Date: Apr 06, 2018 12:10 am Title: The Aftermath (Part Two)
Well played my friend! Now Brian has to eat a little crow too....Now would be the best time for Brian to tell Justin about Blaine.
I know this chapter seems a bit unfair to some, but the fact is that Justin kept all this hidden for years not just a few days...but years. Blaine has only been back in the picture for two weeks. I think at this point Brian knows what’s at stake if Justin found out indirectly the way he did.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I knew that there might be some people who were upset that Justin got called on his behavior; some because they are staunch Justin fans, and others because of the potential stress issues with his pregnancy. But this needed to happen. Justin isn't perfect; he is a flawed human being that made a serious mistake in keeping the information from Brian. He really should have expected Brian's reaction when he found out. And he was always going to find out at some point. That family can't keep secrets to save their lives; and someone would have eventually heard something. Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 05, 2018 11:29 pm Title: The Aftermath (Part Two)
Poor guys so much drama I hope the conversation isn't too horrible
Author's Response:
I swear, these two really will be the death of me; I think, that while it might not be the quick resolution everyone is hoping for, it will lead them in the right direction. Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 05, 2018 5:44 pm Title: The Aftermath (Part Two)
Jennifer the Wise Mom both her boys need right now.
Justin was wrong to not tell Brian everything that was going on and he will accept his lumps, just hope Brian is prepared to accept his aswell?
The scene with them being awkward around each other got me all teary-eyed, just loathe when Brian and Justin aren't comfortable around each other.
But forgiveness takes time and they both need that to face the next obstacle heading their way.
Author's Response:
They really do; it's easy to get caugt up in the moment and inyour own head, and having that older and wiser voice pull you out of that is sometimes necessary. The boys will eventually figure this all out even if there are still some bumps in the road. I hate them being all awkward but after that little blow up, it's expected that they'd be walking on eggshells around each other for a bit. They'll come out of this stronger though. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 05, 2018 5:30 pm Title: The Aftermath (Part Two)
Jennifer has really become Brian's mother in law because she knows him so well and takes his side against her own son. I hope Brian knows that.
She was great in this scene with Justin. Kuddos for the way you wrote it.
Author's Response:
Brian really needs a champion; because as much as I love Deb, she sort of failed in that aspect, no matter how much she supposedly helped Brian. It always came at a price for her. Brian really needs someone in his corner that will take his side, even if it's against her own son. And Justin needed to see it from Brian's perspective. who better than Jen, who will know how to cut through his bullshit, to do it? Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 05, 2018 3:56 pm Title: The Aftermath (Part Two)
Sometimes mothers do know best.
They'll scream and yell and talk and get through it. It's what they do.
Author's Response:
They really do; and best, they'll call you on your shit when you need it. And yes, they'll work this out. It's only a matter of time. :) Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 05, 2018 3:41 pm Title: The Aftermath (Part Two)
What can I say. You must get tired of hearing "another great chapter", but it is always so true. You convey their acts and emotions so well. It is easy to picture the scene erupting from your words. I love how your mind works.
Author's Response:
I have a confession to make...I will never get tired of hearing 'another great chapter.' ;) I live for it. :) I'm I'm glad that you can see it happening in your head. It's really one of the best compliments a writer can get - that the characters are alive and real. :) Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 05, 2018 2:21 pm Title: The Aftermath (Part Two)
Love how Brian and Justin can fight and work their way through it. Also that Gus and Jenny try to make things better even though they don't know what is wrong.
Author's Response:
They always seem to get back to each other in the end, and that is the important thing. :) And the kids are wonderful in this; and to be honest, I'm sure they more than they are letting on. Kids see things, even if they don't fully understand what they are seeing at the time. I guess time will tell. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 05, 2018 1:49 pm Title: The Aftermath (Part Two)
I really not sure that this is fairly that all is about Justins guilt. I understand that Bri is hurt. But a few monthes ago Jus ended in the hospital because Bri decided not to tell about loft. He keeps information about Blaine. Not fair! ((
Author's Response:
It's not just about Justin's guilt; it is mearly a facet of the problem and one that needed to be addressed. Brian has his own blame in the situation between them, but we cannot overlook Justin's actions. The point is, they are both in the wrong. They had good intentions; there is nothing wrong in wanting to protect each other, but keeping secrets is never the way to go. And that is something that will be adressed on Brian's side soon. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 04, 2018 10:48 am Title: The Aftermath (Part One)
I loved this chapter. It was exactly how Brian would have reacted. Thankfully Auntie Em to the rescue. He deserves more than just a big, fat Cosmo. lol I hope Drew is "up" to the task. ;)
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
I'm sure that Drew was more than happy to fulfil his 'duties.' LOL! Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2018 12:10 am Title: The Aftermath (Part One)
Thank goodness the boys have Em to kick Brians ass. Poor Sunshine sitting and worrying. The kids will help him. Thanks for the update always look forward to them...love this story
Author's Response:
To be fair to poor Brian, he is justified in his anger and hurt. Justin really should have come clean a long time ago. And while I understand his need to divorce himself from the situation before it grew out of hand, I really don't approve of him driving off that way, potentially endangering himself and others and worrying everyone that he left behind. But he's human, and as humans, we don't always think the reprecussions through; he wass reacting instead of acting. And with as angry and hurt as he was feeling, it's good that all he did was drive off and go to the clunb to put some space between himself and the situation. Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 03, 2018 5:51 pm Title: The Aftermath (Part One)
Brian you are doing the same thing to Justin that he did for you, protection works both ways in a relationship, both were wrong and both were right because they love each too much to see the other hurt.
But Brian driving off in a rage was wrong cause what if the stalker and Blaine were watching?
Brian is taking his anger and fear out on Justin and that isn't fair to either one of them.
Emmett is the best friend Brian should've had when he was fourteen, maybe then he wouldn't have met Michael or Lindsay, they just took and took and took to the point where they thought they owned the rights to Brian exclusively.
Brian leaving angry almost played into Lindsay's hands cause what if he tried to confront her, attacked her and she would have had him arrested and terminated his rights to Gus, plus got more money out of Brian for thirty minutes to see his son.
Brian and Justin always have obstacles but they are Champions at overcoming them and being stronger for it. :)
Author's Response:
Brian really should have stuck around; not only because of the stalker issue, but it's dangerous to be driving when you're that mad. Most accidents happen due to driver distraction or negligence; and Brian speeding away while he was still angry and not really focused on the job at hand could have had serious reprecussions for himself, as well as others. You should never drive when you're overly emotional.
And he shouldn't have taken that fear and anger out on Justin, but we're human, and often, when we get angry, we strike out at the easiest target whether it was justified or not. Which is why he walked away before it could get too bad.
God, if only Brian had had someone other than Michael as a friend. Their friendship is toxic in so many ways. I wish Emmett and Brian could have grown up together, rather than Mikey and Brian. Hmmmm...the muse really likes that idea. I wonder if I can work it into any of the ideas I have simmering on the back burner. I'll have to see if it would work out.
And yes, while he never intended to track down Lindsay, as he was afraid of whay he might do, if he had run into her, it could have been bad. As for Brian and Justin, they will work things out. They always do. Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 03, 2018 5:23 pm Title: The Aftermath (Part One)
This shows that underneath the Southern Queen lies a steel determination for justice.
Now hopefully Brian can calm down his hormonal hubby.
Author's Response:
I so love Emmett; he has titanium balls and isn't afraid to show it. :) And things might still be bumpy for the boys for a couple of installments yet. But as always, they'll work it out. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 03, 2018 5:15 pm Title: The Aftermath (Part One)
I actually liked this. Shows that they are a couple like any other. they fight, but will make up and it will make themstronger in the end.
Kudos! Well done I say.
I can't WAIT for the repercussions though of Lindsey. I know I mentioned wouldn't it be great if Brian heard it, but man alive, you made it SO much better with everyone hearing it. that was epic.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
They really are; and like any couple, or human being on an individual basis, they make mistakes and they do things that they think are right out of a place of love, but have consequences at a later date. They'll work it out eventually. As for Lindsay, she'll get her just dues. Life is going to be very uncomfortable for her very soon. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 03, 2018 4:23 pm Title: The Aftermath (Part One)
Amazing chapter, once more! This is the logical behaviour expected from Brian, even after all these years; the cut was too deep for him to react a better way.
Kudos to Emmett who is resourceful on so many levels and who dares facing Brian and pushing him until he sees the bigger picture and the potential risks (early labor and stalker).
When they talked about bruises, I thought that Emmett might have done his part, but I never imagined that he would have let Sap in such bad shape, permanently.
Author's Response:
I had this reaction planned from the very beginning of when I did the outline for this arc. I love Brian, and he has grown and matured so much over the years in the verse, but some ingrained habits are hard to kick, and I just didn't see him reacting any other way. Plus, that he walked away when at one time he would have continued until they said things that they couldnt take back shows a restraint and maturity that he didn't have before.
Ah, and Emmett. I love me a good, strong Emmett who isn't afraid to get into Brian's face and call him on his behavior; and while I don't personally agree with everything that he said to Brian because it made it sound like Brian didn't have a right to be angry and upset with Justin, he did make some good points that Brian needed to listen to and consider. And as I said in another response; I've always thought there was more to Emmett that meets the eye. Good on him for giving Sap what he so richly deserved! ;) Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 03, 2018 3:19 pm Title: March 22 (Part Five)
Wow, superb, excellent, great writing. Just what I (and I suspect lots of people) hoped for. About time they all learned what blake knew and what a true bitch she really is in this story. Gotta say great imagination with story line, really unique.
Thanks for your story,
Deb
Author's Response:
Thanks! :) I am glad that you liked the ultimate reveal; Lindsay can't talkher way out of this one. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 03, 2018 2:51 pm Title: The Aftermath (Part One)
This is exactly why Emmett is my favorite. He is the best friend a person can have. He always has both of their backs. He is one of the few people who can be brutally honest with both of them, and they know it's genuine and out of love.
Author's Response:
Emmett has always been one of my favorite characters and I have always thought that there was more to him that met the eye. And he definitely loves them both and will take care of them the best way he knows how. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 03, 2018 2:41 pm Title: The Aftermath (Part One)
Not going to kill you. You are writing this the way that life happens. No one lives without difficulty in their life and Brian & Justin just have a little more than most, but that is what makes the story so good. I know you will "fix" things at the right time. Plus, we know how they like to "make up" after a fight !!!! Ha Ha Great job.
Author's Response:
They d seem to attract trouble don't they; some of which they spawn themselves because they are always trying to protect the other. And yes, they will make up eventually. Things are a liitle bumpy right now, but they always come back to each other stronger and better for it. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 03, 2018 1:15 pm Title: The Aftermath (Part One)
All I can say is why am I not surprised....smh Justin is understood, but Brian is being unreasonable because his husband didn’t trust him. I can’t wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Well, Emmett does think of Justin as a younger sibling; he is naturally going to want to protect him, even if Brian is equally justified in his reactions. Don't worry, I have plans, and Justin will not get away with his own talking to. Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 03, 2018 12:49 pm Title: The Aftermath (Part One)
I love how Emmett is there to take care of both men in his own way.
Author's Response:
And he does take care of them both. :) Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 03, 2018 12:45 pm Title: The Aftermath (Part One)
NNow I see why I sometimes think Em isz the smartest one in the gang. What would they do without him?
At first when Sap's bruised ribs were mentioned, Brian being surprised by that bit of news, i thought maybe Justin's was being stalked a lot longer than anyone thought. So glad Em cleared that up.
Author's Response:
I doubt that they'd survive without him; although, I do want to point out that while Emmett's point is valid, it's not the only point that needs to be made. It's still going to be a bumpy ride yet. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 02, 2018 10:57 am Title: March 22 (Part Five)
Wow! What a chapter. I'm so glad not only Brian but everyone got to hear how Lindsay really felt about Justin.
I know Brian is upset that Justin didn't confide in him but I completely understand. I just hope Brian can.
Thanks for the update. Glad you are feeling a bit better.
Author's Response:
Me too! This way Lindsay can't twist things to make herself look good. As or the boys, they're due for a few bumps in the road, but I'm certain that they'll work things out eventually. They always do. :) Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2018 5:17 pm Title: March 22 (Part Five)
Oh Crap!!!
Justin is in trouble and they have a lot of talking to do before any forgiveness is established. (They both have some stuff to apologize for)
Lindsay hasn't realized that in that room is the women who are about to destroy her world and that of her friend Simon, plus is associates.
Looks like Lindsay is about to learn what Ostracism Really Is.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Justin is definitely in the hot seat; but Brian doesn't really have a clear conscience himself as he has yet to confess something necessary things to Justin as well. They really are a pair; trying to protect each other to their own detriment. Hopefully things won't get too out of hand in this discussion. And Lindsay hasn't even begun to feel the pain yet; but by the time those women are done, she will wish that she'd ignored Simon. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 01, 2018 1:39 pm Title: March 22 (Part Five)
First of all, FANTASTIC chapter. Everyone now knows what the bitch is really like. And, so glad to hear that reviews for the previous chapter made you happy as it was truly amazing. But most importantly, hope that you are feeling better. Reactions can be awful and I get drowsy taking non drowsy meds so I can fully understand how you feel. Rest and get better. We will be waiting for updates when you can get to them. Your health is what is most important to all of us. Even feeling bad, hope you can enjoy a little of the holiday. Take care and hugs from PA.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I am feeling much better, and I've tried the non-drowsy stuff before, and it doesn't help as much as the Benedryl does. Plus it still leaves me feeling groggy. So, I just usually go for the stuff that helps, but unfortunately, it also knocks me out. Luckily, I don't have too many allergies, but this time, whatever was in the soap I used, got to me. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 01, 2018 9:26 am Title: March 22 (Part Five)
Way to go Brian leave the poor lad to think he is going to get kicked off the Kinney cliff again
Author's Response:
I don't think it will get quite that bad; but Brian really isn't handling it well right now. Hopefully he'll pull himself together in the end. Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2018 9:19 am Title: March 22 (Part Five)
I did wish Brian got to see Justin take down Lindsay and you granted it . Thanks Now what is Brian going to do with the info,Justin is tired and drained
Author's Response:
Always happy when I can grant the readers their wishes. :) With Brian's reaction...well, we'll have to see how he handles it. Right now he's shocked hurt and angry and that's not a good combination; but hopefully he'll hold it together enough that it doesn't explode. Thanks for reading! :)