[Report This]Date: Feb 22, 2018 12:44 am Title: Getting to Know You, Getting to Know All About You
If The Three Brats didn't spend so much time whiny and throwing temper tantrums when they don't get there way they would see that the kids should really be more important than trying to hold on and control Brian.
Brian being with Justin is him getting further out of their reach and seeing them for who they really are and not lik it.
Just love when dumb people sign stuff without reading it makes it so much easier to throw things back in their face when they try to act all High & Mighty.
Justin's drawings are so life like while Michael's greatly resembles Lindsay's art Amateurish with no spirit.
Michael being mad because Deb isn't supporting him is funny he has been supported since he was conceived and spoilt since she felt the first kick.
How much money did Brian give Michael for his store and Deb for her mortgage?
That house is beautiful and so Brian who would want a big place for Gus and Jenny to run around :)
Smart move with the trust fund for the kids and the executors to protect it.
Michael, Deb and Lindsay would have ran through it in months and still have their hands out for more.
Author's Response:
Oh I so agree with you BlueMyst. The Three Brats should finally get their heads out of their collective asses. They should start looking around, caring for others and living their own lives.
And yes, it's all about the money isn't it? For those three there will never be enough money to satisfy all their needs.
Lucky for Gus and Jenny there are people who DO care for them and protect them
XOXO
Soirsa
Date: Feb 22, 2018 12:25 am Title: Getting to Know You, Getting to Know All About You
Great chapter. Love the pics.
Date: Feb 21, 2018 8:27 pm Title: Daddy Knownest Best About Cars, People, Books...and Cardigans
Delightful chapter! The kids, especially Gus are amazing! The houses are beautiful.
Mel is really lucky.
Date: Feb 21, 2018 4:59 pm Title: Foie the Love of Geese! Just Bring Me a Head!
Great chapter except the bashing of the "foie gras"; I understand some people could be against it, but I don't think KD is the place for this. There is way worse happening with the other types of poultry (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Poultry_farming).
Back to the story, the grand-mother is great and does speak her mind. Lotti is a pest and she got what she deserved. Gardner will have to find another playmate.
The last meal was surprising, but it did the trick!
Tuscany should be very interesting.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review.
This chapter was so much fun to write. And yes, that inculdes the foie gras speech.
I, as the writer of said speech, never meant it as a political speech/statement.
I'm more than well aware of the horrible things going on in the bio industry.
I sasw this speech as a means to push back at Snotty Lotti for she needed that in a major way. For let's be fair, the way she treated Justin was such bad for
The speech was also meant as a tool to show how passionate Justin can be.
So, as the write of this speech I feel in no way obliged to apologize for my point of view.
XOXO
Soirsa
Date: Feb 20, 2018 1:33 am Title: Daddy Knownest Best About Cars, People, Books...and Cardigans
Terrific 2 chapters. Just love how you portray Michael & Lindsay along with Deb. Great job.
[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2018 10:16 pm Title: Daddy Knownest Best About Cars, People, Books...and Cardigans
That house is beautiful and just big enough for Mel, the kids and Ben to live comfortably.
Plus it is away from The Wicked Wigged Harpy of Liberty Avenue and her flying monkeys lol
Much better cardigan for Justin.
Gus is so adorable and will love spending time with Brian and Justin.
So Michael will have to pay Lindsay since Mel isn't involved with that part of the store. (This is not going to be good considering Lindsay's personality and Michaels')
Deb and Michael had some nerve being all high handed and rude to Emmett, hope Deb has enough for the bill because I would make sure she paid for the food, booze, wait staff and the decorations. (Doesn't the cost go up per head? <evil grin>)
This party is going to be so good I wish that chapter was up already, but I don't want to miss Gus time and Italy!! lol
Fantastic Updates to All Your Stories :)
Author's Response:
THe Wicked Wigged Hapry of Liberty Avenue and her flying monkey?
OMG! You sure know how to come up with the most amazing nick names.
We will store this one and might use it in a later story.
And the bill for her party. Let's just say it will put her on the treshold of the poorhouse.
XOXO
Soirsa
[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2018 9:40 pm Title: Foie the Love of Geese! Just Bring Me a Head!
Oh I Like Grandma she so needs to meet Deb lol
Snotty Lottie won't be causing anymore trouble and hopefully he daddy will grow some balls and stop over indulging his spoiled princess before someone rips her larynx out.
Brian and Justin in Italy...Yes!!!
Author's Response:
Oh wouldn't that be great? To see Grandma and Debs firing of to each other. There's no doubt about it who would win such a fight, right?
Italy will be loads and loads of fun for our boys, me thinks.
XOXO
Soirsa
[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2018 2:47 pm Title: Daddy Knownest Best About Cars, People, Books...and Cardigans
It appears the the trio have not thought things out. Love the house that Mel got and that Ben will be there to help. Looking forward to Friday.
[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2018 1:53 pm Title: Foie the Love of Geese! Just Bring Me a Head!
Oh my. Such a spoilt DiCaprio, but what a wonderful Grandmama. She got taken down a peg or two. Looking forward to Deb's dinner and the trip to Tuscany.
Author's Response:
Tjhanks for your review.
Let me tell you, it was loads of fun to write Snotty Lotti.
She is based on one of my bullies in high school.
Through this character I finally got a chance to get rid a lot of frustration, anger and sadness from my years in high school.
We, as the authors, are too looking forward to Italy and Deb's dinner. Fun is to be had.
XOXO
Soirsa
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2018 8:20 am Title: Of Conning of the Lazy and Froggy Desserts
Excellent...loved it...very very very entertaining
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review.
Hold on to your chair for there is way more to follow.
XOXO
Soirsa
Date: Feb 14, 2018 11:57 pm Title: Of Conning of the Lazy and Froggy Desserts
Excellent the frog jokes!
Author's Response:
Ribbit, ribbit
XOXO
Soirsa
[Report This]Date: Feb 14, 2018 1:16 am Title: Of Conning of the Lazy and Froggy Desserts
Darren saved Emmett from unknowingly hiring Deb because she would have taken his continued silence as yes and bulldozed her way in.
Michael is the perfect doormat for Lindsay who is able to bulldoze over him when he isn't bulldozing over Deb.
Anyone See A Pattern Here?
Lindsay may think she is being clever working at the comic book store but she stupidly placed herself in Mel's crosshairs because as her boss who owns more of the store than Michael (May have to go back to check that) she has Alot of power and that means some payback for Revolving Legs Lindsay <evil smirk>
Brian and Justin were very cute with the frogs and the ribbits :)
Author's Response:
I;m always happy to see a review by you.
You have a real nack for nicknames and gave us, authors, some pointers to work from
Lindsay? Well she is a stupid as she is blond......
XOXO
Soirsa
Date: Feb 13, 2018 10:56 pm Title: Of Conning of the Lazy and Froggy Desserts
Very good chapter. Love the frogs & ribbits.
Date: Feb 13, 2018 9:33 pm Title: Of Conning of the Lazy and Froggy Desserts
I'm actually surprised at Emmett's reaction. I suppose part of it was shock mind you. I was expecting him to pitch a bit of a fit. thank goodness Darren was there of Emmett's silences and lack of reaction may have had some serious consequences.
Dear lord Michael is an idiot. With but a little argument, he's eating up everything that Lindsey is dishing out. He's actually trusting her. Deb to the rescue. *cough cough* this should be interesting. Thnk she'll take over the store?? Hmmmmmmmmmm
Cheers
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2018 9:24 pm Title: Of Conning of the Lazy and Froggy Desserts
I'm glad Emmett got out of hiring Deb. How is Deb going to help Michael? Not that she can. Love the Brian and Mr. Slim and frogs.
[Report This]Date: Feb 11, 2018 7:07 pm Title: Because Thy Promise I Believe, Oh Lamb of God, I Come! I Come!
Wow! Hot and so Romantic, love that Brian and Justin are taking it slow not rushing into sex, despite how intensely attracted they are to one another.
Mel is smarter than Lindsay thought and that prenup is coming in handy to stop them from their stupid actions and using Jenny for their selfish means.
Deb must be high if she thinks Emmett would hire her he would rather get syphilis on his tongue before he would give her job, though it would be funny to have her prepare the food for her last meal in the diner hmmmm....<scratches chin> Maybe syphilis wouldn't be so bad after all? ;)
Mel moving back with kids will make Brian so happy and Mel needs to mend the fences between her and Brian especially if they will be sharing custody.
Ben selling that comic is funny, but Lindsay's pompous opinion was Hilarious, she has some nerve telling Michael he has no say when she is a female version of that whiny baby.
Date: Feb 11, 2018 6:48 pm Title: Because Thy Promise I Believe, Oh Lamb of God, I Come! I Come!
Great chapter. And, wow, Brian is so different. Love that writers can turn his character in so many directions and still make him Brian. Good job.
[Report This]Date: Feb 11, 2018 2:51 pm Title: Because Thy Promise I Believe, Oh Lamb of God, I Come! I Come!
Love the parts with Lindsay, Michael and Deb and how things don't go their way. Mel has improved so much. I need to reread this from the beginning because I'm loosing track of who did what, when and where. LOL.
Date: Feb 11, 2018 12:46 pm Title: Because Thy Promise I Believe, Oh Lamb of God, I Come! I Come!
Oh I have watched strapped and actually have a WIP based on the movie plot. That kiss is the HOTTEST and most touching part of the movie....this chapter was perfect
Author's Response:
Wow!! A review from one of my favorite writers. And on top of that you tell us this chapter is perfect?
We, the authors, are deeply impressed.
We do beg you to please, please, please finish Strapped for we are totally hooked on it already.
Glad you like our story and thank you for your review
XOXO
Soirsa
Date: Feb 11, 2018 12:24 pm Title: Because Thy Promise I Believe, Oh Lamb of God, I Come! I Come!
Brian is getting good at dating!
Poor pants though!
Mel is getting good at dealing with the leeches.
Date: Feb 10, 2018 5:30 pm Title: When Life Brings You Full Circle, Pay Attention! There's a Lesson There
Brian and Justin teasing each other is just delightful.
Craig surprises me quite in every chapter.
Michael and Debbie are going to have a big wake-up call in 2 weeks.
Date: Feb 10, 2018 1:52 pm Title: Just When You Thought You Are The Centre of Attention, I Show Up
The scene at the diner was so delightful! Michael is going to have a hard time thinking at what might happen again between Brian and Ben.
As for Debbie, once again she is reminded that she doesn't own the diner and that she can't fire people.
Date: Feb 09, 2018 12:50 am Title: When Life Brings You Full Circle, Pay Attention! There's a Lesson There
Very, very good chapter. Can't wait for the fireworks when Deb gets fired and Michael & Lindsay the witch getting theirs also.
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2018 6:49 pm Title: When Life Brings You Full Circle, Pay Attention! There's a Lesson There
Deb deserved that suspension because as usual instead of trying to stop Michael she went along with his stupid idea and soon it will cost her a job.
I do hope the food will be Divine for Deb's last day working at the diner and I would make her payback every meal she comped Michael <evil grin>
Mel is so going to dream Michael's no Ass for his assault against Ben that was on the video and witnessed by everyone in the diner.
Lindsay may know of The Taylors but she doesn't know them cause if she did she would know better than to try to go up against them.
Or degrade Justin's talent cause unlike like her he didn't rest on his laurels, he worked at his talent which is Art not lying on his back some.
Craig and Jennifer are funny with their antics concerning Brian and Justin. (Nice to have a story where Craig is the Supportive Father who loves his son immensely)
Brian and Justin are so Hot
Michael has a such chance getting Brian to work with him as Lindsay and Deb have of getting Brian to loan them a penny to make a dime lol
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!!! :)
Date: Feb 08, 2018 6:36 pm Title: When Life Brings You Full Circle, Pay Attention! There's a Lesson There
Am LOVING Craig and Jennifer in this one! There aren't a lot of fics out there where he is so on board and positive. I do enjoy those. I also really like the anti-Craigs as well. I like both extremes. The text between he and Justin re: the mascara cracked me up.
Deb is positively hateful! Wow! What she said about Ben...Unbeleivable. I can't WAIT to see what happens at this shindig at the diner after her suspension. hehehe. this should be epic.
And where the hell does Mcihael get off talking like he does? Seriously? He needs a serious beating.
I'm also looking forward to seeing Deb and Lindsey's plan play out! Oh how amusing that will be. And Lindsey having the audasity to talk about Justin's artistic ability like that.
Oh the demise of all 3 is going to be a wonderful site to behold. Am so looking forward to it.
In the meantime, I am enjoying the relationship between B&J. Loving the support network they have as well. Their repartee is so funny at times. Love how open Brian is with him.
Brillian!!!
Elaine