Date: Jan 29, 2018 6:30 pm Title: Birds of a Feather Flocking Together
Tigger is super cute! Is Justin drawing a version of his story with Brian? Brian being the bear?
The last part has me laughing hard: "her dastardly djinn, who really should’ve been ingested as a bad blowjob!"
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2018 3:14 pm Title: Clear Out the Dust and Let the Sunshine In
Wow! You have Deb, Jen, Justin, Carl and Deloris all in one place. I'd pay to see the outcome of this.
Author's Response:
WOW. Four reviews in a row. Thanks so much for that.
Get seated for we just rang the bell for the first round of what I would like to call THE bitch fight of Liberty Av.
XOXO
MeMa
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2018 2:53 pm Title: Bubble Bubble Stir Up Trouble - The Good, The Bad and The Horny
Here is to hoping Lindsay's plan doesn't work. Love the pics you've picked for this chapter. Story line is great.
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2018 2:52 pm Title: Bubble Bubble Stir Up Trouble - The Good, The Bad and The Horny
Here is to hoping Lindsay's plan doesn't work. Love the pics you've picked for this chapter. Story line is great.
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2018 2:35 pm Title: Birds of a Feather Flocking Together
Nicely done. Can't believe that Deb and Mikey actually expect Carl to just give them back the house. Loved the conversation with Brian, Mr. Slim, and Emmett and the cartoon.
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2018 7:31 pm Title: Superfood and a Super Blond
HOLY SMOKES!!!
Justin is Awesome!!!
He out shouted Loud-Mouth and Dingleberry while also showing Brian what kind of man he is by kissing him senseless.
Delores asking out Carl was so cute.
What is she planning to do to Deb now that she and Carl heard the vile things Deb said?
Brian sick is no fun for anyone but with everyone being sneaky and Justin kissing him he should be on the mend soon lol
Mel was smart to get in an auditor, cleaning crew bet that place still has dust from when it was first opened?
Perhaps Mel can make it a success since Michael just used it as his favorite toybox.
Once Carl and Delores fumigate the house it should be ready for renting in a few weeks.
Skull wallpaper?
How could Ben sleep in that room?
Author's Response:
Hiya,
Once again a wonderful review.
Yep, you got to love Justin in this chapter. I too love that kissing scene.
And that wallpaper was really bizar wasn't it?
XOXO
Soirsa
Author's Response:
Hiya,
Once again a wonderful review.
Yep, you got to love Justin in this chapter. I too love that kissing scene.
And that wallpaper was really bizar wasn't it?
XOXO
Soirsa
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2018 5:48 pm Title: Superfood and a Super Blond
Oh I love a dominate Justin!!
And just wait till Daph finds out she missed the fun, she going to pout.
Author's Response:
Oh I so agree with you Mamaduck.
I love me some strong, dominant Justin every day.
XOXO
Soirsa
Date: Jan 23, 2018 5:19 pm Title: Superfood and a Super Blond
I'm glad I wasn't drinking while reading this! Hilarious!!
Miss Merlot, thank you for all the names you come up for Debbie and Michael!
These last ones are excellent! "Mrs Lobotomy, Mr Monotony" then "A FUCKING BANSHEE AND HER DERANGED GIBBON!"
Justin is also on fire "He is so lucky I am in love with him or I would kick him in the nuts!" then the end!!! Yeah, go for it Justin, take what you want!
Cynthia, Ted and Justin are really sneaky, but it was for Brian's health.
It's amazing that Justin's drawing is going to get him so much money.
Author's Response:
You wouldn't believe what more nicknames we, and especially Miss Merlot, can come up with.
I too loved the Lobotomy/Monotony ones. And yes, Justin's nicknames are hitting close to home aren't they?
Justin is in rare form in this chapter.
XOXO
Soirsa
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2018 4:50 pm Title: Superfood and a Super Blond
So much to keep up with. Deb and Mikey at their worse. Showing up at the hospital then at the loft. How did they get in? Then Mr. Slim and his boss spending the day together. Two things, Brian caught on to what Cynthia had planned and didn't mind. Yahoo. Two-love how Grantham was found out and all proceeds turned to Justin. Now we need Emmett to show up with his working meal.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
Yep, a lot is happening right now and things will only heat up more from now on.
And Debs and Mikey? They will get their come uppance soon enough.
XOXO
Soirsa
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2018 3:27 pm Title: Superfood and a Super Blond
OMG...FREAKING...FABULOUS UPDATE..
THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER... 😊😀😀
Author's Response:
You're welcome Navneet.
XOXO
Soirsa
Date: Jan 23, 2018 3:19 pm Title: Superfood and a Super Blond
Scaring the crap out of them then kissing Brian, the perfect day.
Author's Response:
Agreed!!!
XOXO
Soirsa
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2018 2:33 pm Title: Superfood and a Super Blond
Super hot Justin even hotter kiss been waiting for that for 13 chapters u sure do know how to keep a girl in suspense.
Author's Response:
The slower the build up, the hotter that first kiss will be. :D
XOXO
Soirsa
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2018 1:48 pm Title: Superfood and a Super Blond
OMG...FREAKING...FABULOUS UPDATE..
THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER... 😊😀😀
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2018 3:51 am Title: Starting to Cut the Ties that Bind
The fact that Deb shouted as loud as she could at Brian's door that she would beat him worse than Jack did, goes to show that every ounce of affection she ever gave Brian was fake.
Deb lied the moment she met Brian and has been lying to him ever since.
She and Michael used Brian because he was bigger, stronger and smarter so he could protect Michael from the bullies and help him graduate.
For Michael being such a weak little Shit he was smart to leech onto Brian, and Deb used that abused child to keep Michael happy.
It doesn't take a genius to realize that even if Brian had finished that hand job he still wouldn't have chosen Michael.
Every cruel thing Michael, Deb and Lindsay have ever said to Brian or anyone else, they disguise it with I Didn't Mean It, I was Joking, Brian Knows I was Just Joking.
That's there tell when they are lying and have been caught at it, and it is also them being truthful when Brian doesn't do or give them what they want.
Everyone in the building heard the Drag Queen Harpy screeching so how long before it gets back to Brian?
Or Cynthia, Ted, Emmett, Carl and everyone else on Liberty Avenue???
Author's Response:
When you would look up the word "user" in the dictionary it would show a picture of Debs and Michael. They are, in this story, the ultimate users followed closely by Lindsay.
It's good to know that Brian has more and better friends to fall back on. Especially Mr. Slim.
XOXO
Soirsa
Date: Jan 19, 2018 9:33 pm Title: Starting to Cut the Ties that Bind
Hilarious! You got some funny names for Debbie and Michael; I love "Empress of Entitlement and her Equerry of Egregiousness".
Poor policemen who will have to deal with this pair, and maybe this trio.
Author's Response:
We do love to come up with nicknames. And let me tell you Miss Merlot is really good at it.
Thanks for reviewing.
XOXO
Soirsa
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2018 6:33 pm Title: Starting to Cut the Ties that Bind
Oh this should be good Lindsay is going back to Pittsburgh to join up with Deb and Michael, perhaps they should save places for them in a cell because they will be there often.
Not surprised Deb threatens to beat Brian worse than Jack did she is so vile and putrid that she needs to be in a cell for the rest of her life.
She, Michael and Lindsay think they are entitled to ride on Brian's coattails and unlimited access to his money forever.
They are the worst sort of parasites because not only do they suck you dry but they leave you so weak that you can't fight back anymore.
Daphne was smart to warn Cynthia and to take Brian to Ted's place, at least he will get some peace and quiet.
So what fantastic plan will the Whiny Bunch come up with next?
Michael should really just rent a bed at the hospital he is there so often lol
Date: Jan 19, 2018 3:09 pm Title: Starting to Cut the Ties that Bind
Another great chapter. You would think from all the times Michael has hit his head some sense would prevail, but then again the story wouldn't be nearly as good.
Author's Response:
hiya,
personally I think that all that hitting of the head must have scrambled the few remaining braincells Michael had in such a bad way that I fear they stopped working completely. ;)
XOXO
Soirsa
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2018 2:06 pm Title: Starting to Cut the Ties that Bind
Love how Deb didn't get her way. Looks like Lindsay will be joining Deb and Mikey in their new abode. Love your names for them too.
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2018 12:11 pm Title: Starting to Cut the Ties that Bind
Awesome chapter
Date: Jan 19, 2018 8:46 am Title: Starting to Cut the Ties that Bind
It nice they take care of Brian, but we need more Justin.
Author's Response:
Hiya, thanks for the review.
We, the authors, believe in a slow build up. So you will have to wait a little bit longer.
Justin time is coming up soon.
XOXO
Soirsa
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2018 9:59 am Title: Comfort Food...Stay at Home for Frog's Sake
Damn....soo sweet...loved it...the frogs idea was very clever...u guys are genious ..all the pics everything is perfect with the story.
Thank u for the update.
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2018 7:28 am Title: Are You Going to be Calm or Starve
Omg...that was freaking AWESOME.
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2018 6:28 am Title: All About the Coffee
Outstanding start..totally new..thanks.
Date: Jan 18, 2018 6:08 am Title: Comfort Food...Stay at Home for Frog's Sake
So sweet.
Date: Jan 18, 2018 4:47 am Title: Comfort Food...Stay at Home for Frog's Sake
Excellent! Very funny too! We don't get to see/hear Brian being sick often.
The frogs are beautiful.