[Report This]Date: Jan 08, 2018 3:27 am Title: Backstabbers.,,Who's Stabbing Who?
Thank You Daphne For A Brief Moment of Silence.
Brian took the taser hit for Justin hmmmm.
Ben apologizing and turning the tables on Michael after hearing the truth from Brian is good.
Lindsay using Gus to get into Brian's bank accounts bad, especially if Brian brings Daphne's taser, but what utter bliss if it gets her to shut up.
Lindsay is going to regret scaring Brian like that.
Author's Response:
oh believe me Lindsay is in for a world trouble. And yes, I too love the fact that Ben decided to cut Debs and Michael's apron strings. A big guy like him? He should be able to make his own decisions.
XOXO
Soirsa
Date: Jan 07, 2018 6:08 pm Title: Are You Going to be Calm or Starve
Daphne, the spitfire: she got it right on the first strike! Will she dare tasing Debbie?
Justin and Emmett have hilarious ideas to make Brian grovel for his food.
Date: Jan 07, 2018 5:51 pm Title: A Buffet of Bullshit and Hypocrisy
The dog is awesome: it seems bored out of its mind.
I love the way you wrote about Brian and Ben's episode at the white party and how Michael reacted. I also loved how Kiki is treating him.
Good riddance of Grantham! What a nasty jerk.
Brian is really attentive to Mr Slim...
Date: Jan 07, 2018 3:57 am Title: Are You Going to be Calm or Starve
Oh boy. Sounds like someone is in trouble.
[Report This]Date: Jan 07, 2018 3:52 am Title: Are You Going to be Calm or Starve
Something tells me that Deb may find out what Michael did when he showed up yelling. The little coffee sprite seems to have won the first round. hehe.
[Report This]Date: Jan 07, 2018 2:36 am Title: Are You Going to be Calm or Starve
Looks like Daphne's stun gun is going to get quite a workout with the Novotnys barging into Kinnectic. (Perhaps she can save a few stings for the girls??)
Michael twitching on the floor I bet was a very funny picture that should be splashed all over Liberty Avenue.
Brian getting taught a lesson is so Good he needs to rest and fraying everyone's nerves with his bellowing is not helping.
Ben went to find some prospective huh?
Can't Wait For Deb To Meet Daphne <giggles>
Author's Response:
Oh I so agree with you in Dephne using her taser a bit more on the Novotnys. They are really obnoxious. And yes, Mickey twitching had me howling with laughter as well.
Miss Merlot had a load of fun writing this particular scene
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2018 6:24 pm Title: A Buffet of Bullshit and Hypocrisy
Michael is such a Hypocrite and so is Deb!
They love throwing out their version of the truth to make themselves look good, but can't stand when someone throws out the Actual Truth to show how ugly, self-absorbed self-centered they really are.
Thank You Kiki!!!
It's okay for Michael to sleep around and pass along an STD that he knew he had in advance, but it's not okay for Ben and Brian to have sex 8 years before Michael was a blimp on Ben's radar??
What Fucking Sense Does That Make???!!!!
Deb and Michael blaming Brian is beyond Asinine who Brian fucks is none of their business, They Don't Own The Exclusive Rights To His Dick!!!!!
Carl pointing out some truths to Ben is good because he has a lot of apologizing to do to Brian for his behavior and Brian shouldn't rush to forgive him too quickly.
Ben needs to realize that Deb and Michael are pissed because when Michael married Ben Brian didn't try to stop it, so they beat Ben down until he turned his anger on Brian, they just used him and now he has to find the man he was before Michael and Deb corrupted him.
Grantham is such an A-hole!!!
Poisoning people to get back at Brian and Cynthia for not kissing your Ass is Evil and he could have killed someone, and since Justin was more sicker than everyone else he will be charged with another count of attempted premeditated murder.
So Loving This Story :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2018 1:08 pm Title: A Buffet of Bullshit and Hypocrisy
Who would have thought an eight year old white party would cause such problems. How dare Michael give others an STD and not tell! Will Ben come around and see how he's changing and nor for the better or not?
Grantham signed his own dismissal when he decided to make the whole firm sick. Firing was too good for him. Poor Justin, he got sicker than most. Love the dog.
Date: Jan 05, 2018 4:48 am Title: A Buffet of Bullshit and Hypocrisy
Very funny.
Date: Jan 04, 2018 3:41 am Title: A Little Shot of Dutch Courage
The caterpillar is beautiful! I love the building relationship between Mister Slim and the boss.
Emmett is as genius as before and Ben is annoying. Now, he will have to deal with the white party news that is now in the open.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2018 12:49 am Title: A Little Shot of Dutch Courage
Ben when you lay down with dogs you get fleas, but when you side with Michael and Deb you get fire ants over your Ass!!!
He knew what was going to happen but didn't tell Deb so doesn't that make him a Liar!!
Deb better wake up because she has one foot out the door and if she doesn't stop acting like she is the Queen of Sheba she will be out on her wide Ass!!
Ben is even using the old mantra to get Brian to bend too bad he should have remembered that his place is either on his knees or back, Never step up to Brian Kinney with a firecracker, cause he has dynamite and your little world is about to go BOOM!! (Just Want Until He Brings Out His Bazooka, Then You're Gonna Wish You Hadn't Been Born!)
Justin sending Brian a drink is so charming and the bottle is such a godsend.
Grantham might want to watch his back because he is in Brian's crosshairs Big Time.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2018 12:14 am Title: A Little Shot of Dutch Courage
This is getting better and better.
Date: Jan 01, 2018 7:00 pm Title: You Say Tuna Casserole I want Tuna Sashimi
Interesting concept. I am surprised Ben wanted Brian to help, that is different.
Author's Response:
So glad we were able to surpise you. But believe me..... things will change
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2018 6:39 pm Title: You Say Tuna Casserole I want Tuna Sashimi
Coffee Fairy and Mr. Slim are two good names to start with for Justin.
Glad Carl and Brian are friends hate the way Deb, Michael and Lindsay are abusing their relationship with Brian.
Brian shouldn't have to support Jenny since she isn't his daughter and if Ben wants to be blind on jump on Brian's case when he doesn't come running for Michael then he deserves what he gets too.
Lindsay doesn't get to spend Gus's support without Brian knowing what it is going for and if she needs more money than she can ask her Wife for it.
The money Brian makes and gives us for Gus and no one, nothing else why should he support certain members of the family When they treat him like shit!!!????
I always hated Deb hitting Brian as someone who knows Brian grew up in an abusive home why would you hit him?
Her treatment of Brian is abusive and Michael is doing the exact same thing, they are both bullies who expect to always get their way and now Ben is joining in too.
Nice to see Kiki, Carl and Delores are not letting them get their way and calling them out when they are wrong.
Brian owning the diner is not surprising it's him letting Deb getting away with her antics that is.
This is going to be One Of A Ride!! :)
Author's Response:
Brian certainly has the right people on his side believe me.
I too have always wondered why Debs slapped Brian around the head. And yes I too think it abusive.
I guess she will learn her lesson soon enough.......
Date: Jan 01, 2018 6:15 pm Title: You Say Tuna Casserole I want Tuna Sashimi
Brian and Carl seem to get along really well.
I hope Debbie will find out that Brian is her boss: maybe she will stop hitting him.
Author's Response:
Wait and see.....
Date: Jan 01, 2018 6:02 pm Title: All About the Coffee
Interesting first meeting! The coffee fairy is up for a bumpy ride. If Brian gets his coffee, the day should start smoothly.
I fear at least 2 problems: Michael and Grantham.
Date: Jan 01, 2018 5:09 pm Title: You Say Tuna Casserole I want Tuna Sashimi
Another great story. Thank you.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Glad you like it.
Date: Jan 01, 2018 4:39 pm Title: You Say Tuna Casserole I want Tuna Sashimi
Another nice start! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review.
We're doing our best to post the next chapter as soon as we can.
XOXO
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2018 2:36 pm Title: You Say Tuna Casserole I want Tuna Sashimi
Very interesting story line. Love how Carl plays out and the new Manager of the diner. But I miss the coffee fairy.
Author's Response:
He's coming back...
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2018 2:19 pm Title: All About the Coffee
Loving this. Justin is ending up with quite a few nicknames. Michael is still anti with Deb close behind. Just need to figure out where Emmett fits in.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Glad to hear you're loving it.
Let yourself be surprised by Emmett's part in all this.
XOXO