Date: Jul 24, 2018 7:45 pm Title: Chapter 5
I hate Mel and I hate what she did so I hope she gets the full out treatment she deserves. I truly hope that Gus’s trip with his dad is an amazing one and helps him get to know him and Justin.
Date: Jul 24, 2018 7:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
What a powerful Chapter and I’m proud of Gus for standing strong in what he wanted. If I was him I wouldn’t let them away with what they did. It was cruel. I can’t wait to see how this goes x
Date: Jul 24, 2018 4:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
Brian has good friends there helping him and Justin helping as well with Gus, I hope it eorks. It’s not fair on Brian and Gus.
Excellent work x
Date: Jul 24, 2018 11:25 am Title: Chapter 2
I feel for them both they both have family that’s shitty and that is not fair. I can’t wait for them to be together in the house and start a family life. Hopefully Brian can gain back a relationship with Gus.
Date: Jul 23, 2018 4:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Excellent first chapter and so interesting to see the dance around the relationship stuff and wow what a shock announcement. I hope this helps heal Brian’s relationship with Gus it’s not fair on him.
[Report This]Date: May 14, 2018 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 28
A Beautiful Wedding and A Scorching Start to the honeymoon <fans self>
My goodness I hope their room is soundproof? lol ;)
Date: May 14, 2018 11:38 am Title: Chapter 1
I’m loving this, it’s so nice to see Brian chasing after Justin for a change â¤ï¸
[Report This]Date: May 14, 2018 4:05 am Title: Chapter 28
What a fantastic wedding. So glad to see more of this story.
Date: May 14, 2018 3:46 am Title: Chapter 28
What a wedding! The vows are beautiful and the ending... burning hot!!!
Date: May 14, 2018 1:33 am Title: Chapter 28
Wow, what a great chapter. Our boys are happily married. Terrific writing.
[Report This]Date: Apr 22, 2018 1:49 am Title: Chapter 27
Bravo. Drunk Mikey is so funny.
[Report This]Date: Apr 22, 2018 1:07 am Title: Chapter 27
Jennifer is taking the time to make amends with Justin perhaps with time they can be friends and then Mother and son again.
The wedding is going to be so beautiful and so Brian and Justin.
Date: Apr 21, 2018 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 27
Good update. The wedding is getting close. Can't wait.
Date: Apr 16, 2018 12:14 am Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter. Glad that Justin will get Molly back. Good job
Date: Apr 15, 2018 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 26
Molly seems sincere for once and gets along with Brian; Gus helps too.
I hope it's not a scheme to get something out of Justin.
[Report This]Date: Apr 15, 2018 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 26
Justin's conflicting emotions about having his mother and Molly at the wedding is understandable they both let him down for selfish reasons.
Molly is taking the effort to make amends to Justin and she is willing to wait for him to forgive her.
Now it's Jennifer's turn to make the effort words just won't cut it with Justin and Brian's motto is Actions Speak Louder Than Words.
Craig is going to be running f poo r h I s life when his friends find out they are about to be hit with some hefty lawsuits from their unwanted children and from their wives when they find out.
Law firms are going to be so busy lol
Wonderful Update:)
Date: Apr 15, 2018 7:39 pm Title: Chapter 25
What a family! None of them is better than the other.
I hope Jennifer will be able to show Justin that she has changed.
[Report This]Date: Apr 15, 2018 7:23 pm Title: Chapter 26
It's so good that Molly has come to the right decision.
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2018 9:54 pm Title: Chapter 25
Yes! You've given us another excellant chapter and I can't wait for more.
Date: Apr 09, 2018 8:07 pm Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter. Will always stick with you. You are an amazing writer and I am always happy when you can update. Hope RL treats you better.
Date: Apr 09, 2018 6:37 pm Title: Chapter 25
Hmmmmm. Is Marshall finally getting throught ot Molly? I hope so for her own sake, if not Justin's.
Jen has MUCH to prove. Hopefully she doesn't expect much, at least not for a time yet. It won't be instantaneous that's for sure.
Justin and Michael are a hoot in this! Scheming together rather than at each other. I like those too!!! but this sied of them is fun.
Another great chapter!
thanks
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2018 6:31 pm Title: Chapter 25
Kinda sucks when real life invades your writing time.
Molly has some hard truths to work out in her mind.
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2018 5:31 pm Title: Chapter 25
Molly heard what Marshall, Jennifer and Brian had to say but will she listen and try to make amends with Justin?
Marcus and Tonya Taylor are The Petersons just with less money and clout.
Craig wasted his breath talking to Justin who doesn't need or want his approval, Justin is a strong independent man with too much integrity to fall for such childish antics.
With Cynthia in charge Taylor Electronics will actually be profitable and have customers flowing in, instead of money flowing out so often.
Michael and Justin are going to get Joan Brian is just delaying the inevitable now lol
Don't mind waiting for updates your stories are so Enthralling ;)
Date: Mar 26, 2018 3:24 pm Title: Chapter 24
I imagine Mel having hormones messing with her system: that should be funny to read about.
Joan didn't dare taking Justin's proposal: how could she face her church with all the things she has done or let others do to Brian.
[Report This]Date: Mar 26, 2018 1:40 am Title: Chapter 24
I'm certain that Joanie doesn't get it and won't be getting anything any time soon. Nice of Mikey to get food for Justin.