Date: Oct 12, 2018 3:17 pm Title: Chapter 33
I'm happy Brian could give Justin's mind a rest for a while, which also allowed him a little sleep. It must be exhausting to be Justin, sometimes. It also sounds like Molly is really intelligent, too. How old is Molly? It's creepy to realize that Jennifer and Molly only lived two blocks from Justin's. I know Justin was pretty much anti-social, but if he passed either on the street before, I hope they showed Justin kindness in either a smile or a friendly word. That might give Justin some indication of the type of people they are. If Caroline was a 'Richard's, wouldn't that have been Jennifer's name when she was 16? If so, how did Justin end up as a Taylor? Or was that Caroline's maiden name? I have no doubt the Virginia told Jennifer the baby was going to a very good home and would want for nothing. Let's hope the fact that Jennifer had signed up on a site to find Justin that, that will hold a lot of bearing in Justin's belief in her.
George's lawyers better watch out. When George gets through with them, they will be lucky if they can ever find work again. Or was it just one lawyer that betrayed him? Did Virginia hold something over his head? Did she give him sexual favors? When George divorces Virginia will he have to give her any money? If Virginia has to rely totally on her family's money, George, Jr better look out. Mommy Dearest isn't going to look upon him very kindly for giving them up after all her carefully executed plans. She will drop him like a two-dollar whore. Could George's doctor still have George, Jr's DNA results still on file? Because he's hardly gonna get JR to give another sample, unless he pays Jr to do it.
Yeah, Justin made sure the IRS felt like idiots. Good thing too. Because they are probably already making plans to leave the country. Sounds like Carter and Julian have a lynch mob coming after them. Julian's going to know first-hand what it's like to use Justin.
I'm enjoying this mystery you have going here. It is so very good. Thanks for the update, and I look forward to your next chapter.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Oct 12, 2018 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 33
Wow, I love how this plot is evolving. Terrific writing.
[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2018 11:56 am Title: Chapter 33
We get to meet Jennifer? I can't wait to see what George tells Virginia and George Jr. Why does the IRS feel like idiots?
Date: Oct 12, 2018 11:38 am Title: Chapter 33
Lol loved Hills response toJustin 😂 plus Justin has smiled more in this chapter than any other one
Date: Oct 10, 2018 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 32
I hope Justin will find his mother, who seemed a very decent person, only falling for the wrong guy.
Date: Oct 10, 2018 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 31
Whoa!!! That's a major development! Poor Justin, poor Jennifer and Caroline: their lives are ruined because of a heartless son, doubled by a heartless bitch! At least, two great news: George found his grand-son and the thumb drive is there for hunting Julian.
Date: Oct 09, 2018 5:48 am Title: Chapter 32
So heartbreaking for both Justin and George, but there's HOPE! Great job, StarBaby!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2018 2:00 am Title: Chapter 32
Brian is at good at what he does as Justin is in what he does. Hopefully George is his grandpa.
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2018 1:55 am Title: Chapter 32
Not surprised Justin needs Brian's to help him forget this is a lot to think about in just a few minutes much less hours, Justin just wants Brian to help soothe his trouble mind and not even think of getting his hopes up.
George wanting to be sure is a good idea to keep Virginia and Junior from trying to hurt or bully George to protect their share of his money. (Though I Would Love To See Them Try!!)
Superb Update, Thanks So Much :)
Date: Oct 09, 2018 1:35 am Title: Chapter 32
Poor George. Everything about his family was just so wrong, and their mistakes are making there way into his life. I hope Jennifer is not too hard to find, but shouldn't the FBI have an easy time finding her? I mean, with everything Justin is helping them with, you would think they wouldn't mind helping with something that for them, would be a mundane task.
Justin is going to have Brian take his mind off things. (yay!) But he's really not letting this get to him, because he never let himself dwell on anything like this happening.
Thank you for all the extra writing you have done lately, and giving us all these wonderful updates in your stories.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Oct 09, 2018 1:23 am Title: Chapter 32
Wow terrific chapter. Love this new plot to Justin's life. Great idea, but then again I love all of your ideas and stories. Fantastic.
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2018 12:52 am Title: Chapter 31
Looks like Justin is not alone and Lindsay came to the rescue. Great job.
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2018 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 31
Yes They Finally Have The Thumb Drive, Now Julian, Carter and their Cohorts Can Pay!
George Jr. and Virginia never deserved George but George deserved to see his grandson grow in a loving home, they better run cause if George is right about Justin then they will Pay Dearly for this Deception!!!
Now Justin has to deal with finding out George may be his Grandfather and someday meeting his mother?
Yeah he needs a moment or a week to adjust to all these new revelation and finding out his father is a Vile, Self-absorbed, A-Hole along with his Grandmother.
Wow!!!
Date: Oct 07, 2018 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 31
Why to go Hunter! You recorded that very important conversation!
Emmett... Bless your heart. You got Junior there, thought of the Teddy Bear, and told that irritated Hill just why it was vitally important to share everything when dealing with something of this magnitude. Good thing Lindsay and Mel walked into the kitchen when they did.
Poor George. To hear what his money has been allowed to do all these years, and what his wife and son have done in the past, and probably still doing some horrendous things to this day, has to be so disheartening. The FBI shouldn't have any problem tracking down Jennifer and her Mother, that's if the mother is still alive. Neither of the George's said Jennifer's last name, but if George would just think about it, remembering it's "Taylor", that should also prove Justin is George's Grandson.
Well, Virginia and George, Jr just screwed their lives up, by screwing the wrong people. I'm pretty sure the statute of limitations is eight years after the child turns eighteen, so nothing can be done legally against either of them for bedding a minor. I know Jennifer will never have to hurt for money ever again, but it would be fun to see something monetary happen to Virginia and Junior for doing this. Although I guess it will when George cuts their money off, and drags their name through the mud. But would that hurt Justin, and in return, Jennfer? If Junior thinks he can sue George for money, well, he better realize he will be laughed out of court. Just how has Jennifer and her Mother survived all these years if Virginia made sure they couldn't get employment? And what has Virginia promised to have done to Jennifer if she talks to George?
Okay, that brings me to Justin. Brian better hurry out of the kitchen and find Justin. I can just imagine the million thoughts going through Justin's head, and the feelings he's having trying to deal with this revelation. A Family... A Mother, a Grandmother, and a Grandfather. Something I'm pretty sure he's resigned himself from knowing he would never have. (we won't include Virginia and Jr as family.)
Carter better really watch out, and then pray to a god that he doesn't believe in, when they find him. And Julian hasn't escaped anybody's wrath because now the FBI has the thumb drive! Oh how delighted that makes me feel!
This story is such an incredibly, fantastic story. Thank you for this update. Looking forward to your next chapter.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Oct 07, 2018 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 31
Oh this is getting better and better. Great writing.
Date: Oct 07, 2018 9:53 pm Title: Chapter 31
I can't even begin to describe what I felt reading this chapter! OMG! First, the whole story about what Jr. did to Jennifer....MY GOOD GRAVY AND BISCUITS, I can't wait until George and the rest make, HAM out of Virginia and her minion!
Then the discovery, and George's reaction to seeing the bear...OMG! Please, oh writing Goddess, let Justin and George make their peace. They both have suffered so much because of the betrayal and all for the sake of a 'family name!'
As for the last....YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!! They have the thumb drive. Time for Julian to FRY!
Awesome chapter, StarBaby!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 07, 2018 12:54 am Title: Chapter 30
Great update. So it is the teddy bear. Never thought about that. Great idea.
[Report This]Date: Oct 06, 2018 1:18 am Title: Chapter 30
Lots of new stuff. Is Gus in danger?
Date: Oct 06, 2018 12:47 am Title: Chapter 30
Okay... Lots of clues here. Last chapter I thought of the Teddy Bear, but thinking about it, I thought it had simething to do with the financials Ted was going through. Maybe I need to go back and read through all that again. Let's hope Lindsay remembers the drive... VERY SOON!
George Jr. and the maid's daughter. What happened to the baby? Did they give it up? If they did, could it be Justin? Because how would Justin get a 'high end' Teddy Bear, if he was left in an orphanage?
Very Good Update... Looking very forward for more,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2018 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 30
Yes Lindsay Found The Hard Drive!!
Now when she gets through with Mel distracting her then she can show it to Brian, Emmett, Ted, Blake, George, The Loch Ness Monster, BigFoot at this point Anybody!!! <fans self>
George Jr and Virginia are a bunch of HYPOCRITES!!!
They have some nerve looking down their noses at George for wanting to living his life Honestly and Free, while they were hiding some big secrets that they allowed Carter to use to get what he wanted.
They treat George like dirt but they don't say no or turn away the money or the prestige his name brings <eye roll> A-Holes!!!!
The rich have such stupid rules for Right and Wrong, Lies and Honesty those rules played right into Carter and Julian's hands.
Could George's grandson be a certain Blonde everyone loves??
Date: Oct 05, 2018 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 30
What a family! And the Ice Queen was blaming George for being gay! She should have looked at her own behaviour and her son's. I guess it's the WASP way of life.
I hope Julian won't go after Gus if he thinks the Teddy bear is no more with Justin.
Date: Sep 29, 2018 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 29
You are spinning a trail of intrique. I can't wait for everybody to get their just due. Especially all the Yates. I guess the race is on to figure out where the flash drive is so they can connect all the pieces of the puzzle. Kip's an ass.
Date: Sep 29, 2018 7:04 am Title: Chapter 29
Kip has been stealing money and it's Justin's fault if his life became a nightmare: easy to let the blame on somebody else.
[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2018 2:59 am Title: Chapter 29
So many hints, but I'm not sure who has what.
[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2018 2:07 am Title: Chapter 1 Alone in a crowd
They are really close to finding that drive and everything to come crashing down around Julian and his Sadistic Friends..Yess!!!
Julian better enjoy his freedom cause his days are numbered :)