Date: Jun 11, 2018 11:20 pm Title: Setting up the Chess Board
Read both chapters and just love this new story. Can't wait to see where you go with it.
Date: Jun 11, 2018 10:45 pm Title: Setting up the Chess Board
This is fun Can't wait for update...I am a Michael hater LOL
Date: Jun 11, 2018 4:21 pm Title: Setting up the Chess Board
Nice start!
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2018 1:00 pm Title: Setting up the Chess Board
I love Mysterious Marilyn stories and this looks to be a doozy. So many twists. Daphne and Chris. Brian an artist and shot. Justin visiting Brian in the hospital. Ben spiking Michael. Love it.
Date: Jun 11, 2018 12:38 pm Title: Setting up the Chess Board
Like that Craig is finally a good guy. Ex cop, ok then that's probably how Jenn knows Carl.
Ted still troubled me though. Ok he and Cynthia are running Kinnetik. It must be successful. Maybe Ted wanted it for his own.
Does Brian know Lindsay? Maybe it was Dixon. Maybe she called out Brian's name or maybe Brian turned him down once.
The list can go on an on.
One thing I didn't get was what Brian and Ben were being fitted for.
Date: Jun 11, 2018 12:19 pm Title: The Siren Call
Was a bit confusing at first but I got it eventually.
The regular cast of characters were there except Ted. Where was he?
This is really a twilight zone story if Lindsay is married to a man and Michael is in love with Brian. Ha!
Now we have to find out why it happened.
Date: Jun 11, 2018 12:19 pm Title: The Siren Call
Was a bit confusing at first but I got it eventually.
The regular cast of characters were there except Ted. Where was he?
This is really a twilight zone story if Lindsay is married to a man and Michael is in love with Brian. Ha!
Now we have to find out why it happened.
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2018 4:12 am Title: The Siren Call
You've once again come up with a tale that requires immediate updates. This is sure to be good!