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Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2018 6:54 am Title: January 30

Nice. Normal and nice.

If I were Justin I wouldn't give any thought to Michael.



Author's Response:

I don't think Justin is going to unless it's to verbally smack him down.

Reviewer: MoonQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2018 6:34 am Title: January 29

Still very much in love with this story. Smiling at all the sexy, fun fluffiness of the last couple of chapters but now I'm ready for a Mikey smackdown. Please say that's coming soo .



Author's Response:

We're building to it, I promise. A couple things need to happen yet and Mikey has been making himself scarce...he won't allude Brian for long.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2018 4:22 pm Title: January 29

Sunbeam is going to have a fabulous album when he will be born.

If Justin is wondering fi Brian finds him still attractive now, what will it be when he will be up to nine months?



Author's Response:

Well, Justin is just a bit overwhelmed at the moment; and he gets to say why in the next chapter. He'll perk up to his usual self soon.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2018 4:01 pm Title: January 28

I love this side of Brian and Justin's couple, when they tease each other with something else than sex. The Twinkies' running joke is one of them.



Author's Response:

I love inside jokes between couples; you have to have a little fun with each other, especially for the times where life seems to get in the way of your happiness.



Author's Response:

I love inside jokes between couples; you have to have a little fun with each other, especially for the times where life seems to get in the way of your happiness.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2018 1:28 pm Title: January 29

I can't believe Justin let Michael's words get to him, even a little bit. If there is any doubt in his head that Brian truly loves him, he just needs to think of this time in their closet.

What kind of project is Gus working on? Is he documenting Justin's pregnancy? All nine months.



Author's Response:

Well, Justin has had quite a bit heaped on hi lately. We'll get to see his POV on why it happened in the next chapter. As for Gus project; I mentioned it briefly in chapter 12. He's having them film the baby bumb every day, documenting the growth for a video he's making for his end of the year project in his mass media class. It won't be the full nine months as Justin is due after school ends, but it will document a good portion of it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2018 12:49 pm Title: January 29

Brian sooo loooooves his Sunshine and Michael is in for a world of hurt.



Author's Response:

Oh yes he is; and we are getting closer to that day. :)

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2018 11:34 am Title: January 29

Wow!  I'm glad you scrapped your previous chapter.  This was amazing.  It's so nice to see Brian grown up emotionally.  Their love scene was so hot and romantic.

Love Helen Mirren.  I can totally picture her as Lucille Brown. :)



Author's Response:

I lover her too; a woman with class, yet takes no one's shit. And I'm glad that you liked the alternative chapter; I'm rather pleased witho how it turned out given  had nothing more than a very vague idea of wanting to show them working on Gus' project. thanks! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2018 1:49 pm Title: January 28

You've hit all the prompts it seems to me.  An enjoyable chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2018 11:32 am Title: January 28

I think you hit the prompts.  I loved this chapter.  I like seeing them interact with people outside of their inner circle.

 



Author's Response:

This was a difficult one. It's a POV from someone that's not even a minor character; but really someone that made a guest appearance. Which you'd think would make things easier as you can take liberties with the characterization. But it also means you don't have a firm voice in your head. It makes for tough writing. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2018 7:19 pm Title: January 27

Baby shower sounds nice and the planned food incredible.

Brandon, that slimy bugger, does he really think he'd ever haveva chance with Justin Brian or no.

Brian has an evil streak a mile wide doesn't he? So much fun when he shows it.



Author's Response:

LOL! Brian does love to tease his Sunshine; but that's alright, Justin dishes it right back. :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2018 1:34 pm Title: January 27

The baby shower sounds great.  Love how Emmett is protective about Justin until you mention shopping!  LOL.  



Author's Response:

Yes, well, it is shopping. Em will protect his friends from anything - including their bad fashion choices. LOL Thanks! :)

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2018 1:03 pm Title: January 27

Yuck, now Brandon.  Poor Justin he's not allowed to have an easy pregnacy is he?  He first has to put up with the mother's mothering him, Michael being a jerk as always and now Brandon.  He would creep me out too.

So glad our fairy godmother was around.  Thanks Em for calling his hubby to handle the sleeze.

 



Author's Response:

It's far more peaceful than you'd think, despite the hiccups here and there. But it wouldn't be Brian and Justin if there wasn't a little drama. And Em is the best friend ever. Everyone needs an Em. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2018 10:12 am Title: January 27

Em is the best kind of friend. He will help no matter what.



Author's Response:

Em is awesome; definitely one of my favorite characters. :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2018 8:45 am Title: January 27

I see Emmett going shopping with Brian and go back with the car full of bags.

Brandon can be so annoying; I hope he won't try anything drastic to get what he wants.



Author's Response:

brandon is indeed an ass; hopefully Brian will keep him in his place. And Brian and Emmett shopping together sounds horrifying to me. I'm like this Justin. I hate shopping; so I can fully understand why he wouldn't want to go with two such well-know fashion queens. Thanks!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2018 4:43 pm Title: January 26

I love the thought of them snuggling on the couch while Gus is there.  It's the family that Justin has always wanted and Brian has always needed.

I'm glad Brian is finally seeing that things are not all hunky dory with Michael.  He needs to defend his husband and put Michael in his place.  I'm glad Daphne did it but Brian needs to.  It's the only way Michael will ever learn.

Thanks for the awesome update.



Author's Response:

I really do like the family scenes. I hope to work more in later. Brian will definitely be taking on Michael soon. I have a few scenes to get through before we get ther though, so just bear with me.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2018 4:05 pm Title: January 26

Michael is going to hear some roaring that won't please him!

Gus, Brian and Justin make a great family.



Author's Response:

But roaring he will fully deserve when we get to it. Right now, Mikey is still in hiding.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2018 2:55 pm Title: January 26

He loves being content. He hadvhis family around him.

I'm with Gus in beibg surprised Brian hadn't heard of the video yet.

And I just thought how stupid of Michael to ask Justin where Brian was on the middle if the Big Q. Like he'd step foot in the store, with Justin or not. The ass knew he was away on business. Shmuck!



Author's Response:

Brian hasn't heard because he went straight home from the airplane. And then the following day, he only talked to Justin, Gus and Jenny, who were all keeping quiet on it. If Justin hadn't called Emmett and asked him to come over, and Em went shopping with the others, you can guarantee that he woud have heard all about it because Em would not let that pass.

Reviewer: MoonQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2018 2:24 pm Title: January 26

OMG! A YouTube video of the smackdown....and it went viral! EPIC! Can't wait for Brian to confront Michael. It needs to be just as brutal as Daphne's....and YouTubed. 

Gus crushing on Daph is so cute. The Kinney men have excellent taste in the love dept.

Hoping and pleading for another chapter today. 🙏



Author's Response:

Brian will definitely put Michael in his place, but a couple things need to happen first so it will take a few scenes. Gus is adorable in his crushing. I'm sure we'll see more of it later.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2018 1:52 pm Title: January 26

You did a great job of getting Brian to see the video.  Can't wait to see the results of their little talk.  



Author's Response:

We have a few scenes before we get there, but get there we will. :)

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2018 10:57 am Title: January 26

There is no such thing as privacy anymore. Ha ha. Now the whole world knows what a ass Mikey is.



Author's Response:

Well, he's always wanted to be the center of attention; now he's got it. ;)

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2018 7:44 am Title: January 26

Glad Brian found out...love this story

Author's Response:

It was only a matter of time before he did. The only reason he hadn't was he went straight home from the airport and outside of Justin, Gus and Jenny, who were keeping mum on the whole deal, he hadn't really talked to anyone else. Thanks!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2018 4:22 pm Title: January 25

Ha ha ha, it was obvious Brian will have a major queen out. Excellent!



Author's Response:

Seriously; shopping at the Big Q? What was Justin thinking?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2018 4:03 pm Title: BONUS! (January 24)

It was an amazingly hot chapter: how can Justin not tease Brian when it ends like this...



Author's Response:

I keep telling Brian that he needs a better threat if he expects Justin to behave; but I strongly suspect that Brian is delighted by Justin's antics. ;)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2018 3:10 pm Title: January 25

Great chapter to a great story.  Love the way Brian reacts, but Justin just never gives in.



Author's Response:

Justin is very stubborn. They are well matched in that respect.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2018 3:01 pm Title: BONUS! (January 24)

WOW, all I can say is HOT, HOT, HOT !!!!!  Could just picture the scenes!!!!! And, this is the Brian Kinney that didn't believe in relationships or heaven forbid LOVE.



Author's Response:

Most people fall prey to the love bug eventually; it just took Brian longer than most. Thanks!

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