Okay... now it's time for my first feedback on this site... bad English be damned ...

Hi MissMerlot & Team,

First of all: you are such an awesome Writer and I'm sooo jealous of the quality and sheer amount of work output you have! (my own german-speaking muse is on vacation - unfortunately since many many months...)

You know, I realy don't like Michael at all. He is one of the characters that rubed me the wrong way since I knew about QaF. (Lindsay on regular basis and Debbie on ocassion are the others)
But I could never put my finger on the problem I had with little Mikey ... I knew that he must have a mental disease, but it never became clear what it may be - but because of this story, I know for the first time what Michael's diagnosis would be: He's a psychopath. A pathological liar, well practised conman and manipulator without conscience or remorse.
There is a test called 'Hare Psychopathy Checklist-Revised (PCL-R)'. If you take a look at the listed criteria and applies it to Michael you will know what is going on.

And now I'm so looking forward to his inevitable annihilation... and Debbie's as well. Lindsay's downfall too, but she dosen't need any help; she is working like a busy little worker bee all on her own on her social demise and alienation of friends and family.
The Novotnys on the other side will learn what they to this day never wanted to lern: they aren't the hub of the universe and nobody owes them anything!
I anticipate the gang will teach the Novotnys the meaning of remorse and realy rally around Brian, because we all know that eventually he will crumble - emotionaly, mentaly and if they aren't carefull physical as well. My hopes lie with Justin and his ability to catch his big guy when it comes to it.

I'm looking forward to the next update - on all your stories. They are simply great. I will try to leave a comment once in a while, but that's realy difficult for me, because I suck at writing in english.

So sorry for my mistakes and I hope you kann understand what I was trying to say...

many greatings from Germany
Katharina

Good chapter.  Now the mystery of the notebooks is out.  Thanks for the add of Walgreens.  Worked for them for years. 

Pregnant by whom?  Brian needs to be given something to calm him down.  Those books are enough to hurt anyone.  I'm sure Mr. Slim will forgive him for what he almost did once he learns the cause.  Deb and Michael are in for a world of hurt as pay back.

I Knew That Nickel Whore Was Pregnant!!!

I don't think Mel or Ben would have been upset if they slept together, more like shocked that Mel let an actual dick anywhere near her lol

Them both screwing with Michael and Deb's mind will be hilarious.

Tuscany is beautiful and is having quite the effect on Brian and Justin they are closer than before.

So Michael reported to Jack about Brian's behavior and Jack abused Brian?

And he kept notebooks about everything Brian did and everything Jack did to Brian?? 

If that is the case then death isn't good enough for Michael, Hell isn't good enough for Michael!!!

I do wonder if Deb knew it would explain why she never got Brian out of the situation and kept Brian tied to her and Michael??

The Brian Kinney Protection Squad has gotten some new members I see :)

Now were getting to the meat of the story.  How could Michael?  When does Brian find out?

Uh Oh Snotty Lottie is going to be grounded for the rest of time or until she grows up and starts acting like a lady instead of tramp?

Who is Dead and Does Deb Know What Michael Did?

Does It Even Matter What Deb Does and Doesn't Know Concerning Michael?

No matter what Deb's hands will always be dirtier than Michael's cause she raised him to do anything to get what he wants.

Is Lindsay Pregnant?

Will Brian be ready to face what everyone has to tell him and will he be able to hold it together until the party?

Wow, Hot chapter.  Can't wait for the "lovely" party !!!!!!!!!

I dearly want to know what is in that notebook that Hopper found.  Lindsay and Deb are sick in more ways than one.  So Lottie thought to join the fun and ended up all upset.  Not as upset as she will be in Florence.

What did Michael do and what else is in that notebook????

Thank Goodness Hopper is smart enough to turn the tables on both Michael and Lindsay, and thanks to Lindsay's need for cleanliness Michael's nasty secret has been revealed.

Those glasses and that villa are beautiful and Gus with that blanky is Beyond Adorable.

Brian and Justin vacationing in Tuscany is just what they need cause when they get back Pittsburgh is going to be leveled.

Michael is so dead they are going to have to bury him twice. 

Loving everything about Tuscany.  But what was in that notebook that Hopper found?  I seriously need to know.

Gus is a great kid and his relation with Justin is building nicely.

Michael is atrocious; his mind is so dark and full of envy and jealousy.

Michael is "The Drop-In Dad" he always called Brian because unlike Brian he doesn't use his child to up his status quo, Brian loved Gus the moment he held, Michael only loves Jenny when she is useful.

Lindsay is exactly the same way she uses Gus for status and the money Brian gives, what love she has for Gus doesn't supersede her need to be Powerful and Envied.

Hell even Deb craves that which goes to show like is always attracted to like and that means they are easy to destroy.

Brian and Justin are funny with the way the tick each other off and turn each other on.

Gus is so adorable!!

Carl is Happy with Delores.

Can't Wait For The Party, But first Italy Fun Awaits!! :)

How nice that Ben is considered a parent for Jenny.  Don't see how Michael, Debbie, and Lindsay think they'll get back in Brian's good graces.