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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2018 5:23 pm Title: March 29 (Part One)

Some of those names were actually pretty good and others are so not Brian and Justin lol

I guessing Brian will be watching the clock waiting for Ted and Blake to come get Luc.

Justin may need all day to recover from number two and whatever else Brian has planned <giggles>

This was just such a Adorable chapter ;)



Author's Response:

Well that was the point; it was supposed to be a mix of the good and bad. :) And Brian will definitely be counting down the minutes until Blake and Ted get there. ;) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2018 3:20 pm Title: March 29 (Part One)

Wow. What a lot of names.  Like how easy it was to tell Emmett's.  This is going to be really tough, picking out a name from a list of good ones.



Author's Response:

It was a lot of names; but I sort of gave my betas free rein to give me a list of names for this vignette that I added to the names that I've already chosen for Sunbeam. Told them to mix the good and the bad. They had way too much fun with that. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2018 9:02 pm Title: March 28

They are hysterical and adorable...Thanks for the update on the boys...are you going to write about Brian having to change a diaper on Luc LOL

Also following Bottoms Up You're great

Author's Response:

They have far too much fun with these video nights; I think, secretly, they both enjoy it and coming up with snarky remarks and that's why they keep watching them. Not that they'd ever admit it. And well, they will have Luc until Saturday night, so we'll see what happens... Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2018 4:17 pm Title: March 28

When Will Brian Learn?? lol

Should've known Justin had a trick up his sleeve after all these years, live and learn <shrugs while giggling>

Glad that Blake and Ted got some Teddy Time but I'm thinking Emmett and Drew will be on Luc Duty next time ;)

Very Funny Chapter! :)



Author's Response:

My guess is never. LOL! They both have far too much fun trying to one-up each other. Hmmm... Em and Drew babysitting... could be fun. Thanks for reading! :)



Author's Response:

My guess is never. LOL! They both have far too much fun trying to one-up each other. Hmmm... Em and Drew babysitting... could be fun. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2018 4:10 pm Title: March 28

Our men. Can't wait to see Justin go into early labor and how cooly (not) Brian handles it all until they get to the hospital. Ha!



Author's Response:

I'm pretty sure that Brian is going to be so much worse than Justin. LOL! Mother Taylor may need to step in and knock some sense into him. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2018 3:02 pm Title: March 28

What I learned is if you want a fast birth, the epidoral won't help.  Takes too long to take affect.



Author's Response:

it also makes you lose sensation, so the pushing part actually takes longer than a natural birth or one when you're on systemic medication. Justin won't have an epidural though; since he is having a c-section, the most likely thing will be the spinal block. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2018 2:36 pm Title: March 28

Another great chapter.  Just thinking of the two of them watching this is so funny.  Goes to show that Brian really does love Justin. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! :) Poor Brian...I torture him so. And thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2018 11:55 am Title: March 28

Those two and their banters! Hilarious!



Author's Response:

I have to admit, that sometimes I just can't get them to shut up. They are always bantering when I just want to get on with the scene. But it is a lot of fun as well, so I can't  complain too much. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2018 10:43 am Title: March 27

I couldn't stop laughing throughout Lucille's story with Michael.  Her and my Nana should hang out. lol

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

I have to admit that I was smirking and snickering through the whole thing. I'd say, poor Michael, but I don't really like the nasty little weasel; so, instead, I'll say serves him right. ;) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2018 9:42 pm Title: March 27

Thanks for the PSA but loved this very funny chapter. I always stop what I am doing when I see you have updated, this being my favorite story of all the many I am following You have a great sense of humor and write great smut LOL

Author's Response:

Justin made me do it. As we all know, he is Brian's personal PSA... And he didn't want to let it slide without pointing out hgow much trouble Daphne could get into if this was RL. ;) And I'm happy and flattered that this is oneof your favorites. Hopefully, you'll continue to enjoy it! Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2018 7:02 pm Title: March 27

Lucille is Freaking Scary and I am so happy she is on Brian and Justin's side <Shivers>

Michael would be smart to heed that warning... but this is Michael and when is he ever smart?

Justin was right to warn Daphne to not doing anything that could get them all thrown in jail, or have Lindsay looking like an innocent victim being picked on by Justin's best friend.

Lindsay has spent years playing victim so when they go after her they have to remember that and flip the script to make it look like she is picking in them.

Daphne was brought up in Waspland so just use old school and new school to make Lindsay wish she had stayed in her Mama's smelly old womb ;)

Feel bad Justin didn't get to eat strawberry cheesecake off Brian but maybe they can do it the next night? lol

Wonderful Chapter :)



Author's Response:

She does get a wee bit voindictive when it comes to her boys; very protective of them both, but Justin especially. As for Michael heeding the warning, he might at first, but I doubt it will deter him for long. That is, unless Lucille does something to remind him and keep it from leaving his goldfish memory.

They really didn't think that little bout of revenge through; yes, it got the word out, but it could cause problems later as there are definite unknown legal issues that could crop up due to their impulsiveness. Hopefully Mel will make sure they are protected from Lindsay's vindictiveness. And there is the fact that she has no proof it was them; all she has is hearsay so far.

As for Justin and his cheesecake...I'm sure they more than made up for his abduction. ;) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2018 6:09 pm Title: March 27

Havign been around horses pretty much mostof my life, I can relate to much of what Lucille was talking about. Not at all squeamish really, in fact, reall really funny when imagining Michael through it all.

I do agree with Justin though....she's not one to piss off! ;)

Loved this chapter immenzely. While I highly doubt Michael will heed any of what Lucille said, especially if he talks to Deb, but it  could at least make him pause a bit.

cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

I've never been on a farm or a ranch for that matter, so I had to look it all up; hopefully I didn't get anythingMichael's reaction as Lucille described the various methods of gelding a bull or stallion. He likely won't get it for long, but at least he stayed away for the night. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2018 5:58 pm Title: March 27

Lucille's a gem. Who better to tell Michael about gelding a bull? Ha!

Justin needed Daphne to be aware of any repercussions Lindsay may try. Not that I think Lindsay will really try, only to be thwarted again. But you never know.



Author's Response:

It's better to be safe than sorry; despite the fact that this is fanfic, I do also try to keep things as real as possible (you know, considering it's also mpreg). And the thing is, they reacted without thinking about the consequences; if Pennsylvania is a state that has strict privacy laws, they could get into a whole mess of trouble for posting the video. I think Lindsay will be too busy with other things to worry about Em and Daphne, if she could even prove it was them beyond hearsay. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2018 3:57 pm Title: March 27

I was afraid after reading the warning, but you brought this in a way that it wasn't that shocking. I love how Michael was reacting to what she said; she enjoyed it so much.



Author's Response:

I tried to keep it from being too in your face and gory, but I also wanted to warn people that it is a topic that could make them feel squeamish; better safe than sorry. And Michael reaction was priceless. Hopefully he'll heed her warnings. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2018 3:29 pm Title: March 27

What can I say? Another fantastic chapter. Could just picture Michael's face as Lucille talked to him. So good and so funny. And, you handled the entire situation so well about revealing things without thinking. Great job.



Author's Response:

I had so much fun with that sequence; even if I learned more about bull castration than I have ever wanted or needed to know. And Justin did need to warn the others that their actuions could have serious consequences. Hopefully nothing will come of it. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2018 2:04 pm Title: March 27

Now we know Lindsay can be extremely vandictive.  But what exactly can she do about it?  I mean it was her telling the world that she's a bitch.



Author's Response:

I'm not worried too much about Lindsay; she'll soon have more important things to worry about. But the concern that can be raised, is the legality od posting the video. While everyone was aware that Brian had a live feed in there because of the reveal, it's a sketchy, gray area in terms of whether or not Lindsay can claim that she didn't know she was being taped in that exact moment. That's why Justin was warning Daphne to be careful. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2018 10:33 am Title: March 26

I love Kiki!  Of course Brian was behind that healthy lunch.  Can't wait for his surprise for following orders.



Author's Response:

Everyone had to realize that Justin wouldn't have voluntarily eaten that if it hadn't been because he was trying to prove a point to Brian. Thanks for reading! :)

 

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2018 8:27 am Title: March 26

Yeh Kiki and the Libert family.Justin freaked Kiki out with his order We all hate Lindsay

Author's Response:

it's good to hace people on your side. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2018 6:37 pm Title: March 26

Justin earned his surprise later by behaving in hiss lunch choices lol

Lindsay should be worried and scared cause if Liberty Avenue knows what she tried to do to Justin with Simon (Last Name To Be Filled In Later), then it won't take long for everyone in the Art World to find out too.

And the Art World is a small place with large ears and when they pounce no one will escape unscathed.

Lindsay won't even if have Sam to rely on cause he won't jeopardize his standing to be seen with or near her.

With Justin and Sydney's contacts  (to start) there won't be anywhere Lindsay can run, work or live without this following her and Simon.

And to think that is just what they can do professionally haven't even seen what Jennifer and the others have in store for Lindsay personally?

Where did Lindsay run to and has she seen Mel or the kids yet?

 

 



Author's Response:

I'm fairly certain that Justin will love his surprise; especially if it involves a nalked Brian.

Lindsay is definitely in a jam and will get her just desserts for her actions; and Simon is not far behind. Even without his last name released on the video, there was enough information, and enough people in the know, to put it together rather easily. He's likely to start feeling the pinch of Daphne's ad Emmett's actions soon - at the very least, it will make his cronies wary and start to distance themselves from him. Add to that Justin's boycott campaign and the'll be like rats deserting a sinking ship....should be fun.

As for where Lindsay ran, well, I guess we'll have to wait and see.

Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2018 5:57 pm Title: March 26

I hope that Lindsey won't use the fact that the video is going viral to try anything against Emmett and Daphne. I guess she's going to hear from Simon very soon.



Author's Response:

That is definitely a cause for concern and something that Justin, at the very least, will make knowmn to them. Revenge can be a tricky thing; yes, it makes her look bad, but depending on the laws, they could get in serious trouble if they aren't careful. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2018 5:01 pm Title: March 26

More fantastic writing.  Your muse is back in great shape.  Justin eating normal was actually funnier than his crazy food combinations. 



Author's Response:

Isn't it? Had he eaten a cheeseburger with something weird, it woulnd't have even registered to them anymore; but order a plain turkey sandwich and the world is coming to an end. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2018 1:14 pm Title: March 26

Eating healthy so unlike Justin.



Author's Response:

Right? I was laughing at everyone's reaction to Justin ignoring the fries and lemon bars; it was too funny. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2018 11:59 am Title: March 26

Can you imagine what those three babies could do when they're all older? I would run for cover. Ha!

I do think it was wrong to send the video around, but it gets Lindsay the hell out of Dodge. It will come to.haunt Simon too, and that's just what that fucking stalker deserves. Whether he's the insane stalker or just one that would stalk Justin when he first went to NY, stalker all the same.

Maybe Kiki's possible dream come true just waked through the door in the form of Todd. Estate planning can take a while and they'd have to work closely together.

I'm sure Justin will be pleased with himself for whatever he planned for Blake and Ted and will be so deserving after eating the lunch Brian told him to.



Author's Response:

Those kids are going to drive their parents insane, while Jen, Sandy and Deb sit back and laugh their asses off, telling them all - pay back is a bitch.

I don't necessarily agree with it being sent around either on a personal level, but they really didn't think it through. They were angry and reacting to the situation and well... thati's how it panned out. But they will definitely have to face the consequences later, whether it be Brian and Justin gettig angry with them, or something worse.

Hmmm...Kiki and Todd...now there is a thought. I suppose we'll have to see how that develops. :) 

Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: CarolK1943 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2018 2:28 am Title: March 24

I've been reading this story from the beginning and I love it, but lately I have been unable to increase the font siza so that I can read it comfortably. Using the plus doesn't seem to do anything anymore. I looked back at older chapters and was able to read them just fine. What is going wrong? My old eyes need larger type.

 

 



Author's Response:

I'm not exactly sure why that is, but I noticed it as well. I have switched from using Firefox to Chrome as my default web browser, so maybe that had something to do with it. I have gone back on the chapters that were a problem and increased the font, so hopefully that will help. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 15, 2018 5:18 pm Title: March 24

Now that they gave talked so much, the air should be clearer between them.



Author's Response:

While not complete smooth sailing, it is better than before. And the lingering issues will just take time to rectify. I'm sure they'll get that dealt with however. Thanks for reading! :)

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