Date: Jun 10, 2021 6:38 pm Title: Chapter 18
The family is just growing by leaps and bounds!! Well, that was a shocking turn of events...
Date: May 11, 2018 5:54 am Title: Chapter 18
The perfect day ended in quite a huge cliffhanger! 30 years later is long long time to call back an old lover; I hope she has a solid excuse.
This quote is so accurate for Brian "You barely eat enough to keep a bird alive, let alone explode.". Emmett knows how to keep him real and grounded.
Another amazing part of this saga: I really love how you keep the main protagonists in character while still "growing up" and becoming adults. Thank you!
Author's Response: Lovely comment. That approach about letting the characters grow up is exactly what we have tried to do.
Date: May 10, 2018 8:19 pm Title: Chapter 17
Richie is fitting right in; Curtis seems to be not very friendly for a boy quite the same age.
Author's Response: They don't really know each other yet.
Date: May 10, 2018 7:55 pm Title: Chapter 16
Justin is a little jealous of a young stud, but this time is long gone.
Brian's speech must have help Richie to feel better.
Gus and the blond octopus: very funny way to describe Bree.
Author's Response: Brian has so much wisdom that he never gives himself credit for.
Date: May 10, 2018 7:17 pm Title: Chapter 15
Beau and Richie first meeting is successful: the rest will follow, I hope for him.
Claire is so whiny, she reminds me of Michael sometimes.
Drew is really a catch!
Author's Response: Claire and Michael - what a couple! LOL
Date: May 10, 2018 6:43 pm Title: Chapter 14
I hope Curtis won't tease Richie now that he knows his secret.
Author's Response: Let's hope not.
Date: May 10, 2018 6:25 pm Title: Chapter 13
Brian is lucky and it's great that he acknowledges it!
Bree and her grandmother: I think Joan is loving this because Bree is a sweet girl and because she's so much like Brian; it helps soothing her pain for making Brian's youth awful.
Author's Response: That's a wonderful observation.
Date: May 10, 2018 6:00 pm Title: Chapter 12
Bree is such a conniving girl! How did she manoeuvre her daddies!
I'm starting to love those moments with Brian and Joan: they have come such a long way!
Author's Response: So pleased the Brian/Joan thing has touched you.
Date: May 10, 2018 5:29 pm Title: Chapter 11
It must be hard on Claire seeing how Brian is happy with his family and how they live so much better than her, and I'm not talking about their wealth. Most important is how Brian and Joan get each other and how close they are.
Author's Response: Yes, Claire and Joan used to have the same feelings about Brian - none of them good.
Date: May 10, 2018 6:24 am Title: Chapter 10
Very hot scene behind the closed door and then, interesting one with Bree waking up her daddies with her music because she couldn't enter their room.
Please somebody slaps Claire for me? I never liked her and it's amplified because we have the same first name.
Author's Response: We thought the name comparison would be interesting.
Date: May 10, 2018 2:38 am Title: Chapter 18
Oh, Wow, such a great story and with a cliffhanger !!!! Wonderful, just wonderful. I love the Sunshine Files so much. Your writing is amazing.
Author's Response: That's a most lovely compliment. Thanks so much.
Date: May 09, 2018 8:25 pm Title: Chapter 7
Love how you are able to write Brian & Justin as normal parents dealing with real life. Great update.
Author's Response: Thanks, that's exactly how we think of them.
Date: May 09, 2018 6:07 pm Title: Chapter 9
If Bree is as talented playing piano as Justin is with brushes, it will be interesting to follow and Brian won't regret getting this tiny one.
Emmett is too funny with Richie.
Author's Response: Thanks, we'll see about the piano playing.
Date: May 09, 2018 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 8
I can't wait to see how Bree will react to her pink piano!
I never hear about Baby Tooth Album; that's a great idea!
Author's Response: Ah yes, the pink piano. LOL
Date: May 09, 2018 4:55 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wonderful chapter: Bree and Patrick are so well written, as are all the other characters as well.
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
Date: May 09, 2018 4:36 pm Title: Chapter 6
Brian and Justin in a precious moment where they understand each other without talking and when they talk, it's to reinforce their relationship.
Bree should look around her (Ashley) and see that she's very lucky and not alone at all.
Author's Response: I think that shows the depth of the B/J connection.
Date: May 09, 2018 3:42 am Title: Chapter 4
Interesting first meeting for Richard: he will fit in just right with some adaptation time.
Bree and Patrick are so great together, but I feel a change in Patrick; he's less ready to play "girly" games and Bree is going to have to change her strategy.
Author's Response: That's what happens when children grow up.
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2018 1:44 pm Title: Chapter 18
Wow! You do manage to end this on a high note. Looking forward to hearing if John has another child.
Author's Response: We'll see. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2018 1:31 pm Title: Chapter 17
Richie appears to fit right in. Emmett worries for nothing.
Author's Response: Richie has found a good place.
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2018 1:19 pm Title: Chapter 16
The party's started and so for nobody has said anything to mar it. Bree has taken Richie under her wing and none would dare to mess with her.
Author's Response: If you have Bree on your side, you're golden.
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2018 1:05 pm Title: Chapter 15
The family parties are the highlight of any story. So far Richie seems to be doing okay. You didn't hear a word out of him.
Author's Response: So pleased you like the parties.
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2018 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 14
Joan is doing okay, so you can tell Brian to stop worrying. Curtis is who I worry about, it's not like him to not give someone a chance.
Author's Response: Curtis may have other issues.
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2018 5:10 am Title: Chapter 13
Looks like Claire is getting over her jealousy. Can't wait to see how the party goes and I know everyone is going to love Richie. I know that I do.
Author's Response: Aw, so glad you like Richie.
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2018 5:00 am Title: Chapter 12
Thank goodness for Drew. He helped Richie see that Emmett did not mean what he thought he meant. Plus the party is on!
Author's Response: Drew is a good grounding effect with Emmett.
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2018 4:49 am Title: Chapter 11
Poor Claire. Now Joanie needs to make up for what she didn't do for her daughter and her sons.
Author's Response: Can you say "dysfunctional"?