Date: Oct 27, 2022 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 7
I'm still in love with this story. You take your time and update when you can. If your brain fog is anything like My agoraphobia then I know your fighting hard. Good luck hope the writing goes well.
Date: Jan 01, 2021 1:32 am Title: Chapter 7
Read this again also. Live your stories please update.
Hope everything is okay with you.
Date: Jul 08, 2020 9:35 am Title: Chapter 7
With civic out there , I just wanted to make sure alright. It's been a couple months since you've updated and in these troubled times.... I'd rather ask before begging for an update. Hope you and yours are well. Please update soon.
Date: Mar 20, 2020 4:18 pm Title: Chapter 7
Michael is one sick pup. Hope you feel better
Date: Feb 26, 2020 3:01 am Title: Chapter 7
Has this story been abandoned? I just found it again and wanted to know what happens next.
Date: Jun 21, 2019 4:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Hope you're feeling better and we see more of this story soon. I really can't wait to see Michael and Lindsay who I call Idiot and Idiot with a vagina, I can't wait to see them get their comeupance.
But I do have one small problem with this story, the sentences are spaced out so far apart that only 3 sentences fit on the monitor space, and I have a 19 inch monitor. Is there anyway to not put so many spaces in, I spend more time hitting the down arrow than reading the story.
bec
Date: Mar 14, 2019 12:00 am Title: Chapter 7
Love it. Hope you feel better.
Date: Mar 13, 2019 11:53 pm Title: Update
OMG, poor you and you such agreat writer, I hope there is some help for your condition.
[Report This]Date: Feb 09, 2019 8:42 am Title: Chapter 7
Hi glad to see a new chapter!! Let's see when the time bomb is going to turn against Michael. He is so naughty and delusional.
Date: Feb 09, 2019 7:24 am Title: Chapter 2
Gus and Brian are great together; Justin is the right complement.
I imagine how Cynthia must have felt during the call with Lindsey!
Date: Feb 08, 2019 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 6
Do you know how very bizarre it is that you posted an update for to this story today? TODAY!!!!! I JUST read this, this morning, along with reunited. I even messaged someone about this particular story, as they had never read it before. Gotta wonder if some cosmic play is going on here.
Anyway, regarding your chapter: Michael has gone from delusional to bonafide crazy. I had to huff a laugh when I read: I don’t want this, Ben will not be getting this fucking divorce because it’s not part of my plan. His PLAN??? I hate to break it to you, Michael dearest, but there isn't a judge who wouldn't grant it. Especially with Tara's testimony. With her background, no judge would fail to take her words as law. Michael is a vicious, treacherous, perfidious, degenerate, and deserves whatever he has coming to him.
Melanie better call a meeting together with the family ASAP, so they in turn can contact anyone they feel would benefit being in the know of Michael's deranged and dangerous thougts. I also think Brian should hire bodyguards. I'm sure Michael will be gunning for Justin as well as Hunter. And if he gets too far into his delusions, I can see him kidnapping Brian.
Do I detect a new love interest for Mel? Lord knows she needs someone good in her life, especially after having to live with the Entitled Bitch, known as Lindsay.
Thank you so very much for giving us an update. I was going to shoot you an email earlier, so I think I will do that now. You might want to watch for it.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Feb 08, 2019 8:57 pm Title: Chapter 7
Hey love! we're still reading, so keep writing. xoxo
Date: Feb 08, 2019 7:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm wondering why Michael waited 6 months before making a move. I understand Lindsey's POV as she's jealous of Justin's talent and opportunity. As we can guess, Brian didn't let the gang know that his relationship with Justin was still alive and kicking, then Lindsey should have felt relieved for that.
Did Brian use his pain management during this period or did he spend more time with Gus and in Britin, shaping their home. What happened during these long months?
Date: Feb 08, 2019 5:39 pm Title: Update
I am enjoying this story greatly. Please do not push and risk your health because you and your health are what matter more than this great story.
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2019 5:10 pm Title: Chapter 7
Yeah Ben filing for divorce and Brian ignoring are definitely Stressors for the Whiny Little AHole and when he exploded everyone will be hurt in the blast.
Michael like Lindsay has always been the kind of p who wants a captive audience when something or someone displeases him, they have to make sure all eyes are on while they got the spotlight and they can't stand when anyone screws up their plans.
Ben and Hunter need to be somewhere safe while Brian and Justin need extra security cause Michael might just get violent instead of just trying to shine everyone to death.
Thanks for the Update:)
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2019 3:50 pm Title: Chapter 7
I'm loving this story. Can't wait to see what Mikey tries and how you stop him.
Date: Feb 08, 2019 1:58 pm Title: Chapter 7
So many people looking out for Hunter. Good thing too because yeah, the time bomb is ready to go off and not care how many go down when it does.
Date: Feb 08, 2019 11:29 am Title: Chapter 7
Wow, great chapter and fantastic writing. Michael is my least favorite character and love when he is in trouble. Hope no one gets hurt when the explosion happens.
Date: Aug 31, 2018 1:05 am Title: Chapter 6
Just read this story. It is SO good! I love a good anti-Michael, and anti-Lindsay fic, I just don't like them getting off in the end (hint-hint)... LOL... Michael is getting scary. Where is he living now, and how is he surviving? Is Lindsay helping him out? And, does Lindsay still have a job at the gallery? I can't help but chuckle at the conceited tones of their musings. AS IF!!! "THEIR House?" haha... I was so sorry to hear of your health issues. Take care of yourself, and as much as I would like to see frequent updates, you need to take care of yourself first. I'll wait patiently for your updates, and I won't abandon reading. It's too good a story for that.
Take Care, Cathy
[Report This]Date: Aug 31, 2018 12:16 am Title: Chapter 6
Michael needs medical attention
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2018 6:44 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wow! I can't wait for the next chapter to see what Mel advises. Michael's not making very good choices.
Date: Aug 30, 2018 5:19 pm Title: Chapter 6
Michael's world is closing in on him. Hope he's in his padded cell before he loses it all.
Yeah Hunter get the restraining order because if Michael can hurt him he will. Same thing goes for Justin. Michael sees Justin standing in the way of Michael's happiness. In his mind, no but he himself is entitled to Brian.
My heart breaks for Debbie.
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2018 4:53 pm Title: Chapter 6
Michael would hurt anyone who stands in his way of getting Brian, and Lindsay would do the exact same thing because in their minds Brian is their property which people can look at but never touch.
They loathe Brian for achieving his dreams because they never had the courage to do it.
If Brian isn't around to fix or accept blame for their failures then they can't function and without Brian's money they might actually have to grow up instead of shouting to an empty room that they are grown ups.
Even Justin is a sign of their failure because at seventeen he was stronger than them, Justin was more mature in high school than they are in the world.
Even though he may have lost his way for a little while in the end Justin will still achieve his dreams and they will still be trying to catch up.
Fantastic Update!!
Glad you are feeling better :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2018 4:53 pm Title: Chapter 6
Michael would hurt anyone who stands in his way of getting Brian, and Lindsay would do the exact same thing because in their minds Brian is their property which people can look at but never touch.
They loathe Brian for achieving his dreams because they never had the courage to do it.
If Brian isn't around to fix or accept blame for their failures then they can't function and without Brian's money they might actually have to grow up instead of shouting to an empty room that they are grown ups.
Even Justin is a sign of their failure because at seventeen he was stronger than them, Justin was more mature in high school than they are in the world.
Even though he may have lost his way for a little while in the end Justin will still achieve his dreams and they will still be trying to catch up.
Fantastic Update!!
Glad you are feeling better :)
Date: Aug 30, 2018 3:11 pm Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter. Hope you are feeling better. Oh, your writing is wonderful when it comes to Michael. He is such a nasty person. Can't wait to see where you go next with this terrific story.