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Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2018 6:28 pm Title: Going And Talking That Extra Mile?

Great chapter.  Love how interesting this story is and continues to be.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2018 2:34 am Title: Going And Talking That Extra Mile?

Just what was it that Mikey did or didn't do?  What is Lindsay up to.  No need to ask what Brian and Justin are up to.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2018 1:32 am Title: Going And Talking That Extra Mile?

Michael is proving every second how he is going to get quite serious beat down from Mercy and others that question is long and they are all itching to shut his mouth up.

Lindsay is gunning for Justin and it seems someone or someones will be gunning for her, hope she has experience running in heels because a mob could be coming for her too??

Justin and Brian are both going to remember this and every time they Come together ;)

When button pushing better hope they don't snap your arm  when they break your finger! lol

Thanks for the Update :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2018 8:22 pm Title: Can We Be More Than Friends But Less Than Lovers?

Drew hitting on Ben is quite interesting: it's a pair I didn't imagine, but now it seems like a great combination; another powerful couple.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 11:00 am Title: Can We Be More Than Friends But Less Than Lovers?

So sorry Michael. Mercy is about to once again, with the help of the others, destory a little of you.  So he is not going to sign his store over, so he won't be going to Europe with the rest of them. To bad, so sad.  They are not going to miss you Michael. And if you think Mercy will change her mind and give you a free pass, you are sadly mistaken. So, no RAGE for you! Ah ha! Mercy living in the Pitts for 5 yrs. Get a clue Michael! Do you need a vowel? Still insisting they sign the house over to him? He must be a lot richer in this story... if his shop is possibly worth over a $100K...

Yay! Brian and Justin!  Yay! Ben and Drew! (new twist!)  And what's this about Justin not being questioned from the police?  Just who shot Brian???

It's so refreshing reading a story where Brian and Michael aren't best buds... Never Have, Never Will...

Thanks for writing this story and sharing with all of us. Thanks for the update...

Hugs, Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 2:49 am Title: Can We Be More Than Friends But Less Than Lovers?

Good chapter.  Love this story and can't wait to see where you take it next.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 2:37 am Title: Can We Be More Than Friends But Less Than Lovers?

Michael thinks he still knows Mercy and that will be his downfall cause she is to Destroy Him.

Not surprised she came back to Pittsburgh five years ago she had no reason to tell Michael anything.

He is just trying to ride her coattails because unless it's selfish he doesn't have original thoughts, and Mercy is not going to play his stupid high school games...at least not without an audience ;)

Drew and Ben???

Hmmmm Interesting, Very Interesting! :)

Well at least this time Ben might actually have a Mind-Blowing, Toe-Curling, Sweaty, All Night Screaming, Pass Out In Ecstasy Orgasms, instead of a Ker Plunk and yawn barely a minute later snore fest??

Thanks for the Update:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 2:12 am Title: Can We Be More Than Friends But Less Than Lovers?

So Mercy has been in the Pitts for 5 years and Michael didn't know?  Very interesting.  What does she have planned.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2018 11:38 pm Title: Him Being Him Doesn't Make It Okay! And A Little More About Brian

Great story... Wonderful chapter...  Is Michael gonna sign his comic shop over?  If so, they should just use him as a gofer if he comes along... I presume nothing says what each person's job is.  Just how delusional is dear Mikey? Telling Deb and Vic to sign over their house to him???  OMG!   Now what is she talking about... Okay, so she's not being completely honest... hmm... what, pray tell, is she hiding?

Loving the Story, Cathy

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2018 4:25 pm Title: Him Being Him Doesn't Make It Okay! And A Little More About Brian

What else is Mercy hiding?

 Michael is all cans of creepy and that creepiness should work well in everyone else's favor, all they have to do give the little fool enough info to go chase his own tail while they all laugh and get to work.

The arrogance of a fool to think Deb and Vic should just sign the house over to him, I wouldn't  give that little A-Hole Barbie's dream house on loan <eye roll>

And his chance of landing amother hot guy like Ben is using the game Mystery Date lol

So who wanted Brian dead and will they try again??

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2018 3:47 pm Title: Him Being Him Doesn't Make It Okay! And A Little More About Brian

Very interesting facts about Brian and Mercy's pasts.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2018 2:03 pm Title: Him Being Him Doesn't Make It Okay! And A Little More About Brian

How did she know his stuff was taken at the hospital.  We are talking Mercy?  I thought she was in England.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 5:27 pm Title: Feasting on the Food of Love and Drinking a Glass of Hate

Deb and Drew are too funny! I wouldn't mind using him as a pillow too.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 4:42 pm Title: Feasting on the Food of Love and Drinking a Glass of Hate

If Michael was involved with Mercy's parents death then he better run and everyone better stand back become she will kill him and smile while she is being arrested.

Esmeralda Skye is a Perfect Name For The Company.

If Michael signs over his store then he should only be allowed to fetch but no say lol

Bet the stuff in his store is worth more than 100k?

Perhaps Mercy can actually make the store successful instead of Michael's personal playground ;)

Fantastic Update :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 3:28 pm Title: Feasting on the Food of Love and Drinking a Glass of Hate

Great chapter.  Love when Mikey isn't a part of the group or as important as he thinks he is.  Love this story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 1:27 pm Title: Feasting on the Food of Love and Drinking a Glass of Hate

Are you saying Michael was involved in Mercy's parents ... how and why?  You brain works in marvelous fashion.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2018 6:37 pm Title: All Players Are Now Present...Let The Games Begin

Should I be liking James?  Mikey and Lindsay's plans aren't going to come together.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2018 3:26 pm Title: All Players Are Now Present...Let The Games Begin

Ha ha ha, Lindsay's attempt to get to know Mercedes! Flat on her back!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2018 12:14 pm Title: All Players Are Now Present...Let The Games Begin

Great update.  Glad the Mel is finally happy and away from Lindsay.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2018 3:29 pm Title: Crowing, Lurking and Furkling

Brian and the watch: could Michael be more stupid?

It seems that Justin's week-end is going to be very entertaining!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2018 3:39 am Title: Crowing, Lurking and Furkling

Tut tut.  Like Mercy is going to believe anything that Michael says. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2018 3:33 am Title: Not Getting It But At Least He Agrees to Try

I love the tree decoration remark from Daphne and the meeting with Vic and Rodney.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2018 3:26 am Title: Not Getting It But At Least He Agrees to Try

Michael doesn't know which end is up.  Ben is well out of it.  Love how Justin, Chris, and Daphne find Merci and manage to work their way into her graces.  Vic and Rodney will make a wonderful couple.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2018 11:21 pm Title: Crowing, Lurking and Furkling

Got all caught up on the chapters and they are great.  Love when Mikey is odd man out.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2018 4:33 pm Title: Two New Sides, One Very Old One and The End

It's not Michael's happy day!  Ben finally got his balls back!

Brian wasn't nice with Justin, even if he should have been awake; he had a good reason to fall asleep.

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