[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2018 3:23 am Title: Chapter 1 Alone in a crowd
I love this story and seeing these updates...but what about your other unfinished stories? Love to see those updates. Thanks 😃
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2018 2:09 am Title: Chapter 19
Wow. Looks like Kinnetik is going to do well. It's nice that Brian offered Lindsay a job. She'd probably do well. Justin is good at what he does and Hunter is a big help.
Date: Jun 26, 2018 1:43 am Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter. They are making progress in the connection of the two evil people. Good writing.
[Report This]Date: Jun 24, 2018 6:15 pm Title: Chapter 18
Things are starting to come together. Keep these chapters coming.
[Report This]Date: Jun 24, 2018 4:34 pm Title: Chapter 18
Julian may that no his hands are clean but they are just as dirty as Gary's and his Daddy's, procuring teenagers for your father is just as sick as helping Sapperstein procure this kids for his buyers, you are profiting on the suffering of others and you don't care unless it tarnishes your squeaky clean image.
Once Justin gets everything he needs about Daddy Dearest <shudders> then they can move to tighten the noose around the cretins and their associates.
Plus Justin can stand up to all the others who want to use his mind for their own selfish reasons, that they might want to rethink that plan unless they want him and his Many, Many, Many Associates to dig into their closets??
Hunter hacking Sapperstein was good but foolish because he is taking unnecessary risks to get Justin's attention despite already having it.
Looks like Brian is on his way to conquering the world with some very strong backers, who will know after meeting Brian that he can't be bought or bullied by anyone.
Looks like soon all the players will be revealed and the rats will start jumping ship.
Date: Jun 24, 2018 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 18
Wow, great chapter. Glad to see that the troups are gathering and maybe Julian and the Sap will finally get what is coming to them. Sick SOB'S !!!!
Date: Jun 24, 2018 7:32 am Title: Chapter 18
Whoa: that's a heavy one! It's disgusting what they are doing (Sap & Co) and the worse is that it might not only be a fiction; I think it's happening in RL.
Date: Jun 19, 2018 10:50 am Title: Chapter 17
Julian is fighting a losing battle trying to keep Justin under his control. Julian I'm sure put the fear of G-d into Gary to stay away from Justin. If anything happened to Justin Gary would be a dead man. Someone needs to find a link between the two quickly. Julian is losing his grip.
With Blake's help someone is going to know something.
So cute that Brian goes storming after Justin. Aah love.
Date: Jun 18, 2018 4:58 pm Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter. Love that Blake is clean now and going to help.
Date: Jun 18, 2018 5:19 am Title: Chapter 17
It makes sense that the Sapp would feel threaten by Justin's visit to Babylon.
I love how he is becoming a part of this family and that Blake is back.
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2018 12:17 am Title: Chapter 17
Am loving this more and more. With so many people involved they are bound to find something.
[Report This]Date: Jun 17, 2018 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 17
What is the thing that links Julian and Sapp besides human trafficking and getting people to do their bidding?
It has to be something or someone who has the potential to not only send them to jail but take away the money too?
Blake clean and ready to help is good perhaps the kids will trust him because he has been out there trying to get help them?
Brian and Justin are so in love:)
Date: Jun 12, 2018 2:47 pm Title: Chapter 16
All I can say is that Brian and Mel are my kind of people! Justin and Lindsay aren't any slouches either. I near choked laughing when Justin said he was all for getting the shovel. I'm so happy that he's coming out of his shell even within his own thoughts. Now it's going to take trust on all their parts to destroy Julian. WHOO-WEE, I wanted to use his blood to butter Nancy's bread when he threatened Gus! Damn arrogant, ignorant whelp! It was nice to see Ron standing by Lindsay to protect the most hapless and helpless victim in all of this.
As for Justin's first time, it was both hot and sweet. And the fact that they love each other...<insert deep sigh here>
Looking forward to MORE!
HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jun 11, 2018 3:05 pm Title: Chapter 16
Nice way to deal with Justin’s first time here. TAG
Date: Jun 10, 2018 6:43 pm Title: Chapter 16
Good chapter. Julian will find out no one messes with Gus !!!!!!!!!!!! Great job.
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2018 4:47 pm Title: Chapter 16
Julian is so going to regret coming after Brian, Justin and everyone else.
This payback will hurt for decades!!
Date: Jun 10, 2018 4:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh shit! What can he do? Yes, I'm intriguied.
Date: Jun 10, 2018 3:21 pm Title: Chapter 1 Alone in a crowd
Wow, this was different. I liked it. Are you on A03? I read there the most. I'll continue this tonight. Can't wait.
Thanks
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2018 1:42 pm Title: Chapter 16
Julian doesn't realize the big mistake he made in trying to threaten the Lesbians. Justin and Daphne will bury the creep. At least now Justin's knows that he has Brian.
Date: Jun 10, 2018 11:18 am Title: Chapter 16
The way Mel and Brian reacted to Gus' potential safety would be funny if the situation wasn't so dramatic. They are both made of the same material, they are both straightforward, brutally honest and don't take BS from anybody.
The only positive thing was Justin's declaration to Brian even if it was to stop him from killing Julian, it wasn't any less true.
Date: Jun 10, 2018 10:51 am Title: Chapter 16
Brian and Mel are so much alike it's almost funny. The will to violently protect beaten out by the need for caution. Going to stay at George's will be great fun for Gus.
Best night's sleep Justin has had in a long time.
Date: Jun 10, 2018 9:12 am Title: Chapter 15
It seems that Lindsey borrowed Mel's balls; it suits her well because she's hot when she's angry.
If Geroge, Ronald, Carl and the gang are behind Justin, Julian should start to worry.
Brian and Justin have a lot in common regarding their youths, but Brian wasn't so naive. It's great that they have each other and that they understand each other without talking.
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2018 4:38 am Title: Chapter 15
Interesting to see Lindsay in a different light. I'm not surprised that Ted and Emmett are backing Justin. It's what they do.
Date: Jun 10, 2018 2:04 am Title: Chapter 15
Justin has gotten his little group together without trying. Amazing what friends will do for you.
Julian must be desperate if he thinks going after Gus is going to get Brian, or get Brian away from Justin. Gardner failed. Not only does Brian have Carl on his side but also George and now Ron.
Julian really doesn't have any idea what or who he's up against.