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Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2018 5:52 am Title: April 3 (Part Two)

Now that is how you end a chapter. Leave us begging for more.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2018 5:45 pm Title: April 3 (Part Two)

LINDSAY YOU MOTHERF$#KING BITCH!!!!!!!!!!

That Skanky Cow May Know Who The Stalker Is and Has Been Suppyling This Creepy Asshole With Information About Justin!!!

Time to find her and rip her a new Asshole.

Tak better get to her before Brian and Justin cause they may just kill that Bitch!!!

And The Race Is On!!!

 

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2018 3:11 pm Title: April 3 (Part Two)

Lindsay did take pictures of the nursery; this could be a reason why the stalker has one. The orther reason could be that he was able to get inside Britin, which is really creepy.

They actually made a huge step forward on this investigation.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2018 3:02 pm Title: April 3 (Part Two)

Lindsay! She's the stalker's contact to everything Brian and Justin. She was taking pictures when Justin caught her in the hallway. 

What about video footage from the grocery store?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2018 12:41 pm Title: April 3 (Part Two)

A picture of the nursery.  He could have only gotten it from Lindsay.  If I remember correctly she was taking pictures of it when Justin had his showdown with her.  The mystery thickens.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2018 12:13 pm Title: April 3 (Part Two)

OMG,  If possible your writing just gets better and better.  You really have me on the edge of my seat with this chapter.  FANTASTIC.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2018 12:12 pm Title: April 3 (Part Two)

OMG,  If possible your writing just gets better and better.  You really have me on the edge of my seat with this chapter.  FANTASTIC.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2018 11:43 pm Title: April 3 (Part One)

Oh Nancy is not going to be Happy about this, instead of being apart or leading a Wasp Freeze Out she is the focus of it.

All Thanks to Her Lovely Daughter Lindsay <Applause>

So what happened to Lindsay's face and hair?

Is the inside really starting to be reflected on the outside?? :)

Did Mother Taylor and Cynthia have something to do with The Petersons Freeze Out?

Yasmeen and Cynthia are so evil to tease Justin lol

Love a good afternoon of juicy gossip should have Brian rolling with glee when Justin tells him.

Superb Update:)

Hope RL will give you a break soon.

 

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2018 7:55 pm Title: April 3 (Part One)

I love how Cynthia and Yasmeen are teasing Justin: hilarious!

Brian and Justin really have a great relationship in this story: they are affectionate, passionate, considerate, hot, supportive, teasing (on many levels).

What happened to Lindsey? Does she have a health problem? I bet Emmett couldn't wait too long before gossiping this new piece of WASP's news!

Regarding the new text's size: I have been using Chrome for years and I can change the size of the text without any problem with the +/- buttons (above the list of chapters) on all other stories except this one since you changed the default font. It's not a big issue, I was just curious. I just need to change the zooming on Chrome instead of +/- in the story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2018 12:46 pm Title: April 3 (Part One)

Have I missed a chapter?  I don't remember Lindsay having a facial problem.  I'm thorougly enjoyed this chapter and the large text.  Both work for me.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2018 12:40 pm Title: April 3 (Part One)

Great chapter.  Can't wait to see what Linds did this time.  And, the larger font is great for those of us who need it.  Don't let RL get you down.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2018 10:22 pm Title: April 2

Those videos are so crazy.  Sometimes they have some informative facts but I think they are just there to freak you out. lol

Don't run on the stairs!!!!  Ha Ha.

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2018 9:10 pm Title: April 2

Poor Brian and those tapes....I bet he would habe preferred going out instead. I loves the butt plug...Sunshine is evil

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2018 6:35 pm Title: April 2

Justin can bother Brian as much as he wants, in the end, he will be the one on the table being cut open. The videos are as useful (you know what to expect) and freaking (you see what could happen).

I hope these were the last one because I don't think Brian could handle more.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2018 6:03 pm Title: April 2

Great Chapter!

Brian and Justin's banter while watching the videos makes me laugh, no matter how tedious they maybe Brian will sit through them to make Justin happy.

Brian will get an Amazing prize for sitting through those videos this time and so will Justin lol

Fantastic Update, hope RL will get better soon, Thanks :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2018 4:01 pm Title: April 2

Poor Brian.  Having to put up with those videos.  I have to admit that the idea of showing them in High School Health classes might reduce unwanted pregnancies greatly.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2018 2:28 pm Title: April 2

Great chapter.  Love reading certain lines and knowing exactly what their facial expressions are.  Hope RL gets better for you.

Reviewer: MoonQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2018 5:27 pm Title: April 1

Still loving this story. So amazing....the last couple of Chapters have been so sweet and light but still choc for of substance. How do you do it? I laughed out loud at Justin's April Fool',s email prank of the family. 😂 

Not that I missed Mikey...but he is useful for something...a plot device only....would be so funny if he tried coming in a day early to "surprise" everyone and end up passing the Taylor-Kinney's in the airport....but he only got a brief glance...so he didn't even got to say hello😁.

Thanks for another incredible fun chapter....Hope RL is being kind to you. If you celebrate this day ....Happy Mother's Day! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2018 5:20 pm Title: April 1

Love the April Fools prank.  Brian's was good since he hadn't even thought to do one.  Can't wait to find out what they plan for Lindsay, but I think it had better be sooner rather than later.  Also the talk with Tak.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2018 3:31 pm Title: April 1

Excellent! Justin scared in his own home while Brian is quietly in his home office, not knowing he could get hit by a meat mallet...

Another type of teasing between these two is always fun to read.

As for Simon, it seems that Justin is once more hiding something from Brian: it won't go away as easily as before if he continues doing that.

The email was hilarious: did I read "she" at the end of it this morning? I don't see it anymore; did you change this part?

ps: until §90. March 23 (Part One), the text was OK; now, it's very large; though, it's still legible.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2018 1:29 pm Title: April 1

 

great chapter.  And, loved the names for Sunbeam.  If you are celebrating, Happy Mother's Day to you and don't let RL get you down.

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2018 6:56 am Title: April 1

Always happy for the updates. Poor Justine just knew Brian was going to prank him...he is so embarrassed Poor Drama princess

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2018 10:53 am Title: March 31 (Part Two)

That was a sweet scene between Brian and the Moms.  I'm glad he was able to get them to leave...now he just has to face Justin.

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2018 11:15 pm Title: March 31 (Part Two)

Brian is sooo grown up and understanding explaining Justin to the Moms Great chapter once again

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2018 10:15 pm Title: March 31 (Part One)

Justin sick and Brian hovering....Very funny chapter Add the "Mothers" in and justin is going to loose his mind. I will not kill my husband LOL
Thanks needed a good laugh

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