Date: Sep 29, 2018 2:00 am Title: Chapter 29
YES! Now we're getting to the nitty gritty! Can't wait until they find that flash drive. Julian must be beside himself now that it's out of his reach behind either the storage until of the loft, or behind the walls of George's estate. Serves his behind RIGHT!
Looking forward to more!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Sep 28, 2018 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 29
This is really getting good. Can't wait for the fall of Julian. Great writing.
Date: Sep 16, 2018 5:25 pm Title: Chapter 28
Very Interesting... So, Gardner actually was involved in owning the house. I'm sure when this all goes to court, the jury and judge aren't going to like his reasoning about protecting Hunter very amusing. The fact that he was involved at all... well, let's just say he doesn't have a leg to stand on.
So happy Brian has found something with Justin he never thought possible for himself. And, in turn, Justin found the same thing in Brian.
Loving the story you're weaving... Can't wait for more.
Hugs, Cathy
Date: Sep 15, 2018 5:25 am Title: Chapter 28
Wonderful chapter! Gardner is in deep trouble either way and he will go down fast.
[Report This]Date: Sep 15, 2018 1:50 am Title: Chapter 28
Brian is giving Justin the support he needs by just being near when he needs him, everything else they will figure out later when everyone is in prison where they belong.
Gardner and his standards should be very interesting for a jury to hear to everyone else is just sounds like pathetic excuses.
And further down the rabbit hole we go...
Date: Sep 14, 2018 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 28
Great update. Oh the bigger they are the harder they will fall. Terrific writing.
[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2018 8:48 pm Title: Chapter 28
Brian is helping the best way possible.
Date: Sep 03, 2018 4:58 pm Title: Chapter 27
The plot is very thick. I thought Carter was Juian's father. I can't wait to see who is on the list.
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2018 4:10 pm Title: Chapter 27
So Julian is the brother not the son and Carter resents him for it...Hmmm!
The teddy bear has exactly what they need.
Justin is a lot smarter than Julian and his Cronies gave him created for.
The people on that list are gonna wish they had stuck with their Country Club games cause Justin and everyone else Are gonna wanna see them all go down.
Just Loving This Story:)
Date: Sep 03, 2018 2:32 pm Title: Chapter 27
WOW! I love a good story of intrigue and suspense, and your story is that, in spades. It is SO VERY good! How does Carter even think he is going to get to Justin again, is beyond me. I'm wondering how it took hours to get the passageway open, as weren't the other 3 watching as Carter opened it? And Sap having cameras in the backroom? As disgusting as that is, what are the gays of gay PA going to do for retaliation? Justin is right about Vance, he's just a bully... he'll cave. I'm trying to come up with who someone is in accounting. I'm going with someone from canon, and only coming up with one name. So looking forward to the next chapter. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY! You are an AWESOME author...
Hugs, Cathy
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2018 2:18 pm Title: Chapter 27
So Julien is Carter's brother not son? Justin will get to the meat of all this and I'm sure it will be a surprise.
Date: Sep 03, 2018 2:56 am Title: Chapter 27
Great update. This story is so interesting. Love all the twists and turns. Terrific writing.
Date: Aug 27, 2018 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 26
Wow terrific chapter. Getting closer to the bad guys. Love how intelligent Justin is.
Date: Aug 27, 2018 4:06 pm Title: Chapter 26
What an update and a cliffhanger! Justin is on a crusade and fighting for the young guys: the FBI is stepping back.
Date: Aug 27, 2018 4:15 am Title: Chapter 26
White rabbit and mad hatter. Awesome
Date: Aug 27, 2018 2:57 am Title: Chapter 26
OMG!!!! I started reading this not long ago and finally caught up, and can tell you, I'm Hooked! I've never read anything like this, with this concept before. You always manage a way to bring a reader in, when writing a story. I wish you were able to update more frequently, but I noticed you have a few WIP's... Anyway, I wanted you to know I appreciate all your stories...
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2018 1:37 am Title: Chapter 26
Justin is smarter than they gave him credit for and instead of stalling they should've been acting, Think Of The Time That Was Wasted!!
Figured Carter would reveal himself sooner rather than later cause he hates being in the shadows.
Hope there us a team out there listening and ready to catch this rat.
Wonderful Update :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2018 1:20 am Title: Chapter 26
Oops, I guess everyone kind of forgot about Carter. Can't wait to see how you get them out of this one.
Date: Aug 22, 2018 3:39 am Title: Chapter 25
Good, Julian is starting to worry; maybe he will make a wrong move and they will have more against him.
[Report This]Date: Aug 22, 2018 3:15 am Title: Chapter 25
Fantastic chapter. Love seeing Ted in accountant mode.
Date: Aug 22, 2018 1:31 am Title: Chapter 25
This is such an exciting story! I can't wait to see what happens next now that Julian realizes that Justin isn't going to go along with anything he wants.
*HUGS*
Deb
Date: Aug 22, 2018 12:50 am Title: Chapter 25
Great update. Glad to see the good guys bonding together.
[Report This]Date: Aug 22, 2018 12:23 am Title: Chapter 25
Yes They Found The Teddy Bear!!
Julian should be very afraid because once they discover what is inside that bear he is done, and there will be no where he run and no one he can hide behind.
Yes!!! :)
Date: Aug 21, 2018 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 25
YAYYYYYYY!!!!! They have retrieved the bear! But now I wonder just how far Julian will go to get back what he left inside. I'm hoping that Brian and Justin discover it FIRST, or even Ben at this point. It's so nice to see the unsually nonplussed Julian sweat, knowing that his days are numbered...and most of all his father's are!
Great Writing Starbaby! More soon please!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 31, 2018 6:22 pm Title: Chapter 24
The sharks are starting to chase each other: the bloodbath is going to get huge.