[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2019 1:09 am Title: His Mysterious Capture, The State and The Doctor
Wow, great ending to a terrific story. Wonderful writing as always.
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2019 4:52 pm Title: His Mysterious Capture, The State and The Doctor
Yes Michael is getting exactly what he deserves which is nothing but pain it won't equal what he caused others but it is enough that he will never get out to inflict more pain in others Ever Again.
The director's cut of the movie Michael should make a nice loop for Michael to suffer through for the rest of his miserable, pathetic life.
Fantastic Ending!
Thank You So Much!!😀
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2019 4:25 pm Title: His Mysterious Capture, The State and The Doctor
Wow, you gave us the ending we all hoped for. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2019 4:01 pm Title: His Mysterious Capture, The State and The Doctor
Ah ah ah, great idea to record some hot action that he, who shouldn't be named, could replay in his head.
Great story! Thank you for the ride!
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2019 6:22 pm Title: The Die is Cast
Wonderful update. Mikey is Bi, oh that is good. Most men don't want him, now woman can despise him, too. Terrific writing.
[Report This]Date: Jul 10, 2019 6:50 pm Title: The Die is Cast
"Butthoven": genius! "Marilyn" as in Mysterious?
So relieved that Michael is down.
[Report This]Date: Jul 10, 2019 2:50 am Title: The Die is Cast
Michael is very disturbed and evil a medical condition doesn't change that at all can't wait to see what happens?
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2019 7:50 pm Title: The Die is Cast
Wow, now that was a twist I wouldn't have thought, though it makes sense in a creepy sort of way.
Date: Jun 20, 2019 6:39 am Title: Rage and A Figment...Michael
A nice little fear is always good to keep people on their toes.
Date: Jun 19, 2019 12:29 am Title: Rage and A Figment...Michael
Great update. Mikey just does not understand anything. Love it when he get in trouble. Great writing.
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2019 5:41 pm Title: Rage and A Figment...Michael
Yes Michael is looking like he might have a few marbles missing nothing but he is perfectly sane just a Spoilt, Spiteful Little Worm instead.
No way is he getting off with an Insanity Defense!
Nice to see that despite his declaration that Mercy is his best friend he never knew her or her family at all, Cause he would know crossing any of them should be the last thing you would do.
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2019 12:18 pm Title: Rage and A Figment...Michael
Smoke and Mirrors? It's more like Gaslighting. Micheal need medical help, his brain is scrambled.
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2019 2:52 pm Title: The All Seeing Eye and the Ghost of a Chance
Love it. Love when Mikey just gets himself in deeper and deeper. What an idiot. Wonderful writing as always.
Date: Jun 12, 2019 10:45 am Title: The All Seeing Eye and the Ghost of a Chance
Just love it. Darn Michael hope you pays for all that
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2019 7:57 am Title: The All Seeing Eye and the Ghost of a Chance
One of my favourite part Justin explodes on Micheal and Brian trying to control his Sunshine , later trying to climb down Justin's throat , kissing the hellout infront of them. Well done!! Love it. :D
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2019 5:24 pm Title: The All Seeing Eye and the Ghost of a Chance
Excellent chapter!
This is delightful:
“Uh, Brian…” Ben chuckles as he almost climbs down Justin’s throat. “...focus on this conversation, thanking him for the defence with tongue fucking kisses later.”
“Amongst other things.” Brian snickers.
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2019 5:10 pm Title: The All Seeing Eye and the Ghost of a Chance
For Michael it is coming in Quintillion this payback has only just begin and already the water is above his waist and rising quickly.
Can't Wait For More😃
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2019 2:14 pm Title: The All Seeing Eye and the Ghost of a Chance
Michael's crimes are finally catching up to him.
[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2019 7:24 am Title: And So It Begins
Mercy's right, Micheal do need exorcism. Its time to accept the consequences of being a *whiny mouthy asshole Mikey....
Lovely chapter. ☘
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2019 4:07 pm Title: And So It Begins
The noise is starting to tighten Michael and your days are getting shorter all his lies, games and manipulations are coming to play with his present and will destroy his future Forever.
Couldn't Happen To A Nicer Person :)
Date: May 28, 2019 3:41 pm Title: And So It Begins
Yeah, MM teasing Michael is delightful.
How Ben could have heard what Michael said?
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2019 12:13 pm Title: And So It Begins
Love Mysterious Marilyn. Michael seems to not know what is going on.
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2019 10:45 am Title: And So It Begins
Oh, this just keeps getting better and better. Wonderful writing.
Date: May 21, 2019 2:00 am Title: Reconnect and the Redolence of Remembrance and Revenge
More trouble for Mikey. Yeah. He deserves it. Terrific writing.
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2019 6:01 pm Title: Reconnect and the Redolence of Remembrance and Revenge
Michael has some nerve thinking Lindsay is delusional about going to Hollywood (She Very Delusional!) while he is being delusional about what he did to Mercy.
So will Lindsay be sweeping at one of the studios or will she be another gawker standing at the gates hoping to catch a glimpse of talent that she will never have? lol
Michael going to jail is good but making him suffer first is Way Better!😂
Justin is finding himself again he just needed to let the anger and fear out.