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Reviewer: Azabeth Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2017 1:19 pm Title: Chapter 2

I’m loving this so far, al the characters inner thoughts and feelings are exactly how I imagined them, can’t wait to see what happens next with Michael and Lindsay’s agendas. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this lovely fic :)

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2017 6:09 am Title: Chapter 2

Linds and mikey both are deluded...i feel bad for mel and poor ben....chapter was lovly..thanks.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2017 12:24 am Title: Chapter 2

I see some restraining orders or good old fashioned ass whippings in the very near future for both Michael and Lindsay. How Ben and Mel could either remain oblivious or keep trying with those two is beyond me! They continue to remain willfully blind to the machinations of the Wonder Twits. It's clear that Michael and Lindsay are once again sharing one defective brain cell between the two of them! What's funny is that Lindsay tried the WASP intimidation tactics on Justin, whose mother is much more of a WASP than she is. 

If I was Justin, I STILL wouldn't let them know where the house is, especially with the way Lillith and her minion, Beelzebub treat the loft as a revolving door. If Britin doesn't have a iron wrought fence acessible only with a fingerprint ID, I think getting one should be first on the agenda. Once Michael and Lindsay know where it is, they will be a constant presence, turning up everyday and thinking (always a dangerous pasttime for the two of them) that bugging Brian and Justin is a surefire way to get what they want which is Justin gone, first and foremost. 

As for Cynthia, as soon as the word bitch came out of Lindsay's mouth, I would have hung up and had her number blocked then told Brian what I did and the exact reason why. Hopefully she not only let Brian know about the contretemps, but Ted as well so he can let Mel know what Lindsay is up to. 

Looking forward to the next installment!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2017 12:01 am Title: Chapter 2

Suck it up Michael and Lindsay. Neither of you will ever be Mrs. Brian Kinney.

Linds, you don't have Justin's talent to have even tried making a living as an artist, especially in NY.

Michael, Brian doesn't have to give you money to keep you a child.

Get a grip.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2017 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 2

"All Aboard The Delusional Train!"

"Michael Novotny and Lindsay Peterson Have Your Tickets Ready!"

Justin has a agent and wants to celebrate being home at Britin with everyone.

Princess FlatAssNoTalent and Captain WhinyFlatAss are going to be in for a surprise when they see Britin.

Ben and Mel need to talk because their spouses are kicking them to the curb so they might want to protect themselves and their kids.

I so want Justin to step up to Michael and Lindsay so they know he isn't going to take their crap anymore.

Time for Brian and Justin to be an united front :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2017 7:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh my.  Mikey and Lindsay are trying to intervine.  Can't see that working but am looking forward to how you manage to botch them.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2017 6:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

Welcome to KD! :)

Love a good Anti Michael and Lindsay story!!!

So Ben is just a roommate who pays for everything?

Michael is on the delusional train to nowhere and Lindsay will soon be joining him when she pushes Brian to dump Justin.

The reason why Lindsay never made it as an artist is because she has no talent, a college degree does not make you an Art Expert.

Never understood why anyone listened to Lindsay about New York, Justin was building a following and getting noticed so he can be a success in Pittsburgh and then New York will come to him.

What the Hell does Lindsay know about the New York Art Scene?

Neither does working in an art gallery, associating or meeting artist.

Getting nailed by one doesn't make her an art expert either!!!

Reading about up and coming artist does not make her an expert on what is trending!

Michael like Lindsay just enjoy being associated with Brian because he is a Star and they are just the groupies lol

 

 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2017 3:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Np matter what would happen between Brian and Justin there will never be a Brian and Michael. Can we say delusional.

If Lindsay's smart she'd keep her mouth shut. We know she isn't so let her put her foot in it. She'll wind up losing everything but that hanger on Michael.

Hope Justin doesn't keep his mouth closed when he really has something to say. Surprise them all.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2017 1:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Welcome to KD! Great start, looking forward to more! 

Reviewer: SandyGale Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2017 11:06 am Title: Chapter 1

Sounds very promising!! Love anti-Michael and Lindsay stories. I'm hooked.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2017 6:39 am Title: Chapter 1

Omg...that is awesome plot..loved the start..looking forward to more..thank u...superb work.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2017 5:35 am Title: Chapter 1

What about his husband Ben?

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2017 5:26 am Title: Chapter 1

Welcome to KD and WOW what a start! Everyone knows that I love a good anti-M fic and often feel pretty ambiguous about Lindsay, so this is right up my alley.

Well wishes on your writing journey and may all of the authors and readers of the site keep you inspired.

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2017 4:36 am Title: Chapter 1

Welcome to Kinnetikdreams!

Great start on your story.  I love reading anti-michael/anti Lindsey stories.  They always try to plan things but end up on the outside looking in.

Write On!!!

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2017 4:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Welcome to Kinnetik Dreams. Great first chapter. TAG

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