Date: Apr 28, 2018 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 7
Really loving this complex story you’re crafting. It’s intriguing! TAG
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2018 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 7
Justin is going to get involved in a way he never has. Genius that he is Julian doesn't stand a chance. Brian's already figured part of it out.
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2018 9:01 pm Title: Chapter 7
I am loving this Thriller and your view of Justin and Brian. Keep em coming, look forward to your updates
Date: Apr 28, 2018 6:47 pm Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter with Justin opening up with Gus and Mel. Brian is starting to think about Julian and Ben's intentions regarding himself: I hope it won't become dangerous.
Date: Apr 28, 2018 4:45 pm Title: Chapter 6
Well, the intro to Mel & Lindz went pretty well... TAG
Date: Apr 28, 2018 2:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
I'm glad Gus and Justin got along so well. And that was some kiss.
Date: Apr 28, 2018 11:43 am Title: Chapter 1 Alone in a crowd
I'm hooked.
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2018 3:48 am Title: Chapter 6
Somehow I thing Brian will solve what Julian's problem and how it involves Ben before Julian figures out he's lost Justin's attention.
Date: Apr 28, 2018 3:37 am Title: Chapter 6
Great update. This story is so different and shows Brian & Justin in a way not seen before. Great job.
Date: Apr 26, 2018 8:41 pm Title: Chapter 5
I had tried to read this on my phone when the first chapter was posted... and I honestly had difficulty following, especially the point of view. But I started it last night on my computer and read the entire thing in one night! I like that maybe Ben isn't as awful as we were first led to believe. Looking forward to the next installment!
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2018 9:42 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hmm, does that make Ben a double agent? It appears that Brian gets through to Justin where no one else can.
Date: Apr 25, 2018 6:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yay, new story! This is different than your usual style and very interesting. More psychological/philosphical and more 'in their heads'. Choices is a bit like that too, but this is more so.
Looking forward to the rest of the story. Great so far.
Ta
Deb
Date: Apr 25, 2018 6:45 pm Title: Chapter 5
Good , Ben is not a total sleaze.
Date: Apr 25, 2018 6:05 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yay! I'm so glad that Ben isn't really a bad guy! Nice kiss scene too! TAG
Date: Apr 25, 2018 5:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ben's a double agent (for lack of a better description). Oh yeah big hurt coming.
Justin's being used for his brain and is so innocent that he can't realize it. Ben's right. Need to keep Brian in the picture.
A kiss so hot it sends their hearts racing. Nice.
Date: Apr 25, 2018 5:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
Glad to read that Ben isn't the bad guy here; only, Brian doesn't know that yet.
I love how you are building their relationship and how Brian is acting.
Date: Apr 25, 2018 5:18 pm Title: Chapter 5
Great writing. Glad that Ben is kind of a good guy. Love that Brian & Justin are getting closer. Terrific story.
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2018 2:22 am Title: Chapter 4
How sweet OK I hate Ben and Julian in this story...what does Justin do for these people ? Like you writing, again got me hooked
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2018 12:03 am Title: Chapter 3
OK Who the hell is Justin working for...don't Like Julian. Brian will help protect Justin
[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2018 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
Can't stand Michael....can't wait to see hope Brian and Justine deal with each other as this story goes along. i am hooked
Date: Apr 24, 2018 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wondering just what Julian is doing that has Justin doing work for him and watching his every move. We do know that he's feeling threatened by Brian and his presence in Justin's life.
Whoever is watching Justin surely has eyes on the loft.
Ben hooking up with Michael to get info on Brian is not a good idea. Either its going to backfire and Michael is going to get hurt or .Ben is going to get caught in the cross fire from Julian's anger. Either doesn't bode well.
[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2018 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 1 Alone in a crowd
This is interesting I like it
Date: Apr 24, 2018 3:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter. If anyone get help Justin become normal it is Brian. Great writing.
Date: Apr 24, 2018 5:20 am Title: Chapter 4
I was a little confused at first but now it's getting real interesting.
[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2018 4:46 am Title: Chapter 4
Two lonely people no longer alone. What happens when Brian finds out Ben is the Ben he thought it might be? Thank goodness for Emmett.