Reviewer: justinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2019 7:10 am Title: Chapter 1

You're a natural please continue. This is a great start.

Reviewer: Erbear4474 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2018 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

Omg!!! Please continue...this is a great storyline. Hoping for more, Erin 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2018 6:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hello Deb,

I can see that "Holy Shit, I posted!" expression on your face. But darling, GET OVER IT and GET WRITING! Trust me, the feeling of excitement, nervousness and shock never goes away, but it is always, ALWAYS worth it! 

Looking forward to reading more of your work!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

P.S. If you need inspiration or want a co-writer/beta, put the word out especially on the KD Facebook page or contact one of the Admins of the site for assistance. I'm sure that you will have no shortage of folks willing and able to keep you highly motivated. As for me, I'm so proud of you already! YOU GO GIRL <in my Emmett voice>! 

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2018 6:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

................and..............."The End"?

Great beginning, but such a cliffhanger with "The End" at the bottom is obvioulsy asking, screaming for more.

Please, pretty please.

 

Author's Response:

Yes okay, will prob be more once I've thought about it.  Thank you for your review.  Deb

Reviewer: starlight Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2018 5:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Loved what you did, and I'm hoping you'l continue but if not really good.

Author's Response:

OMG I got a review from Starlight (bows down) I am not worthy!  You know you are pretty much my fave author. 

Yeah everyone is urging me to continue, so once I get over the fact that I actually did this I'm probably going to have to.  

Thanks for review Star.

Deb

Reviewer: Stauneauge Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2018 5:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, what a beginning. I like it so much to want to read more. Please let the end only be a cliffhanger!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.  Still not sure I did this.  Very spur of the moment, so need to think more on it.  Deb

Reviewer: Kinneysbitch Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2018 4:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh please carry on I need to know what happens..... fab first fic well done

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, need to calm down a bit before I can think to continue!  Deb

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2018 4:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Firstly, I'd like to welcome you to Kinnetik Dreams and secondly OMG, please continue this. This was amazing!!!!

 

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.  Still trying to get over the fact that I actually had the nerve to do this and get reviews from some of my fave authors like you! Need to mull and contemplate and think where to go from here.  Deb

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2018 3:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

Definitely a cliffhanger. The writing is very good. No real mistakes that I noticed, but leaving it as a cliffhanger doesn't usually go well with readers. They want an end. Leaving it this way, mimics the series which left too many questions unansered and you must know that so many years later there are campaigns trying to get a reunion or Season 6 to answer those questions. If you were able to come up with such a good start to a story, I think you will come up with another chapter or two to give it a good ending (me, I like happy ones). Congratulations on taking the chance and starting a writing career. I think you can do more.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.  Yes it was a bit mean of me but had sudden panic that I actually did it and need to calm down and think about it before I can think aboiut continuing. Deb

Reviewer: DramaQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2018 2:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Another chapter please........

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.   First thing I've ever written anywhere and took some wine to do so! Let me mull for a few days and work out how to continue.