friend" remains ... I'm curious...

And I'm really happy for Brian that at least Ted is there for him and that there's a real developing friendship between them. They both deserve that! Warmest regards!!!



Author's Response:

Awww, thanks for your kind words - I really appreciate them :)

As I have never really liked Michael on the show, it was very easy for me to portray him this way. Of course I don't think he would have turned out that bad on the show, but I had my fun going with it and giving him what I felt like he had coming for years...

I really wish Brian would have stood up more for himself when it came to Michael, but I guess due to his past he was too scared of losing his "best friend" to risk really speaking out. After all he was the one who made the first step after the garden party when in my opinion it should have really been Michael. Yes, Brian hit him, but after what Michael had said there to him that day, he would have been dead to me... He should have apologised to Brian instead of the other way round. In my opinion (and I am totally against violence!) that punch was more than deserved and he got off way too easy for that :( 

We'll see about the other best friend soon ;)

I just love Ted - can't help it :D 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2018 2:05 am Title: Chapter 10

Fantastic chapter.  I have always believed that we should not hate, dislike yes, but hate no.  However, in the case of Michael, I absolutely hate that person he is.  That is a sign that your writing is great making the readers feel the emotions that some stories do not bring out. If he is a friend, heaven help those he doesn't like such as Justin.  



Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it :)

I have to admit that I was never much of a fan of Michael, so it was pretty easy for me to portray him like that ;) 

And I agree - with a friend like him, who needs enemies, right? 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2018 9:52 pm Title: Chapter 10

Tough chapter as it's the end of an era, but there is a first that is changing Brian's mood. Ted is amazing here.



Author's Response:

Yes, it is the end of an era - that's for sure :(

And Ted is a really good friend - a friend that Brian really needs right now!

Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2018 2:45 pm Title: Chapter 9

Hi! I must again admit, how hard it is to read this story, knowing there won't be some happy end... It's really hard to see Brian like this without Justin by his side, where he would belong. To read Brian's thoughts, thinking about how he missed Gus' firsts, first words, first steps and first scratched knees, and how he knew that he would never get those years back, at the same time not recognizes, that Justin also won't be able to get those first moments with Luke back, that he also will miss Luke's firsts, knowing that it's Brian, who takes them away from Justin, that it's Brian's fault and doing... It's so painful and I'm suffering for Justin and his loss. And it makes me so sad, that Brian doesn't see, can't see what he's doing...

I already told you that I disliked Michael and Lindsay at the show, but their behavior now makes me even more angry. Some best friends they are... So, Justin ist out of the picture... Who cares... Go, have fun tonight... Arrgghh, I wish them all the worst... But I haven't expected anything else from them. This is also so sad, that it seems as if Brian doesn't want to or can't see what they are doing to him... So, next there will be Michael's reaction. OMG, I think, this time I'm not curious, but angsty and already annoyed by michael... :-) Warmest regards!



Author's Response:

Yeah, it is painful that Brian is so stuck in his own way of thinking and in his own opinion that he doesn't even for a second consider what he's taking away from Justin. And all in the name of a career... All because they didn't communicate before and Brian never understood that a career was not something Justin was really interested in :(

Yes, Michael's reaction will be next and then of course we'll also have the reaction of the second best friend ;) Interesting times ahead, that's for sure :)

More will be up soon!

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2018 12:37 am Title: Chapter 9

Poor Brian.  First the problems with the girls will be popping up and then we have to wait to find out how Michael takes Brian being pregnant.  So many things to look forward to.



Author's Response:

Yes, we definitely have interesting times ahead. 

More will be up soon and then we'll see how the two best friends react to the news of Brian's pregnancy ;)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2018 9:42 pm Title: Chapter 9

That meeting with Michael is going to be quite brutal and I bet the trip to Toronto might be rocky as well: Wendy is not going to like the idea of a baby from Justin.



Author's Response:

Yes, we definitely have some interesting times ahead - that's for sure :/

More will be up soon and then we'll find out about the reactions from the two best friends ;)

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