Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2018 1:51 pm Title: Meet The Family - It's A Great One

Love the way Claire has made an about face and John along with Peter too.  Arthur is growing on me.  Would like another chapter soon please.

Author's Response:

hiya,

I too loved the way Claire and the kids have  found her way back to Brian. Guess a lot has to do with Arthur and his love for Claire. The kids couldn't wish for a better dad.

Working as hard as we can on other chapers. It isn't always easy but we are trying to keep going as fast as we possibly can :)

XOXO

Soirsa

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2018 10:59 pm Title: Not So Honest Apologies But Very Honest Support

Great chapter.  Love when Lindsay gets bested.  Great job.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2018 7:34 pm Title: Not So Honest Apologies But Very Honest Support

Is Paris, Texas Far Enough?

That Bitch is still sitting on sixty thousand!!!

Ron might want to check how many bank accounts Lindsay has, no way should she get to keep that money.

I do think Nancy and Lindsay should've paid more attention to what Ron was saying because I do believe they missed some very crucial items that is detrimental to their survival??

Justin is Vicious when it comes to protecting Brian and yet he was also Honest in doing it.

Claire is finally Brian's Big Sister and it is Glorious!!

Lindsay is lucky it was just oatmeal dumped on her head and Claire didn't kick her Ass!

Brian has to send Deb, Michael and Lindsay a definitive message that declares they have no chance of reclaiming their place in his life or the Avenue again.

Fantastic Updates To All Your Stories...Thanks :)

 

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2018 12:36 am Title: She's Now Good. They're Still Bad. And She Gets Evil

Lindsay walked into that room ill prepared as usual and she got spanked.

Now Mommy and Daddy get their turn with her and I hope they know about her losing custody of Gus and her many orgies?

Re-reading this again and I noticed Deb's level of hatred towards Brian is high and it isn't because Brian rejected Michael.

It's because Brian is everything Michael will never be.

Brian took every obstacle in his way and turned it into Success, while Michael could get a hang nail and need Mommy to take care of him.

Brian didn't let anything or anyone stop him from working to turn his horrible past into his very bright future.

Michael resents Brian because he is everything Michael could try to be and as much as he wants to be loved by Brian, it is also how much he despises Brian for leaving him behind with every new success he achieved.

Even Lindsay resents Brian and craves him too because without him she is nothing and with him she can only remain in the Friend Zone along with Michael.

They all basked in the glow of being associated with Brian and resented that they need it in  order to get any attention

Especially Deb who sees her son as Perfect, a Burden and her Biggest Failure who never progressed past four mentally and twelve in maturity.  

Can't Wait For The Next Chapter :)

Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2018 8:44 pm Title: She's Now Good. They're Still Bad. And She Gets Evil

Hello Writers-Flock,

 

next epic Review is due. I am seriously to slooooow to keep up with you...

 

 

37: oh yeah, Witches Sabbath in the Pitts! And here we go again… Ms Grassi and Mrs Kinney at their worst. But no more tantrums or rants because they will never change - I have finally resigned and abandoned all hope that anything in this direction will ever happen. Nonetheless: I am very sure that every action will be followed by an appropriate reaction - the queens, bears and fairies of Liberty will never forget... and beware! Annihilation step 2 is brewing

 

And I'm so immensely pleased with Justin! He will protect poor stunned Brian with everything he has, wicked, cutting tongue and all. Let your inner WASP sting, Sunshine!... If only it weren't such a shame that absolutely nothing of what he says will trickle into their brains

 

Lindsay... well, let's say she kills every little glimpse of seemingly decency with boat-loads of crap - and slowly but surely she will sink in it.

 

 

38: Ha! Brian is back and lays down the law. He is so finished with his so called mothers and I so wish he would go through with going to Joan's church...

In one point, however, I have to contradict Brian in all this: he isn't motherless. He has Del and will have Jen, to some extent Mami and her gaggle... plenty enough mother-figures in his live.

And there are some really fiercely loyal fag hags around him - Daph and Cyn are some scary Ladies. They will bite everyone's head of if it is necessary.

 

The interaction between Lindsay and Debbie shows to me how boneheaded Deb really is: she seems to think that Michael will be the good son and support her. But in this regards Lindsay is right: Michael will drop his mother like a hot potato if it seemingly benefits him. She will be on her own and should really try to bring her sheep in the dry… but I don't know if crossing both Michael and Lindsay is actually the best way to do so.

 

I love how Justin takes care of Brian, helps him to unwind and getting his thoughts of things.

 

 

39: Wow! There is actually a Kinney who gets it! Claire has overcome her disturbing legacy of sermons and punches. She ripped her kids out of this toxic environment and doesn't repeat the disgusting mistakes that her mother apparently still considers admissible. Claire seems to love her gay son ... and yes, her gay brother too!

 

So, Joan told father Tom what happened? And he saw through her woe-story and called her on her bullshit. Rightly so! But naturally Joan knows best what God wants and what his words mean, better as her fellow church-goers, and certainly better as a priest! And Joan has the gall to call Claire sanctimonious? Oh really??? What a black souled Witch-Bitch!

When she leaves her church, what will she do? St. Joan will be all alone: she condemned her Children, she doesn't have Friends, there seems to be no other family members... will she live as hermit? Read the Bible and live on air and booze alone?

Well, in my opinion Claire's 'duty as a daughter' doesn’t exist, as she was saying. Joan has forfeited all rights of getting help from both her children.

Is there a possibility for adult children to be emancipated from their parents? Maybe Claire and Brian should start a legal procedure that severs any connection to her? No inheritances for them but also no further responsibility for Joan. (Here in Germany adult children have to pay for nursing homes and care even if they are estranged to their parents if these can't afford it. It takes extensive legal actions to rectify this – if there is actually a chance at all.)

 

Debs recon-mission clearly doesn't go according to plan. Vics handling of his obnoxious Sister is very good and I knew it! He didn’t want to share a name with her. It's sweet that Vic and Rodney got married but it is sad that Rodney died… they should have had a longer married life together.

 

Am I right when I think Vic laid one carefully crafted trap before Debs feet by telling her the addresses? There are still these restraining orders of Mel and Ben out there. Deb and Michael will break them if they come to Mels door...

 

It's great that Jen and Craig are so committed to Brian. The Taylors have fully figured out Lindsay's games and are suitably equipped to stop them.

 

However, what I do not really understand yet, is what Debbie wants to achieve by sending her notebook to the Petersons. Sure, the information that Lindsay has $ 70.000 sabotaged her attempts of trying to squeeze more money out of Ron, but it does not benefit Deb… hmm...

 

 

and now I am waiting for the next developments

 

Warm greetings from Germany

Katharina

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2018 4:34 am Title: She's Now Good. They're Still Bad. And She Gets Evil

Looks like Brian has the backing of all the right people and Lindsay is in trouble.  Can't wait to see what you have planned for Ms. Grassi and Mr. Devore.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2018 1:35 am Title: Loveaduckfuck

Great chapter.  Glad that Brian is becoming so happy.  He needs Justin as much as Justin needs him.

Author's Response:

Hiya,

THank you. Glad you liked the chapter.

Yes, Brian and Justin really need each other. And they really deserve each other for the complement and suppliment each other in so many ways
Both find strength in each other to weather the storm.

XOXO

Soirsa

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 11, 2018 1:41 pm Title: Loveaduckfuck

Tigger takes care of it.  Don't know what Deb and Lindsay feel that they've accomplished.  Michael deserved to lose whatever he left in the trunk of the car.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2018 8:22 pm Title: The Witches of Pittsburgh

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!

I WANT TO HEAR WHAT BRIAN SAYS!! Oh man alive what a cliff hanger you left us with! Praying you update this one soon! 

OK, going forward, I really hope someone finds that book of Debs quickly and keeps it same. While I don't want Brian to read it, I want everyone else to and burn her at the stake. I hate the word, but man, you really made yer into a cunt in this story! In other's she was redeemable for the most part, but she is pure evil in this. And how does Lindsey know about it? Did she really find it? She put on a good show pretending not to know about Michael's books. Looking forward to when she get's nailed as well.

YAY justin for standing up like he did. While Brian most likely knew of Joan's feelings, to have it spoken like she did and excusing herslef like she did. ARGH! Can't wait to see what you do to all the enemies of Liberty.

Fuck m. An emotionally draining chapter. The rage inside RN is huge.

Awesome!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2018 7:07 pm Title: The Witches of Pittsburgh

Joan obviously wants to meet Daphne's Little Friend and I hope Joan enjoys the stings!!!!

Looks like Ms. Grassi needs another lesson and another trip to her favourite jail cell.

Lindsay You Flat Ass, Flat Chested, Two-Penny Whore!!!

Of course she had a trump card just in case of emergencies, now just need to find that notebook and have her Ass kicked too.

Deb's little band of idiots may have grown by one but they are still no match for the Tsunami that is heading there way.

Does Brian own Joan's house? <evil grin>

Now all we need is Claire and the evil circle will be complete <eye roll>

Fantastic Updates, Thanks! :)

Author's Response:

Oh wouldn't it be great if Brian were to own Joan's house? I'd love to see her evicted before she can even try to appologize. She could move in with Debs and Michael and have their own little witch coven.

XOXO

Soirsa

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2018 1:13 pm Title: The Witches of Pittsburgh

So Lindsay did know, how cruel.  Deb thinking that Joan will have an effect is just so wrong.  Time for a lawsuit.  There must be something that can put them in jail.  Everyone would defend Brian, but I think Brian is capable of telling them off himself.

Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2018 8:41 am Title: Celebrating Love...What Belongs Together Comes Together

Hey Ladies,

 

I don't get it. I really do not understand it! Why the heck can't Debbie see that she is heading straight for hell? In every sense of the word.

 

I really don't expect anything else from Michael; he is just that stupid, even if he thinks he's a genius. And really, Mikey? You could be 'all ass and mouth' for Brian? You are a gargantuan ass and your filthy mouth is already so big you can't shut it even if your life would depend on it!

 

But Deb? I thought of her as being a relatively intelligent woman who at least possesses peasant cunning, but she seems hell-bent to make life unbearable difficult for Brian. Does she not see that if she does not stop, she will gamble away every chance on getting even the tiniest help from Brian and the people of Liberty in the future? Not that I think he would even consider something like that at all anymore.

 

Well, I think, Deb and Michael are something akin to Vampires. These bloodsuckers need feeding, they need someone to give them blood or they wouldn't survive. And the Novontys need People twofold: They prey on the emotional – and in Brian's case even bodily – suffering and are sucking life-energy and joy out of the people around them, family and friends, so they can feel superior. A trait that they share with Lindsay too.

 

And on the other side they need People around them that are successful to a degree, because success equals Money and Money is all they want. They need People who they can manipulate or guilt into financing them because it goes without saying that they 'owe it to us'. Debbie and Michael are contrary to what they say and believe themselves weak, dependent and aren't self-sufficient. Without someone they can feed of they are going to sink… or burn, to stick with the analogy.

 

Yes, yes, I know there are other parts of this chapter but Deb and Michael make my blood boil… and then it goes like this: