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Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 4:05 pm Title: Feeding The Beasts...And Fannying The Flames

Hi there,

 

I have to say, my thoughts where doing circles in the last days because I tried to imagine a way, how you would maybe continue the demise of Deb and Michael... but I have to be patient, because you have given our favorite guys a break from all this madness.

 

I'm pleased that there appears to be a competent Psychologist/Psychiatrist who will help Brian to overcome his past. Furthermore Dr. Morris seems to be well respected enough in the judiciary world to destroy Michaels machinations about getting of scot free because a faked mental disease.

It will be interesting to see what this highly qualified Doctor will say about the reasons why the Grassi/DeVores have willingly and with open eyes caused so much damage to Brian. I really hope he will not attest a real psycho-problem for them because they definitely knew what they were doing and also knew that it was dead wrong.

 

Will Arthur call more witnesses? Because one thought I had repeatedly was: what would happen if an officer in full uniform would possibly make a statement about Debs character? What would it look like if Lt. Charles Michael Novotny jnr. tells the court that she used his father for her machinations? Or when he tells them, that he believes she would have eventually tried to obtain parts from his father's estate by naming him as Michael's father. (Maybe Deb selected Charles Michael sen. because the Novotnys are rich?)

Oh by the way, is Charles jnr. in the Army? Because if he is, why is he only Lieutenant? He must be older than Michael which means he is around 40 to 45 and therefore he would most likely be a Major possibly even a Lt-Colonel.

(So yes, I will admit it: I'm a nerd when it comes to researching facts for my own stories - amongst other things the command structure of the US military branches as well... some years ago... wrote NCIS/JAG fanfics in German...)

 

Also, I'm really curious who Lindsay's baby's father is and how he'll behave when she contacts him. He seems to be a wealthy man, if she believes she can extort money from him. But I have a feeling that this will bite Lindsay and Nancy in the flat behinds...

One positive note at the end: Mel seems to get a new love interest - very good, time to stop hiding behind Gus...

 

See you soon...

Katharina

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 12:08 pm Title: Feeding The Beasts...And Fannying The Flames

So, what did Michael hope to gain by telling everyone Ben was the one to give Peter HIV? And what else could Michael tell everyone? Too bad he couldn't atch the news... NOT! So glad Morris can see a fake... but why can't Justin be in the courtroom?

Does Lindsay really think William Archer will give into her demands. She's more delusional than I thought. Did I miss something, or forget something?  How does Lynette plan on getting the baby? Did her Ronald strike up a deal with William?

The restruant sounded divine.

I just remember... Deb pled 'Guilty'... What does that mean for her after her burst out during court?

Thanks for an update for this amazing story... I really enjoy it...

Hugs, Cathy

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 3:45 am Title: Feeding The Beasts...And Fannying The Flames

Dr. Trevor is Hot!! <giggles>

And thankfully he knows a fraud when he sees it Michael won't know what hit come Tuesday.

Lindsay and Nancy are two very conniving counts but they will get theirs, is their apartment bugged or a live feed running?

When Ron goes for the juggler he really bites down hard lol

Lynette is everything Nancy and Lindsay could never achieve and like Deb and Michael's resentment for Brian, they resent her for achieving a level of success they can only dream about.

She will be a Wonderful Mother to that baby just because she will never be like Nancy or Lindsay, they see kids as bargaining chips, she sees a baby who deserves tons of love, laughter, discipline, nurturing, guidance and the freedom to be who they want and live their life on their terms.

All that food sounded Delicious, Looked Delicious Too ;)

Thanks for Three Amazing Updates To Three Amazing Stories:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 2:37 am Title: Feeding The Beasts...And Fannying The Flames

Everytime I read a chapter on this I want to eat.  Love it and can't wait to find out everything you've hinted at.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 2:33 am Title: Feeding The Beasts...And Fannying The Flames

Great chapter.  Love all the food ideas.  Just waiting for Mikey to get his and I don't mean food.  LOL

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2018 12:20 am Title: From Cane Toad Back To Frog Prince

WOW!  Didn't take too much for that veneer to crack, for the Wicked Witch of the West to come out!  Then she has the audacity to think that she can get him to be an obedient lap dog. Debs, your days are numberd...  Thank you for this AWESOME fic.  You are a wonderful author. You are truly amazing!

Hugs, Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2018 8:37 pm Title: From Cane Toad Back To Frog Prince

Oh, wow.  Didn't really realize that Deb could be even worse than Mikey, but then again she trained him.  Such strong, emotional writing.  Fantastic.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2018 6:30 pm Title: From Cane Toad Back To Frog Prince

I Knew She Was Acting!!!

But what Deb is about to learn is that the final hand doesn't belong to her and whatever she does next will further show the court her callous nature, she thinks she is still in control and refutes to grasp that her behavior and outburst in court shows that she has none.

Yes Michael and Deb are cut from the same cloth and it will be that cloth that hangs them both.

What are on the those missing pages that Deb really doesn't want anyone to see, is Arthur just waiting to use them against Deb, Michael and Lindsay???

Deb needs Brian's signature to keep him tied to her but why get so upset, unless there is more money in that account or more accounts???

Deb wants what's owed to her for taking care of Brian for years but the law is rarely forgiving.

Would she, Michael and Lindsay have to pay restitution?

After all Brian gave them a lot of money for years and that money could be put too good use.

Brian does need help the burden of their sins is something he has had to carry since conception and with a professionals help he can toss those burdens away and breathe easier and live freer, Brian needs to scream, cry, rage, grieve and move on.

Can't Wait For The Next Chapter:)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2018 5:46 pm Title: From Cane Toad Back To Frog Prince

I didn't think Debbie would have sunk so low, but I was wrong. What an awful chapter to read, so painful for Brian, and Justin.



Author's Response:

Yeah should’ve warned folks. It was horrible to write but had to be done to get our boys to the next stage...getting the help they need...

Happier reading for the next chapter....honest!

The TOAH babes

Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2018 3:38 pm Title: From Cane Toad Back To Frog Prince

Hello Ladies,

 

hm ... I'm tempted to reconsider my opinion of who I hate more, Debbie or Michael. I think she actually managed to leave Michael and even Joan behind in my ranking of the worst characters in Brian's live - not really a desirable result...

 

How is it possible that Deb surprised me with an additional unimaginable low? I had hoped she would actually have a little spark of decency left when it seemed she was trying to give Brian back some of his money, but apparently it was all a hoax.

While Michael is just simply stupid, malicious and calculating, Deb heaves the deceitfulness and treacherousness to a whole new level. She is cruel in the truest and most sinister sense of the word, but sadly knew how to hide it very well for years. It is the worst betrayal when a mother - and as such she wants to be seen in regards of Brian - views the value of her child only in how much money she can siphon off of him or her.

Does she really think anyone would still believe that she loves Brian? If so, she is clearly insane, she clearly proved that in the witness stand. It's really pathetic when you cannot even stick to your own shady plans, when you get provoked and your real motivations are exposed. A weakness she fortunately shares with her biological son - to the benefit of the prosecution.

 

The really bad thing about the whole mess is that Brian is constantly suffering. Every time we think he has a chance for some quiet time and peace of mind, the Grassi/DeVores crawl out of their respective hole and destroy it. I hope Brian finds someone who makes it clear to him that none of what Debbie and Michael say is relevant and even less true.

 

Well, we will see…

Greetings

Katharina

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2018 1:51 pm Title: From Cane Toad Back To Frog Prince

Well, we know where Michael gets it from.  Deb is so deep into denial.  Can't wait to find out who Brian gets to help him and Justin.

Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2018 8:57 pm Title: He Goes Back to the Day You Hurt Him...

Hallo Girls,

 

I know ... long radio silence - and no real excuse, except that it was hot, really really hot here in the last weeks - up to 40°C - and therefore everyone had little desire to do anything…

Well, let's just say I'm still reading and will keep reading. Now I will leave a brief comment without ranting and long drawn analysis of the twisted characters around Brian. We have already been there plenty of times.

 

The developments of the last chapters are really everything I had hoped for:

Michael is on his way to his very own personal hell and he still thinks he will come out of this mess as a free man – we will happily be onlookers when his world crashes and burns around him. I hope you writers will utterly destroy him, disgusting excuse of a human being that he is.

Deb… I don’t know what I should think about her. On one hand she is almost as depraved as her son. On the other there are some little blips of the Debbie we all hope for. Anyway she definitely has to pay for her misdeeds - there really are plenty of those.

Joan got what she wished: the devil saved her from the trial... but nothing is for free, as we all know. I hope Brian and Claire don't have to care about her anymore, but knowing Brian he will see it as his obligation to pay for her care anyway...

I look forward to the destruction of every last little bit of reputation and clout Lindsay and Nancy think they have - their appearance in court will only be the beginning.

 

Outside of the courtroom is just as great even if it is a little less thrilling. The growth of the Kinney-Clan is going forward. They add new People to the fold who actually fit their group and aid positive progress; people who aren't only there because they somehow always were, even if they only ever halted any possible development. The characters of the People around Brian and Justin evolve and the couples develop healthy relationships without unwanted interference of people who are only looking for their personal advantage and profit...

 

I'm really curious what the trial will bring to light. What twisted schemes have they plotted? What ghastly things has Brian really suffered because of them and what will the court eventually decide?

 

I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

Greetings from Germany

Katharina

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2018 1:17 am Title: He Goes Back to the Day You Hurt Him...

Great chapter.  The truths are coming out and Mikey and Debs are in more trouble along wih the Witchy Wasp.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 7:56 pm Title: He Goes Back to the Day You Hurt Him...

Well done Debbie: she seems honest and getting away from her son.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 5:38 pm Title: He Goes Back to the Day You Hurt Him...

Deb may think she scored some points with Brian by saying that last part to Michael but she is no different than Joan.

Peter is right she never loved Brian she just used him to get a break from Michael's constant need of attention.

Over and over they abused Brian and still they have yet to grasp that what they did was wrong.

All the evidence presented in court shows that If Deb could have she would have bled Brian dry and run him ragged for the rest of his life, her abusive behavior is loud and clear so is her need to win and be in control, in baiting Michael she is showing the court her disregard smh

I bet she still believes Brian owes her a debt just like Michael?

I doubt they are finished with Deb but Michael and Lindsay taking the stand before Brian should be very interesting for Brian's side.

I hope Arthur asks Lindsay if she would like a hair clip when she goes for her lost little girl look and an Oscar for her tears lol

Three Fantastic Updates to three of your stories is the perfect start to my week...Thank You So Much :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 1:49 pm Title: He Goes Back to the Day You Hurt Him...

I love your stories.  Each chapter has a clue that keeps you guessing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2018 7:29 pm Title: ...If He Could Find A Way

Vic did a wonderful job on the stand.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2018 5:24 pm Title: ...If He Could Find A Way

Now that Michael really knows how Deb feels about him he will be gunning for her Moreton ever, and after Vic's testimony he will be after him and Brian more too.

Deb may think she is clever but it still doesn't change how she abused Brian to make up for her in adequacy as a mother, and no amount of tune changing Wil garner Brian's forgiveness he is done with them both.

Deb seems like she is still trying to save face instead of really looking inside herself and dealing with the fact that her love for Brian turned into hate and greed, she is not seeing truth and that means everything she is doing is still a manipulation game.

Michael as well is playing his own game and not taking what he did seriously, he thinks the more he hurts Brian the more Brian will be dependent on him.

This is still a game of deception with Brian as the prize that both often think they have earned for selfish reasons smh

Even Lindsay in her resentment towards Brian still in her way sees him as a prize that she has earned for being there for him.

At the end of the day it is all  about the cache of being with or near Brian Aiden Kinney that drove them all to hurt, betray, deceive and use Brian so badly. 

Fantastic Updates to Three Fantastic Stories, Thanks :)

 

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2018 5:14 pm Title: ...If He Could Find A Way

Deb did good for some time; too bad she was enslaved with her birth son.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2018 5:11 pm Title: ...If He Could Find A Way

Yeah for Vic.  Great chapter.  Love when Michael gets what is coming to him.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2018 6:20 pm Title: If He Could Turn Back Time...

I found the part with the watch in §61: I bet Michael was planning Justin's murder after seeing it on him.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2018 4:43 am Title: If He Could Turn Back Time...

I'm a tad confuse about the former boyfriend.  It's nice that Peter wants to side with Brian.  Need more soon.



Author's Response:

Sorry, will go and correct that, the former boyfriend that Mark Richards means is David Cameron. 

MissMerlot.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2018 4:20 am Title: The Devil Delivers...

So Joan is making a brief appearance in hell.  What will happen when she finally wakes up?

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2018 1:45 am Title: If He Could Turn Back Time...

Deb is delusional she honestly thinks it was Brian's job to make Michael into the man he would never be, she wanted Michael to make her proud after all her sacrifices and instead Michael stayed fourteen and just got worst, while Brian got better and better.

Deb is pissed that Michael will never grow up and that Brian did grow up, so she tried as hard as she could to hold him back, with each new roadblock she threw Brian plowed through and became more successful, every time Brian succeeded her love for him turned into resentment and her resentment turned into abuse.

I believe Deb realized at some point she was abusing Brian but she just couldn't stop it anymore because Brian kept showing up Michael, in her mind she probably thought if Brian was gone Michael would be more successful only her wish never came into fruition.

Deb thinks she loves Brian but like Michael and Lindsay she hates him, for constantly reminding her that Michael's failures are hers and that without Brian they are Fugly, Selfish People Without Morals or Souls.

Michael whining over a watch that he was never going to get shows how no matter what he will always be the kid Brian should've left behind years ago to sink or swim alone, and that he will always be the kid in the middle of the store throwing the loudest tantrum and making everyone wish they could either beat that kid or his Mama, while also secretly happy that that isn't their kid lol

Can't Wait For The Next Chapter. Thanks for the Updates:) 

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2018 1:06 am Title: The Devil Delivers...

Joan got prayer answered but she is not going to like the consequences, for years she will have to listen to each and every one of Brian's cries for help over and over again and hope the sound never fades even after she wakes up.

You wanted saving from the humiliation of the trial now deal with the reckoning for your hate and ignorance.

Deb is playing her hand but I doubt she will like what the Judge hands at the end of this trial.

Trying to best Michael could prove to be Debra's ultimate downfall and I don't think she has realized that yet.

Michael may be sweating now but the moment he gets on the stand his arrogance will return ten fold, cause the spotlight will be back on him just what he likes.

Wow, Great Chapter:)

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