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Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2018 2:56 pm Title: March 20

For Justin and Brian really were a waste of time. If Justin goes into labor they're going to do a cesarean anyway. The placenta will be taken care of while he's opened. The only thing they have to worry about is bringing Sunbeam home and out of the hands for it's grandmothers for a few days.



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Justin knows they are a waste of time, but he can't help messing with Brian. It amuses him to watch Brian sit there and squirm as he watches them. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2018 2:29 pm Title: March 20

Poor Brian having to watch all those videos.



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I do so love to torture him... ;) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2018 10:08 am Title: March 19

Sorry for your frustration...imagine how we feel, we want it solved,we want Sunbeam safe but we are along for the ride. Write how you want to

Author's Response:

Yeah, I do realize that; and I will be honest, it's meant to be frustrating. However, my frustration stemmed from writers block. I was having a very tough time just getting the words to flow that day, so by the time I was done writing the last word, I was just done period. But I'm not one to give up. And after a few hours of sleep, I was in a much better place. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2018 10:10 pm Title: March 19

I loved this chapter.  I'm glad Deb is finally seeing the light. lol

It's still going to take time for Brian especially to trust her completely but at least they seem to be meeting in the middle a bit.

Thanks again for the wonderful update.



Author's Response:

Hopefully she'll continue to think her words and actions through; although, I imagine that it will be tough going as she has been set in her ways for a while now, and that's tough to break. We'll have to see if she follows through. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2018 9:47 pm Title: March 19

Deb is finally seeing her responsibility in Michael's behaviour and promises to be careful not to do it again. Will she succeed? I doubt it, but I think she will try her best.



Author's Response:

We can hope that she will, but she is very set in her ways, and she has pampering the idiot for over 40 years now; that will be a hard habit to break. But hopefully she will think things through a bit before she loses the boys faith and trust. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2018 8:44 pm Title: March 19

Hang in there and keep it up you're doing so well.  Deb



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm doing better now, although I have had to make a difficult decision and change to the challenge I've been working on; but needs must. :) I'm glad you're enjoying it still,however. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2018 3:20 pm Title: March 19

It's so good to see Deb  admit that she's done wrong and to at least try to correct herself.  May not work, but we shall see.



Author's Response:

Hopefully she will continue in this vein before she irrevocably does damage that she can't repair to hers and the boys relationship. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: jayjaykmm Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2018 11:22 am Title: March 18

Finally caught up the story. I thought i knew who the stalker was, but then you lost me in the last few chapters. I really like justin interaction with lindsay. Its the lindsay basher in me. She just rub me the wrong way. Hope to see more of that.

I wonder if michael actually got that its over this time. That is another character that i dislike. I hope he's not involve with the stalker. And debbie should just leave him to solve his own problems. 



Author's Response:

Both Michael and Lindsay rubbed me wrong as well; although, I tend to be more of a Michael hater. I just can't stand him and didn't really like him him from the very beginning. I'm glad that you got caught up and are enjying the story though. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2018 10:35 am Title: March 18

I know Brian is severely frustrated.  I totally understand him wanting to lock Justin and Sunbeam away so that nothing happens to them.  That's natural.

Love his and Carl's banter. 

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

It's got to be difficult for the both of them, but for Brian especially as he's never dealt well with helplessness. Why can't peole just let them be? Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: qafqueenbee Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2018 10:38 pm Title: March 18

I'm caugth to  the right chapter now. I am enjoying reading this story, tyring to figure out who the staker is. I have an idea just waiting to see if i am right.

 

 

 

 

 

lah



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you had the chance to catch up and are enjoying the story. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2018 5:00 pm Title: March 18

I thought the chapter went ok.  Of course, we are all frustrated that there are no leads on the stalker, but we expect that since nothing happens easily.  Maybe you feel off since there is no March 17.  Were you celebrating St.Patty's Day and just decided to skip it???   Just kidding.  Don't get discouraged, you are writing a very good story that is very long and there are times when you just have to go with the flow.  Love this story.



Author's Response:

Thanks; it wasn't so much the plot that was irritating me, as that part is meant to be frustrating. It was just that I was having one of those days where I just couldn't write to save my life, and something that should have only taken a couple of hours took all day and all night. But, I didn't want to stop as I'm already behind with this story. As for St, Patty's the boys did celebrate it in a way, but given that Justin is pregnant, it was pretty quiet and nothing of importance happened that day. Mostly because Justin told Brian if he couldn't get drunk, he was so not getting drunk either. LOL! Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2018 4:42 pm Title: March 18

Knowing Brian and his legendary patience, they better find something or he will make a move to protect Justin and that won't go well. He also should be really careful to what he drinks and eats, every day when he is out.



Author's Response:

LOL! Sorry, that made me laugh. But yes, it's very true. Brian will likely go all Rage if they don't get a break in the case soon. And yes, they do need to be cautious about what they are consuming given this new development. I do see people making sure that they are taken care of so they won't have to worry, or will have minimal worries. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2018 3:15 pm Title: March 18

Can we all say brick wall. This investigation is becoming tedious. Something has to happen.

It can't be Simon for Justin would know him scarred or not. For some reason I'm leaning towards Brandon. Btian has everything he wants including Justin.



Author's Response:

It is frustrating; but it's meant to be. Keep in mind, the police and Brian and Justin have only been officially aware of the stalker since the beginning of February. That's only about a month and a half, which isn't long when you think about it. And they do need a break in the case; hopefully it will come sooner rather than later. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2018 2:45 pm Title: March 18

So Blaine was the bartender that night and the likely suspect for drugging Brian's drink.  But why?  Did Kelly really see someone spike Justin's drink?  Dum de dum dum.  The suspense is killing me.



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Tha is the question that they'd all like answered. Hopefully it will come sooner rather than later.And who knows on Justin's drink. It's hard to tell with the potential evidence gone. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: MoonQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2018 4:44 am Title: March 16

Bravo!!!👏👏👏 Brian went IN on Michael. Loved... Loved.....loved it. The Kid gloves came off this time. Michael better catch a clue....or Brian will catch a case....😂😂😂 No matter ...Brian is done repeating himself.

I have a theory about the spiked drink(s) but I wanna wait to see how things  play out in the next couple of Chapters. You ladies are so gifted. Can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

It needed to be done. I keep trying to write this idiot out of the story and he just keeps coming back for more. Hopefully with Brian spelling it out  as he did will be the necessary brick to the head to 'get him gone.' At least for a while. And the details of the spiked drinks will come out at least in part by the end of the month. Bt I am always curious to know your thoughts and theories, so feel free. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2018 12:50 am Title: March 16

Michael is stupid

Author's Response:

I couldn't have said it better myself. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2018 12:02 am Title: March 15 (Part Two)

Brian is going to have a hear attack soon if they(you) don't catch this bastard Loving,I think, the stress

Author's Response:

Well this is going to be a few stressful days; but I will try to get back to the lighthearted. For a while. My poor boys. I'll make it up to them. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2018 10:25 pm Title: March 16

Wow.  I hope that finally sank in with Michael.  It's over. 

I do hope Justin can rest the next few days.  The baby will be here before you know it.

Thanks for all the updates.



Author's Response:

One would hope with it being explicitly selled out that way, he'd catch a clue. But this is Mikey. He never stays away long enough for me. And Justin will hopefully get some rest, but I imagine it might be tough to decompress after that. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2018 8:11 pm Title: March 16

I hope that Jennifer didn't drink the glass that Justin didn't take.

Molly is going to be the death of Brian; he already spent months with Justin as a teenager, I bet he would like to avoid a rerun with a girl.



Author's Response:

Jennifer actually left before everything started, so she didn't get Justin's drink. But what did happen is a mystery. Was it just a regular illness or was she helped along by our stalker. I guess we'll have to wait and see. And Molly as Justin 2.0...poor Brian. LOL! Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2018 4:41 pm Title: March 15 (Part Two)

Creepy!!!!

Does that mean that the stalker wanted to get Justin and kidnap him?



Author's Response:

Thanks the way it's looking at this point. But I suppose we'll have to wait and see. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2018 4:30 pm Title: March 16

Great chapter.  Brian finally tells Michael just how it is, but will Michael actually accept what Brian has said.  Let's hope so.



Author's Response:

It needed to happen. And hopefully Michael will catch a clue, but I doubt it. He's rather dense when it comes to all things Brian. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2018 3:41 pm Title: March 16

Will Mikey finally get the message? Will Ben realize he's just a place card and walk away?  Jennifer got sick?  I don't remember that!



Author's Response:

Somehow, I doubt Mikey will catch a clue; he just won't let things be and I keeps popping up when I wish he'd just go away. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2018 1:41 am Title: March 15 (Part One)

Stressing me out here I want the creep caught and someone to trash Michael again just for the fun of it

Author's Response:

The creep will eventually be caught. And Michael will definitely not be happy that he showed up. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: MoonQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2018 4:49 pm Title: March 15 (Part Two)

What the...... Why do I get the feeling Brian has his own creepy stalker in this Blaine guy? Did Blaine partner up with CSD to break up B&J?  I kinda got the feeling during Blaine's little flashback that he may have fallen a little bit in love with Brian. Speaking of Blaine the developing pain is our ass.....Brian needs to come clean about that time period before Justin hear it about from someone else.

What did Lucille say to Michael? Hope we find out soon. Glad no time was wasted on Deb or Ben trying to defend that reprehensible cretin Michael. Can't wait for the next Chapter.

 



Author's Response:

Blaine is a bit of a mystery at this point, especially his motives. However, his running doesn't bode well. And Brian is so easy to love, that I can see the potential for Blaine falling for him. Especially if he was treating him well, as he would have while pretending he was Justin. And, you're right, Brian stalling on that isn't doing him any favors.

As for Mikey, well, I'm sure Lucill will tell Brian and Justin eventually. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2018 4:34 pm Title: March 15 (Part Two)

And the mystery continues.  At least Justin found Brian and it looks like Lucille and Kelly have Justin's back.



Author's Response:

Lucille and Kellie adore Justin; Lucille adores him as the son she'd wished she'd had, as she had all girls, and Kellie as a younger brother type. They will do everything they can to protect him. Thanks for reading! :)

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