Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2019 7:02 pm Title: The Ghost of The Past

Crap On A Stick!!!

Why did Lindsay have to find that phone?

Ethan makes Michael look smart!

So who is the the puppeteer pulling all the strings to get Michael to dance and take the blame?

Beyond Curious Now that Rajan is cutting his hair!

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2019 2:54 pm Title: The Ghost of The Past

Now how to connect the dots and still get Mikey in trouble.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 07, 2019 12:59 pm Title: Recognition Part One

Well it seems we've uncovered a few truths in this chapter. But first I just have to say that the fact that Uncle Rajan and Aunt Rae are they married, it's no wonder they would not allow the bigoted Tom Delland to be a member af that club. Serves him right!

Michael sounds like he has gotten himself in a bit of a bind. I can't say I believe he started the fire, but, who else would have? Unless Lindsay and Ethan cleaned out the important stuff and started it themselves, hoping to ensnare Michael as the culprit. But if the police search his apartment and find that recording he made to send to Lindsay, he will be up shit creek. But the recording will also have the police looking at Lindsay in regards to James' death. But now that he will be arrested, I have to wonder if he will be out in time to place that call to London. I'm  thinking when a call is placed from the jail, Debbie might pick up, thus Michael learning they are all in London. So if he gets out in time, he will make the call, which will allow Rajan and company to know that it IS Michael who has been making them. And then, god help Michael, because no one else will. That smug, condescending countenance of his, will get wiped out.

Ethan - hmmm, can't say I'm unhappy where his road will be taking him. He deserves everything - plus more - than what will be coming his way. Dixon must have brought him in solely to help him get Justin, and Brian got caught in his cross hairs, when it looked like he might have competion there. Thus the shooting. And him leaving after three weeks in Pittsburgh, has to be because of the shooting. Just need to learn/figure out how Dixon KNEW him prior to bringing him in, and WHY Ethan has chosen, after all this time, to come back. What was he hoping to gain by coming back, or did Dixon call him wanting help with something again? The fact that Dixon called him the night he died, is uncanny, too.

I'm figuring te bullets are going to have Ethan's fingerprints on them, (he has to be placed at the scene of the crime) and the fingerprints matching that of Ethan, will be seen as direct evidence, versus circumstantial.

But now, you have placed a KNIFE at the crime scene, NOT matching the bullets' fingerprints. Another curve ball we have to learn about. And so help me, I can't figure THAT one out, because as soon as the shots were fired, Justin was immediately there, leaving no time for a second accomplice to have been present and able to make an escape.

LOTS and lots going on here. Looking forward to some more reveals.

HUGS  ~Cathy

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2019 1:01 am Title: Recognition Part One

Cliffhanger.  Oh this is getting better and better.  Great writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2019 6:36 pm Title: Recognition Part One

Oh The Plot Is Definitely Thickening Now!!!

So Many Questions But No Answers Just Yet!

Michael and his Cronies should Seriously Fear Rajan and Rae could they seem like when they go after something or someone they don't stop until they feel like.

A dog with a bone is probably more gentle because they don't stop until your dust they stop when you no longer exists in the universe and beyond.

I hope Deb can step back because they will have no problem destroying her too.

Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!!!! :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2019 12:19 pm Title: Livid in London, Perplexed and Pissed in Pittsburgh

Great chapter.  Love when Michael is an idiot and the connection between Linds and Ethan, classic.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2019 1:40 pm Title: Livid in London, Perplexed and Pissed in Pittsburgh

Okay, someone needs to kill Michael very, very slowly, using a fork and a broken piece of glass.  He's just all kinds of evil and vindictive! What an ass! Someone needs to let him find out Mercy's back in London, and, also let him believe she plans to stay there, again. And, pray tell, why should Michael feel he deserves thanks for his support? I hardly believe he did anything to support Charles/Nathanial, (whichever is his real name.)

So, Ethan has admitted to Mel, the watch (Brian's), was his. That should put him at the scene of the crime. When they get the fingerprints off the bullet... let's just say they will have a starting point with whom they can match the prints.

Don't even get me started on Lindsay. Miss False Hope and Deluision, as you so nicely called her. But, how does Michael know about Lindsay pushng James to drink? Could Michael have seen him and talked to him that night?

Didn't Ethan always try to interpose himself next to Justin, when Justin was playing on the sidewalk? So, even if Justin doesn't remember him from school, he should have a knowledge of who he is. Would Daphne or Chris recognize him?  And, oh yeah!  I've always meant to mention, how when this story started, I was a little shocked that Chris and Justin were best friends. That's definitley a different take on canon.

Okay - A cross between the Joker and the Penguin? I've been trying to imagine what it would sound like, and coming up blank!  How do you manage to think of these things?!  😂😂😂

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2019 4:53 am Title: No Sympathy or Mercy, But Plenty of Smoke and Subterfuging

Okay, looks like it is going through now. Hope I remember everything I wanted to say.

I just remembered tonight that I had not yet read all your updates. So I apologize for that fact, and that I hadn't yet reviewed.

If Michael thinks Vic is going to apologize or that Debbie will reprimand him, he has another thing coming.

It seems like Lindsay is fed up with Michael and regretting she hired him. Didn't I say that would happen? And all hell will break loose, if Michael has to go to George about that watch. How will he explain the fact that the watch he is saying is his, originally belonged to Brian? Wait till THAT bomb is dropped! (Looking forward to that.)

But, all hell will break loose, if the call that comes in two weeks is from Michael. Oh PLEASE - let it be from Michael.

LOVING this story...

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2019 12:13 am Title: No Sympathy or Mercy, But Plenty of Smoke and Subterfuging

Terrific update.  This story keeps getting better and better.

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2019 4:55 pm Title: No Sympathy or Mercy, But Plenty of Smoke and Subterfuging

I’m confused as hell....

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2019 4:19 pm Title: No Sympathy or Mercy, But Plenty of Smoke and Subterfuging

Okay, I'm old and suffer from sometymers.  So who is 'him'  Michael or the uncle?

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2019 8:11 pm Title: Berating and Explaining

Great chapter.  Love how these now characters add to the original. And, of course, anytime Mikey is in trouble I am soooooooooooo Happy.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2019 7:01 pm Title: Berating and Explaining

Michael is such a prick in this story: so good to get to hate him.