[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2019 6:28 pm Title: Haunting, Vaunting and Taunting
Thanks for the update hun!
Feel like I'm missing a gap in time, when we suddenly find Justin has been kidnapped in ch 34. Am I losing the plot?
Deb
Author's Response:
Hey Deb, thank you for the review. Hope you are well. Between the end of chapter 34 and the start of 35 there was a three week gap, so no plot losing, more explanations to come over the next couple of chapters.
Happy reading
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2019 6:19 pm Title: Haunting, Vaunting and Taunting
Michael is going to regret he ever woke up because the Hell that is about to reign down on hi m would make the apocalypse look like the 4th of July.
Wonder why Michael needs to speak to Lindsay so badly?
😀
Date: Apr 29, 2019 5:07 pm Title: Haunting, Vaunting and Taunting
Good to see that Debbie is not letting Michael rule the world anymore!
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2019 2:50 pm Title: Haunting, Vaunting and Taunting
So good to see more from you. Missed you lots. Can't wait to find out what Michael said.
Date: Mar 06, 2019 8:59 pm Title: For Whom The Bellwether Tolls
I don't understand how did we get from chapter 33 to 34.
Is it a mistake? Doesn't make sense.
Author's Response:
Hiya, no it is not a mistake. There is a three week gap between the chapters, Ethan followed Michael who was following Justin for a week. Then Ethan took Justin and hid him for two weeks. Chapter 35 will bring more information.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2019 8:48 am Title: For Whom The Bellwether Tolls
What, Kidnapped?! I hope Justin is okay. I kind of feel bad for Ethan.
Brian, Mercy, Ben will give Micheal Not-so-swift KICK to his ugly ass. Will that moron ever learn? IK, No. His peanut brain needs to be shaken off.
Date: Mar 05, 2019 11:47 pm Title: For Whom The Bellwether Tolls
Great chapter. Oh that lousy Mikey. Can't wait until he gets what is coming to him. Fantastic writing.
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2019 6:02 pm Title: For Whom The Bellwether Tolls
Ethan kidnapped Justin on the heresay of Michael who just continues to rack up Ass Kicking Points he is so going to wish he stayed in his comic book world.
I feel bad Ethan is dying he doesn't deserve that fate but it only slightly excuses his deeds but not the actions.
Justin needs Brian who needs him too and they both need time alone to deal with this before they can take on Michael.
Thank Goodness They Have Such Good Friends!
Date: Mar 05, 2019 4:54 pm Title: For Whom The Bellwether Tolls
Tragic chapter with Ethan's back story, though, I feel I missed something as I don't see how we go from §33 to this one. When was Justin abducted and Ethan taken down by the FBI?
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2019 3:05 pm Title: For Whom The Bellwether Tolls
Oh my. Wasn't expecting that.
[Report This]Date: Feb 26, 2019 6:45 pm Title: The Suspicion and The Alibi
We are getting closer to the truth? I hope so.
Date: Feb 26, 2019 6:31 pm Title: The Suspicion and The Alibi
I don't get how Lindsay's husband could be ruled out of the attempted murder of Brian.
[Report This]Date: Feb 26, 2019 5:42 pm Title: The Suspicion and The Alibi
Aww Too Bad Was Hoping Michael Would Go To Jail! :(
Of course him getting what is coming to him could be better than jail...Almost ;)
Ethan is going to have a lot of explaining to do about why he was stalking Justin and about Brian.
Date: Feb 20, 2019 3:02 pm Title: The Ghost of The Past
How will Lindsay deal with this important information/clue?
I'm surprised that Ethan's old phone is still vibrating if it was hidden in a drawer for days/weeks, ergo without being charged.
Date: Feb 19, 2019 9:02 pm Title: Recreating, A Recollection and Recognition Part 2
Evil Ethan! I don't know who is the worst from Michael and him.
Date: Feb 19, 2019 8:32 pm Title: Recognition Part One
Thickening plot! I like this story!
Date: Feb 19, 2019 8:15 pm Title: Livid in London, Perplexed and Pissed in Pittsburgh
I feel like an ugly battle is starting between Michael and Lindsey.
Date: Feb 19, 2019 2:26 am Title: The Ghost of The Past
Two terrific chapters. And, the plot thickens. Great writing.
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2019 7:02 pm Title: The Ghost of The Past
Crap On A Stick!!!
Why did Lindsay have to find that phone?
Ethan makes Michael look smart!
So who is the the puppeteer pulling all the strings to get Michael to dance and take the blame?
Beyond Curious Now that Rajan is cutting his hair!
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2019 6:54 pm Title: Recreating, A Recollection and Recognition Part 2
Holy Smoke Dixon Stabbed Brian!!!
And Ethan set the fire and set Michael up!!!
Whoa!
Who helped Michael and who is going to pay?
Not surprised Michael is such a user it is his motif for getting what he wants no matter what.
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2019 2:54 pm Title: The Ghost of The Past
Now how to connect the dots and still get Mikey in trouble.
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2019 2:33 pm Title: Recreating, A Recollection and Recognition Part 2
Woah! I never saw that coming. It's sort of nice that Mikey got the blame, but trouble for something he didn't do is wrong.
Author's Response:
Worry not, he will only get in deep-deep trouble for what he's done to Mercy and her family.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Feb 07, 2019 12:59 pm Title: Recognition Part One
Well it seems we've uncovered a few truths in this chapter. But first I just have to say that the fact that Uncle Rajan and Aunt Rae are they married, it's no wonder they would not allow the bigoted Tom Delland to be a member af that club. Serves him right!
Michael sounds like he has gotten himself in a bit of a bind. I can't say I believe he started the fire, but, who else would have? Unless Lindsay and Ethan cleaned out the important stuff and started it themselves, hoping to ensnare Michael as the culprit. But if the police search his apartment and find that recording he made to send to Lindsay, he will be up shit creek. But the recording will also have the police looking at Lindsay in regards to James' death. But now that he will be arrested, I have to wonder if he will be out in time to place that call to London. I'm thinking when a call is placed from the jail, Debbie might pick up, thus Michael learning they are all in London. So if he gets out in time, he will make the call, which will allow Rajan and company to know that it IS Michael who has been making them. And then, god help Michael, because no one else will. That smug, condescending countenance of his, will get wiped out.
Ethan - hmmm, can't say I'm unhappy where his road will be taking him. He deserves everything - plus more - than what will be coming his way. Dixon must have brought him in solely to help him get Justin, and Brian got caught in his cross hairs, when it looked like he might have competion there. Thus the shooting. And him leaving after three weeks in Pittsburgh, has to be because of the shooting. Just need to learn/figure out how Dixon KNEW him prior to bringing him in, and WHY Ethan has chosen, after all this time, to come back. What was he hoping to gain by coming back, or did Dixon call him wanting help with something again? The fact that Dixon called him the night he died, is uncanny, too.
I'm figuring te bullets are going to have Ethan's fingerprints on them, (he has to be placed at the scene of the crime) and the fingerprints matching that of Ethan, will be seen as direct evidence, versus circumstantial.
But now, you have placed a KNIFE at the crime scene, NOT matching the bullets' fingerprints. Another curve ball we have to learn about. And so help me, I can't figure THAT one out, because as soon as the shots were fired, Justin was immediately there, leaving no time for a second accomplice to have been present and able to make an escape.
LOTS and lots going on here. Looking forward to some more reveals.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2019 4:23 am Title: Recognition Part One
More puzzlements. I'm still puzzled about why Michael thinks that Mercy is his best friend.
Date: Feb 06, 2019 1:01 am Title: Recognition Part One
Cliffhanger. Oh this is getting better and better. Great writing.