Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2018 11:00 pm Title: The Raw Occasion...

45.       Hm… should I simply continue with my Chapter 44 rant? Michael really doesn't get it that he isn't wanted around The Avenue? What does he want there? There is nothing for him there! He lies to himself if he thinks there would be anyone who would support his return attempts, but we all know that he isn't brave enough to even really try this. He will wait and hope that Deb will at some time somehow find a way to provide him again with the easy and comfortable life he always lived and of which he is convinced that he is entitled to.

Michaels behavior speaks more and more of an assortment of serious – and considering he is Debbie's son with high probability hereditary – personality disorders; a split personality non the least. He swings from whiney to malice to fearful cowering to aggressive to petulant to... yeah... pick one, it will hit the target...

 

Justin and Brian have taken one major step into their future – raw sex equals a very serious commitment… and it also equals a significant emotional progress on Brian's part.

Emmett is sweat as he discussed this epic event with Ted and Ben. Even if the three of them are making a little fun of it they show quite a bit of respect – as it should be in general. It is great to see how normal they can talk about such delicate things as relationships and emotions if there is no source of interference.

 

So and onto the last one… see you at 46…

Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2018 10:58 pm Title: The Tide is Turning...Hide You Worm!

Hi Ladies,

 

Well, so this was great… I'm honest, my impatience reared its head a little, but the wait was worth it! 4 Chapters at once – wow! Impatience is truly satisfied...

 

First I have to make a statement regarding our lovely boys and their developing and thriving relationship because I know that these scenes doesn't feature much in my reviews: I really love those little domestic scenes with Brian and Justin cooking, shopping and generally living a normal life. And of course the hot ones are great as well… but truthfully I must admit that I can't really enjoy them as much as I normally would because I really want to know what happened to the assembled human garbage. I'm chewing nails and hibbel in my seat while reading, because I want to know what happens to them and how long it takes them to finally come to the realization that they have probably really done something wrong… slim chance for that, I know, but well…

 

So… onto the reviews (I have split them this time, because it would simply be too long for a single one)

 

43.       Michael seems to like his little power trip, short-lived as it will be. Pathetic little moron. Is he really thinking Deb would do as he bids? But for her it could be the long overdue reality check, but I doubt it will be. She may be angry over her son's behavior but this will be undoubtedly be anybody else's fault not his and certainly not hers. Anyway, it is really interesting to see how close the two of them are working together toward a common goal… not. Especially Deb seems to do everything to sabotage Michaels footing in this whole mess by contributing to his stalker file amongst other things. At one hand I can understand this because he crossed many lines in his behavior (and to top it off says his mother is fat… well, Mr DeVore is really not an athlete himself!) but it will not bring anything positive for the Grassi/DeVore's if they turn against each other.

Ok, now… the Peterson 'Ladies' are in for a rude awakening. Those two leeches seem to think they are still in the position to manipulate Ron and skim money from him. If the two of them would turn of their superior complex and pay attention to him they would easily see that the man is way above any fear of reputational loose (as Nancy is clearly thinking) and in the process of crafting a future without them. He will bid his time until his grandchild is borne and then he will take actions: divorce Nancy, strip of Lindsay parental rights to the new baby, disinherit her (and maybe even Lynette?). While I can't see Ron raising the Baby, maybe he has a plan for it? I don’t know but there is this nagging feeling that there is a sibling who comes with a great family, many aunts, uncles and additional grandparents... maybe? And how Lindsay and Nancy would spit feathers at that, ha! Aaaaand of course: I'm so looking forward to find out what Roberta's take on the whole situation will be. There's Reinforcement for the gaggle I bet!

Arthur is a godsend to this family. It is evident how disgusted he is over his mother in law and her fellow witch of Pittsburg. He wants to protect his wife and her sons but it is good to see that he doesn't keep secrets. He will bring the Witches and the worm down hard – it's unbelievable that they still think they didn't do any harm or even anything wrong.

I'm really pleased with Claire. She has shaken her past and is the loyal encouraging older sister Brian always deserved. It will be the single most important experience for Brian to have someone blood related to him who will support him thru everything that may come of this…

And YES! One time Jack Kinney reaped what he sowed! And Brian was out the door, never to return – and thanks to Mikey… well, Lady Destiny has a laughing fit!

 

and on to Chapter 44...

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2018 8:09 pm Title: ...And The Raw Reality

It appeasr I've missed reading a few chapter!! Yikes! sorry about that.

Needless to say, Michael, Deb and Joan are beyond depraved. In fact that doesn't even come close!! How can people be so incredibly hateful!?? It's beyond teh scope of imagination. Deb and Michael are out to only save their own skin. Both will throw the other under a bus to save themselves. Joan simply doesn't think she did anything wrong and that her prayers will get her through. Yeah...OK...

Lindsey, well, that's a whole other kettle of fish. Life is going to be interesting for her fir the next little while, but we all know she's going to raise her ungly head soon enough. Either way, no matter what she does, she's going to be screwed! LOL.

All of Liberty Ave is surrounding and safe guarding Brian. He is well loved and respected. There are enough ears to the ground that he gets all the info he needs well in advance before any of teh nasty ass people even try anything. 

As for Brian and Justin can I just say "SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE" they are doing it RAW!! Yippee!!! So hot!!

I was surprised to see David brought in. short lived as it was. fortuately he learned early on just what the hell was actually going on.

Oh man oh man. Was so nice to sit and catch up on what all I had missed. sorry for the lack of reviews though.

LOVING THIS!!!!

Cheers

Elaine

 

Author's Response:

Hi Elaine,

Worry not, you have missed chapters we took a time out and then posted 4 at once. So glad that you are loving this! 

You are so right about Lindsay...she's coming back and she's bringing a friend, but she's not necessarily a friend for Lindsay.

Yeah our boys got it on and then some...it was a squirming pleasure to write!!!!!

Happy reading.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2018 6:36 pm Title: The Raw Occasion...

Michael why are you crying over that house you hated it?

And Deb shouldn't be too upset since she was planning on Brian buying her a bigger, more gorgeous house anyway.

Sooooo Pathetic!!!! <eye roll>

Ben deserves to be with someone who knows how to rock his world and leaves him Blissed Out Happy and Complete with no ghost of a relationship that will Never Happen. (Granger is man enough to help Ben forget he ever met Michael Novotny)

Just love that Gus and Jenny are editors it is too cute.

Now Brian and Justin were so Hot I bet everyone on Liberty Avenue is fanning themselves and downing lots of ice water <giggles>

Whatever Deb and Michael have planned hope they are prepared for it to be brought up in court.

Ben would make a great counselor but as an author he has enough material from dealing with Deb and Michael for a best seller in horror rofl

I just knew the wait would be worth it, cause you never disappoint, Thanks for the Updates :)

Author's Response:

Hiya

Ben writing a best seller in horror. Brilliant idea!!
It's certainly not going to be a bestseller in the erotic genre for there isn't an erotic bone(r) in Mickey at all.

And yes, I agree on the Blissed Out Happy and Complete for Ben. He so deserves it.

XOXO

Soirsa

Author's Response:

Hiya

Ben writing a best seller in horror. Brilliant idea!!
It's certainly not going to be a bestseller in the erotic genre for there isn't an erotic bone(r) in Mickey at all.

And yes, I agree on the Blissed Out Happy and Complete for Ben. He so deserves it.

XOXO

Soirsa

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2018 6:07 pm Title: Holy Bitch Slap Mikey!

Deb may have fought back but she is still going down with Brian and with their mouths and sense of entitlement they will make friends instantly ;)

Wonder if Pearl got a recording of Deb slapping Michael?

Michael really didn't care where the money came from just so long as he got what he wanted, I wonder if the judge will order restitution too?

Justin is a fabulous cook but needs to read instructions better <giggles>

Emmett is about to deliver a well deserved Bitch Slap to Deb and as usual she acted without thinking and it should pay off nicely in the court proceedings.

Author's Response:

Hiya,

Well Justin isn't the only one who needs to read instructions better. 
I tried to cook a chicken recipe once that needed 1/8 of a liter of cream. Misread 1/8 for 1,8. 
The recipe turned out hideously fattening and disgusting. When cooking now I read the recipe twice before starting on the cooking.

XOXO

Soirsa

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2018 5:35 pm Title: The Raw Occasion...

Indentured Novotonitude! What a great expression!

The last part was so........hot........self-fan needed!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2018 4:36 pm Title: The Tide is Turning...Hide You Worm!

I was wondering how long Debbie would last before fighting Michael back; it seems she had enough.

I can't wait to see how Joan will react to what is coming to her.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2018 3:50 am Title: The Winner Takes It All The Losers Have To Fall

Excellent! So many parts that are great, it's difficult to list all of them.

Ben and the "precious": he knew how to make Michael suffer and kept it secret while preparing the scene.

Gus and Mami: "Aww, are you sured proper sured?".

Brian edging Justin.

Author's Response:

Hiya,

Thank you for the lovely review.

The scene with the "precious" made me love Ben even more then before. He sure knew how to bring Mickey to his knees.
But believe me there is way more for Mickey to come before the end of the story.

Gus and Mami? A match made in heaven.

Brian edging Justin? Hot,  hot, hot!!

XOXO

Soirsa

Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2018 3:40 pm Title: The Winner Takes It All The Losers Have To Fall

Hello Ladies,

and on to the new developments ...

40.       OOOh yes! It is disturbing how weak WASP men in general seem to be, but Ron finally grows some balls! And he will need them! Whenever Lindsay opens her dirty mouth, the lies just fly out and her mother doesn't seem much better. Well, I'm a woman and I know that almost every woman on this planet works with this very special set of weapons and skills that we have, I even concede that WASP ladies are somewhat more adept in using them in this coy little gender war – but Nancy and Lindsay are definitely well over the appropriate measure! There is nothing coy or sweet about them, they are amoral, malicious and asocial harpies and Ron should get rid of them as fast as he can. It is only right that the Taylors – in essence Justin – set the man straight about the things Lindsay was/is up to so he can react in an appropriate manner.

Ah Claire! Now that she has put her foot down and acts like she wants, that woman is so sweet, big sister and all. It is funny to see that the siblings know their weak spots even after so long … and don't hesitate to use them. And to think that Lindsay believes Claire would side with her! These Times are well and truly over. And yeah, there are blood relations out there who are on Brian's side.

41.       There we go! The first meeting of the new forming Kinney clan takes place. It is a relief that Brian gets a somewhat normal home-live with Justin, the Kids and the rest of the clan… and yes this would be the remains of the old gang plus the Kinney-Fitzgeralds, the Taylors, the BK-Support group(s) and in hopefully not so distant future Ron.

On another note: It is nice to see that John and Peter act like normal Brothers. I bet that under the influence of Grandmother Joan such behavior was not allowed. God forbid the boys could come near each other - bodily and emotionally!

And Claire seems to have hit the Jackpot with Arthur! He has a good job, seems genuine to love her, is relaxed and respectful of the 'people with alternative lifestyles' in her life. And he jumps right into the fire: if Arthur manages and brings the case to a courtroom, there will be no chance in hell that Michael can keep his currently suspended rights to Jenny-Rebecca! They will be permanently withdrawn, because even when he was still a child himself, he was actively abetting the abuse of another child. And it will not help his custody case that his mother did exactly the same thing. Further criminal charges notwithstanding. And these will come and they will go down... hard! Even if there should be finally no conviction, I hope there is extensive reporting in the newspapers - and not only the 'gay' papers! After all, Brian is a respected businessman and important employer in the Pittsburgh area... they will be dead to everyone, nobody will touch them with a pair of pincers. The realtors are already making the start, thanks to Ron!

42.       äh… is Mami really in her seventies? I pictured her as mid-fifties, a little older than Jennifer but in the same general age group. Tall but not to slim, with glasses and a no-nonsense attitude when it comes to people she doesn't like; somehow like Del... or Del's mom if she really is that much older. (oh, by the way: what does 'goosed' mean? Didn’t catch this one.)

It's really sad that Brian is still so haunted by his past - the boys defiantly are right, he needs to speak to someone. It may be a no-go for Brian but maybe Justin can convince him that a Psychologist may help him to overcome the insecurities and the lingering hurt and fears.

Well, Michael and Deb clearly have their priorities straight… even if they seem to differ exceedingly! Deb is still deluding herself in thinking she would be able to step back in her rightful place, when she only can beat Brian and Vic back in shape. Like anybody would take her back! And Michaels ultimate and only concern is money … even his comics aren’t really important. Interpersonal relationships? Fuck them if they don’t do exactly as the godlike Michael DeVore wishes and woe those who dare to have their own mind.

It's refreshing to see how blindly they fall into Vic's carefully designed trap. The fine may not be high but every little incident ultimately sums up to a stalking charge. And look how deeply affected Michael is by the loose of his precious (oh yes, there's a distinctive similarity to Gollum. Does little Mikey wither now, too, since his 'ring' burned in the fires of 'Mt. Highwater'?)

Aaaaaand here we are! Deb begins to see the true colors of her bighearted, selfless and over all measures generous son!! What immeasurable surprise that her standard guilt trip doesn't work on him! He will kick her to the gutter if it so pleases him.

It really really pains me immensely, but I must say that I can't condemn Michael entirely. If this speech would come from Brian I would cheer him on because he isn't completely wrong with his assessment of Debs behavior - because therein lays the root of all the evil...

 

and now I'm waiting impatiently for more

Greetings to you all

Katharina

Author's Response:

Hiya,

Danke schön Kathatrine for yet another great review.

I love the way Brian new family slowly but surely grows and gains strenght. Finally Brian get's the love and attention he yearned for all his life. All of them together will see an end to the terrible trio.

They have dug their grave and now have to lie in it.

I love your Lord of the Rings comment. Yep, Michael has lost his precious along with his mind for who does he think he is for treating his mother like this. Debbie might not be the best of mothers but no child should threat their parent like this.

The only way she can get to him now is by taking away his money for that is the most important thing in his life.

Looking forward to your next review. They are always fun to read.

Bis zum nächsten mal,

XOXO

Soirsa

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2018 10:44 am Title: The Winner Takes It All The Losers Have To Fall

Great chapter.  Glad to see Mikey & Deb in more trouble.  And, poof, there goes Captain Astro - Yeah !!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Hiya,

THank you for your review.

Mikey and Deb should go into hiding for there's loads more trouble coming their way.

And Captain Astro in flames? Burn baby, burn!!!

XOXO

Soirsa

Reviewer: Gcleft77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2018 8:00 pm Title: Meet The Family - It's A Great One

Yes!!! True vengeance for Brian

Author's Response:

Hiya

THank you for your review.

I'm joining you in your cheers. YES!! True revenge.

But there might be even more coming for our illustrious trio.

So hold on to your hat.....

XOXO

Soirsa

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2018 4:59 pm Title: Meet The Family - It's A Great One

It was a wonderful meeting of the family everyone got along quite well and Brian has strong bloodties that will help him to heal. (As long as John stops drooling over Justin lol)

I do think John is right that Brian should talk to someone to help him further learn to accept and move on from those who seek to hurt him.

Abuse charges? It sounds like a step in the right direction and shows that Brian is not allowing Deb, Michael or Joan to get away with what they did to him.

I don't think Lindsay is seeing how much of a punishment Texas will be for her especially if Ron has plans to take that baby away from Lindsay, she really shouldn't be around a baby cause she only sees them as pawns to getting what she wants.

Could Nancy be on her way out too?

I get the feeling her Aunt isn't the push-over her Daddy once was?

Ron is helping Brian to get rid of Deb and Michael, while also guaranteeing that He and Only He gets to see Gus and Jenny.

Lindsay only has two weeks before she is shipped to Texas, whatever will she do?

What does John have to say and is Brian ready to hear it?

Sublime Update :)

Author's Response:

Hiya,

Thank  you for reviewing.

I too am glad that the family is getting closer and closer. John drooling over Justin? Who wouldn't! (big Justin fan here)

But John will find the love of his life sooner or later.

I do hope Lindsay's aunt will make her stay in Texas a living hell. Maybe Nancy should join her there too. That way Ron can finally become the man he's supposed to be and another wonderful grandpa to Gus.

Glad he finally grew some balls

XOXO

Soirsa