Date: Feb 13, 2018 5:21 am Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this story a lot and even went and downloaded the song!
Author's Response:
It's amazing how many times a song will inspire a story and this one clearly did. I'm so glad you liked my story and wanted to check out the song too. Thank you for letting me know. Hugs, Grammy
Date: Feb 08, 2018 4:21 am Title: Chapter 1
I really loved this. You have captured Brian's thoughts and feelings exactly as I think he would have responded also. Just great :-)
Author's Response:
It is always a challenge in trying to get inside Brian's head, but I love doing it. I'm so glad that you think I captured his thoughts in the right way. Thank you so much for the comments, Nickknack. Huge hugs, Grammy
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Date: Feb 04, 2018 1:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved this so much, very beautiful words :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Sally. I loved trying to get inside Brian's rather complicated thoughts. Hugs, Grammy
Date: Feb 03, 2018 8:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Another great story. It really felt like just how Brian was feeling.
Author's Response:
That is such a welcome comment, Mamab. Brian is such a complicated character and not easy to read, so if you think I captured him accurately I am very grateful. Thank you very much. Warm hugs, Grammy
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Date: Feb 03, 2018 3:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Splendid writing..loved it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Nkaur. This was a very short story, but I tried to fill it with all the love Brian had inside him, which I always believed was such a huge amount just waiting to be given out. Hugs, Grammy
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Date: Feb 03, 2018 1:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
A look from Brian's POV makes a the difference in the world.
Author's Response:
I had always tried to imagine what was the one thing that first made Brian start building up a wall around his heart, so this was my version of that event. I'm so glad you liked it, YumYum. Thank you for commenting. Hugs, Grammy