[Report This]Date: May 20, 2019 4:17 pm Title: Reconnect and the Redolence of Remembrance and Revenge
Are Billy and Marguerite new in the story?
Author's Response:
Hey, no they were in the London part of the story - well Marguerite was, Billy was mentioned, she is Mercy's sister and he is her brother in law. Billy was Mercy's first boyfriend who she pretended to dump because Michael was being such a nuisance. She was with him for three years - long distance - until he met Marguerite.
Hope that helps.
Thanks
Happy reading.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2019 3:56 pm Title: The Light Starts to Shine on the Dark Knight
2 nasty and jealous guys can't generate something good.
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2019 1:14 pm Title: Reconnect and the Redolence of Remembrance and Revenge
Good that Brian got Justin to talk. Michael doesn't seem to thing he's got problems.
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2019 1:10 am Title: The Light Starts to Shine on the Dark Knight
Oh, that evil Michael. Just love to hate him. Great update. Wonderful writing.
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2019 5:48 pm Title: The Light Starts to Shine on the Dark Knight
Can Michael be charged as an accomplice to Ethan kidnapping Justin?
That moron let his jealousy and spite lead him to try to destroy anyone who doesn't do what he wants and those same emotions will lead to his downfall.
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2019 12:37 pm Title: The Light Starts to Shine on the Dark Knight
Lots of hints, but nothing said directly.
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2019 12:27 am Title: Haunting, Vaunting and Taunting
That Michael just keeps getting worse and worse. I dislike him so much in so many stories. Great update and writing. I am caught up now on all the stories. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2019 6:28 pm Title: Haunting, Vaunting and Taunting
Thanks for the update hun!
Feel like I'm missing a gap in time, when we suddenly find Justin has been kidnapped in ch 34. Am I losing the plot?
Deb
Author's Response:
Hey Deb, thank you for the review. Hope you are well. Between the end of chapter 34 and the start of 35 there was a three week gap, so no plot losing, more explanations to come over the next couple of chapters.
Happy reading
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2019 6:19 pm Title: Haunting, Vaunting and Taunting
Michael is going to regret he ever woke up because the Hell that is about to reign down on hi m would make the apocalypse look like the 4th of July.
Wonder why Michael needs to speak to Lindsay so badly?
😀
Date: Apr 29, 2019 5:07 pm Title: Haunting, Vaunting and Taunting
Good to see that Debbie is not letting Michael rule the world anymore!
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2019 2:50 pm Title: Haunting, Vaunting and Taunting
So good to see more from you. Missed you lots. Can't wait to find out what Michael said.
Date: Mar 06, 2019 8:59 pm Title: For Whom The Bellwether Tolls
I don't understand how did we get from chapter 33 to 34.
Is it a mistake? Doesn't make sense.
Author's Response:
Hiya, no it is not a mistake. There is a three week gap between the chapters, Ethan followed Michael who was following Justin for a week. Then Ethan took Justin and hid him for two weeks. Chapter 35 will bring more information.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2019 8:48 am Title: For Whom The Bellwether Tolls
What, Kidnapped?! I hope Justin is okay. I kind of feel bad for Ethan.
Brian, Mercy, Ben will give Micheal Not-so-swift KICK to his ugly ass. Will that moron ever learn? IK, No. His peanut brain needs to be shaken off.
Date: Mar 05, 2019 11:47 pm Title: For Whom The Bellwether Tolls
Great chapter. Oh that lousy Mikey. Can't wait until he gets what is coming to him. Fantastic writing.
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2019 6:02 pm Title: For Whom The Bellwether Tolls
Ethan kidnapped Justin on the heresay of Michael who just continues to rack up Ass Kicking Points he is so going to wish he stayed in his comic book world.
I feel bad Ethan is dying he doesn't deserve that fate but it only slightly excuses his deeds but not the actions.
Justin needs Brian who needs him too and they both need time alone to deal with this before they can take on Michael.
Thank Goodness They Have Such Good Friends!
Date: Mar 05, 2019 4:54 pm Title: For Whom The Bellwether Tolls
Tragic chapter with Ethan's back story, though, I feel I missed something as I don't see how we go from §33 to this one. When was Justin abducted and Ethan taken down by the FBI?
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2019 3:05 pm Title: For Whom The Bellwether Tolls
Oh my. Wasn't expecting that.
[Report This]Date: Feb 26, 2019 6:45 pm Title: The Suspicion and The Alibi
We are getting closer to the truth? I hope so.
Date: Feb 26, 2019 6:31 pm Title: The Suspicion and The Alibi
I don't get how Lindsay's husband could be ruled out of the attempted murder of Brian.
[Report This]Date: Feb 26, 2019 5:42 pm Title: The Suspicion and The Alibi
Aww Too Bad Was Hoping Michael Would Go To Jail! :(
Of course him getting what is coming to him could be better than jail...Almost ;)
Ethan is going to have a lot of explaining to do about why he was stalking Justin and about Brian.
Date: Feb 20, 2019 3:02 pm Title: The Ghost of The Past
How will Lindsay deal with this important information/clue?
I'm surprised that Ethan's old phone is still vibrating if it was hidden in a drawer for days/weeks, ergo without being charged.
Date: Feb 19, 2019 9:02 pm Title: Recreating, A Recollection and Recognition Part 2
Evil Ethan! I don't know who is the worst from Michael and him.
Date: Feb 19, 2019 8:32 pm Title: Recognition Part One
Thickening plot! I like this story!
Date: Feb 19, 2019 8:15 pm Title: Livid in London, Perplexed and Pissed in Pittsburgh
I feel like an ugly battle is starting between Michael and Lindsey.
Date: Feb 19, 2019 2:26 am Title: The Ghost of The Past
Two terrific chapters. And, the plot thickens. Great writing.