Date: Jun 11, 2021 3:10 pm Title: Chapter 12
I was kind of thinking something was going to happen, but not that!! And I'm kind of glad that John isn't the father after all. Samantha was really trying to get him back, and I think if her daughter really was John's, she would have kept on trying...
Date: Jul 31, 2018 8:33 pm Title: Chapter 12
Wonderful pride parade and stressful cliffhanger! Fortunately, the next part is online; thank you for the ride!
Author's Response: You're very welcome.
Date: Jul 31, 2018 6:38 pm Title: Chapter 11
I bet Tannis is wondering what happened to Brian, if he hit his head and lost his mind.
Author's Response: LOL I bet she is.
Date: Jul 31, 2018 3:45 am Title: Chapter 10
Gus is so wise and observant; I can't wait to see his reaction to his dad's pants!
Author's Response: Should be interesting.
Date: Jul 31, 2018 3:24 am Title: Chapter 9
Those pants... Selffan due to too much hotness! Mel is going to suffer: let's see how Debbie will handle her.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the pants. LOL
Date: Jul 30, 2018 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 8
Mel is such a bitch! I know I'm always after her, but she deserves it. Too bad for her, Jenny has Brian in her pocket! And now, Lindsey is going after her: she's going to need some chamomile tea and a great lawyer!!!
Author's Response: Mel's not in a good place.
Date: Jul 30, 2018 7:39 pm Title: Chapter 7
Jenny can be a pest just like her father. Glad that Richie was able to manage his shopping fun without too much embarrassment and was able to get a fabulous dress.
Author's Response: The younger generation is growing up.
Date: Jul 30, 2018 7:16 pm Title: Chapter 6
Richie and Emmett are getting really close: that means a lot for both of them.
Author's Response: They are going to make a great family.
Date: Jul 11, 2018 3:46 am Title: Chapter 5
Bobby gave an amazing idea to Brian; we can see why he is a great lawyer and John's partner for years: he knows how to deal with Kinney men.
Author's Response: A great skill to have.
Date: Jul 10, 2018 8:49 pm Title: Chapter 4
Mel is still a bitch and a mean one; I understand that, as a parent, she fears to see her daughter doing what she did herself: transgressing the rules; that's what most of teens, kids, young adults will do, no matter what. Her words to Brian are hurtful while he just tries to avoid Jenny not resenting her. I love hating Mel!
Author's Response: I can tell. LOL
Date: Jul 10, 2018 3:51 am Title: Chapter 3
Yeah, I feel a hot argument coming up! It's been a long time that Brian and Mel did fight.
Author's Response: You could be right. LOL
Date: Jul 09, 2018 8:50 pm Title: Chapter 2
Brian played the redhead like a pro without saying a word and he learned a thing or two.
The munchers, Mel in particular, are doing their best to alienate the new members of the family.
Author's Response: Brian is very clever - too bad the munchers aren't.
Date: Jul 09, 2018 12:51 am Title: Chapter 12
Great story. So appropriate for Pride time. Glad to see that it will continue. Each Sunshine Files story fits today's time so well. Terrific writing.
Author's Response: Such a lovely compliment. Thank you so much.
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2018 2:22 am Title: Chapter 12
Nina is in her element. I think anyone who tries to come between Gus and Ray is crazy. Especially when Gus has his dad and John available to back him up.
Author's Response: Nina has found herself.
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2018 2:08 am Title: Chapter 11
You do realize that Mel is a lot like Brian which is why they don't get along well. So that means that JR is a lot like Brian and I'm sure she'd enjoy knowing that.
Author's Response: LOL Mel and Brian have always been at odds for exactly that reason.
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2018 1:59 am Title: Chapter 10
Hmmm, menopause. I'd forgotten about that. That could be the cause, though I think a shrink wouldn't hurt. Thank goodness JR doesn't have to stand for that.
Author's Response: Mel is dealing with a lot.
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2018 1:46 am Title: Chapter 9
I think Melanie needs to speak with Dr. Wilder. She's going off the rail. I don't remember, did Justin dress as Marilyn Monroe. Now that would have been cool.
Author's Response: Yes, Justin did that.
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2018 1:23 am Title: Chapter 8
Mel is getting worse and worse and I don't think she's done yet. Richie is going to outdo everyone at the Pride Parade.
Author's Response: Richie will be a star.
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2018 1:13 am Title: Chapter 7
I love how Emmett takes care of Richie's feelings. It was very nice of Lindsay to compliment Richie. Somehow I don't think Melanie would have been as nice.
Author's Response: Emmett is a born parent.
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2018 12:43 am Title: Chapter 6
Emmett and Nina will look fabulous at Pride. John is not happy with Samantha trying to come between him and Bobby. Of course we know that there is no way that would work. Gus and Ray are meant to be together. I'm sure Brian wouldn't want more children even if Jamie and Leda were to ask.
Author's Response: Everything is looking up.
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2018 12:19 am Title: Chapter 5
Poor Brian. Thinking no one needs him. Love the idea that Bobby came up with. That's the start of a new storyline.
Author's Response: LOL You know us too well.
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2018 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
Love how all the guys back JR. It's good that she now has a date. Mel's falling into a hole.
Author's Response: Yep. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2018 7:10 pm Title: Chapter 3
Mel is really getting out of hand. She's going to lose her daughter if she's not careful. I wonder how long it will be before John finds out the truth about Grace.
Author's Response: Mel is kind of lost at the moment.
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2018 6:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
Brian should be used to being mistaken for his brother. Mel and Lindsay are way to prudish. Now JR has to explain to Curtis that they weren't aware of who she wanted to go to the dance with, so it's nothing personal.
Author's Response: They will often be mistaken for each other in the future.
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2018 6:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love Richie. John has a problem but you have the solution.
Author's Response: So glad you like the Richie character.