Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2020 1:51 am Title: CHAPTER 85: HINDSIGHT IS 20/20 FOR A REASON

Wonderful chapter.  Fantastic writing as always.  Love, love, love this story.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2020 12:09 am Title: CHAPTER 85: HINDSIGHT IS 20/20 FOR A REASON

Yes finding Justin-lite could help fill in some holes concerning Michael and hopefully help in the case Ben and Hunter have against Michael and Lance for what they did to Hunter and attempted to do to Ben.

Michael had a lot of plans set in motion to guarantee that Brian would his with no obstacles I do wonder what Lindsay had planned when her plan A and B failed?

Lindsay and Michael really are quite clever to get away with what they did for so long and to fool so many people they are way too much alike and quite capable of going to any lengths to make their dreams and desires come true.

Craig might just be willing to tell everything if it means he could get witness protection because a lot of people will want to see his head on a spike, considering where he is on the totem pole of conspiracy to Destroy Brian and Justin he will have a lotto say.

Wonder what else Gardner wanted from Brian that he was willing to exploit a minor to twist Brian to do his bidding?

Agent Bright and Agent Bennett are going into prison to deal with Michael and Lindsay?

Good Luck Gentlemen!!!

Brian and Justin talking and gathering strength from one another facing the pains of the past and it is not effecting them the way it would have before, instead of running away from each other they are sticking around, facing it and holding onto each other tighter they are not allowing anyone or anything implode them again.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Wish I Could Score Higher Than Ten!!

 

 

 

 

Author's Response:

Hey Blue,

 

Just a quick note to let you know who Agents Bright and Bennett are. You know them best as Bubble and Bubba, who have been up close and personal with Michael and Hobbs for months. Bright has been gathering info for Bubba, while Bubba has been doing the same regarding Hobbs. Plus there is another whole history on the outside of prison walls regarding Henry and DeMarcus... See Chapter 79: PRECINCT BLUES PART 7 for that particular conversation.

HAPPY READING and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2020 7:28 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

Oh Hell no you can't stop there!!!!!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 11:51 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

There are no lengths Michael won't go to get what want a Murder wouldn't gaze him because to him everything has been for the greater good of himself, so who cares if people have to for so can Brian all to himself they weren't important anyway and were just obstacles to his happiness.

Makes me wonder what lengths was Lindsay willing to go once her fantasy life with Sam imploded on its self and Melanie wasn't stupid enough to take her back?

I was not expecting that answer to where is Brian-lite but now that we know where part of him what did Michael do with the rest?

What other secrets does that house hold?

I think after everything is settled and the criminals have been sent away everyone should go on vacation a d that house needs to be destroyed brick by brick.

Short Chapter, Long Chapter alwa

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 9:10 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

Wow, just wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Amazing, just when I think the twists and turns are straightening out, you hit us with another BIG twist..  As always, my dear, FANTSTIC, WONDERFUL writing.  My love for this story is happy with any chapter, short or long.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 8:25 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

800 !!! Thank you Nichelle for this wonderful story!!!

Author's Response:

 

OMG!!!! THANK YOU- ALL OF YOU SO MUCH!!! There are no words to describe how wonderful it is to know that you have enjoyed my work this much. Yeah, the tears of HAPPINESS are officially coming and will go unchecked for awhile yet.

A MAJOR SHOUT OUT TO CLAIRE for being the 800th review as well! Hard to believe that this story started all because I wasn't sure my gift of writing was still in tact after having taken so much time off due to a medical condition. And here we are- 91 chapters later- and still going strong!

I LOVE YOU ALL!

 

~Nichelle

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 8:24 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 8:22 pm Title: CHAPTER 83: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION

I don't know how I haven't commented this one yet.

The first thing I noticed was "But more importantly, right now, my dick is so hard, it could probably drill for oil" and then, the fireworks started and I couldn't highlight everything that made this chapter a wonderful one!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 8:02 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 13: YO QUIERO DINERO

Apart the banter between Mel and Brian, always delightful, I really need to bleach my eyes and my brain: Micheal's plan is so Machiavellian.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 6:31 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

Ohhh my. So good! I love a great mystery. I always felt Michael was smarter than he looked. Looking forward to more. 🥰

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2020 3:54 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 13: YO QUIERO DINERO

Well Michael just added to his charges and thankfully added to Lindsay's and the Sap's aswell?

The lengths Michael was willing to go to have Brian all to himself shows just how depraved he is and unforgivably selfish and self-absorbed to think Brian would ever love him with it without telling drugs.

Deb should have a front row seat to what her treating and seeing Michael as an innocent Angel did to everyone around him, and that her always excusing his selfish, entitled behavior made him thank it was okay to kill an innocent baby, Justin and set her up for the murder of Brian.

Deb's hands are just as dirty as Michael, Lindsay and their co-conspirators because she sees the truth but is still looking for a way to excuse Michael's behavior.

Deb may think rationally but she will always put Michael's needs first before anything or anyone else, but despite the fact that she admitted to herself that he was wrong but it won't change that she will still look to blame others especially Brian for everything Michael does wrong to tarnish the halo in her eyes.

I too wonder how many more secret compartments are in that room or house and what fresh Hell they hold for Brian?

Where is Brian-Lite?

What does Justin have plan for that house once everything has been cleared out and will it be videotaped so Michael can watch his dreams and once and for all?

Gus is going to get a lot of kisses and hugs from his daddies once they get home.

is it spiteful if there should be a family photo sent to Lindsay of Brian, Justin, Gus and Melanie showing off their rings and Melanie's baby bump in front of their new plastered everywhere Lindsay, Michael, Deb and the co-conspirators can see it?

Thanks For the Update 😃

 

 

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2020 7:05 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 13: YO QUIERO DINERO

This just may be the most evil Michael ever written 😳