Date: Mar 08, 2018 9:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
I can already tell I'm going to enjoy this! Great start.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 08, 2018 8:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
Good timing! It's allowed Brian and his visitors to meet Debbie peacefully.
100K! It's a huge amount of money. What does he need that for? A Captain Astro statue?
Date: Mar 08, 2018 8:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great beginning!
15 years: it's a very long time, but it makes sense as Justin waited for Sophia to ask meeting her dad.
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2018 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
It's a good thing Michael didn't stick around. His attitude needs a fine adjustment. I'm so glad that Brian is happy about Sophia.
[Report This]Date: Feb 09, 2018 5:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Ok you’ve got me hooked and I NEVER read unfinished stories!
Great start! More please!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2017 2:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Excellent...looking forward to more...thank u for sharing.
Date: Dec 15, 2017 4:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Wasn't a warm homecoming, but I guess it will work out.
Shame Justin didn't get a peek at the boards for the pitch.
Off to a good start.
[Report This]Date: Dec 15, 2017 2:35 am Title: Chapter 1
I am so going to enjoy reading this. I'm glad it's going this way because I would wonder if Gus met Sophie and they fell in love but didn't know they were related.
Date: Dec 15, 2017 1:06 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow what a great start to a new story. Can't wait to see how it goes.