[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2020 6:09 pm Title: First Sighting
Wow, now that was hot! So happy to have you back to your writing, and what a lovely powerful return this is :-)
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2020 4:24 pm Title: Capture the ...Flag?
Well we all know how that was going to turn out.
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2020 4:04 pm Title: Capture the ...Flag?
Whoa, that was hot and funny!!! Daphne is quite a negotiator! She should work for the ad world :)
Thank you for the update! I hope you are doing better now.
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2020 4:01 pm Title: Cat and Mouse
Justin is pissed at Ethan. Brian told Michael off. Things are going just the way I like it.
Date: Apr 23, 2018 7:43 am Title: Cat and Mouse
Now that’s what I call a strip TEASE! Lol. TAG
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2018 10:19 pm Title: Cat and Mouse
LOL These guys are going to burst into flames soon..I love your writing, you really nailed Mikey in this one. I was patient for updates knowing you were working on Britin. I have no idea how you keep your thoughts straight..Copious notes???
Author's Response:
I do have pages and pages of notes, along with outlines and timelines if necessary. In fact, for Britin, as I start to come to the end of a month, I start an outlie for the next month and work out what exactly I want andneed to cover on a day to day basis. I even have myself signed up for a pregnancy tracker on Baby Center, so I get constant updates on the pregnancy's development and things he'd be facing at that particular time. It's help immensely on keeping me on point. There are times where I'll change some things up if something unexpected happened in the story, but I try to stick to my outline as much as possible. It makes keeping track of stuff much easier. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 21, 2018 7:35 am Title: Cat and Mouse
Great teasing chapter except the Ethan's part, which is getting really creepy.
Brian knows how to put the heat up, but Justin isn't that innocent and he could beat Brian to his own game. That's exciting! Maybe Brian did go commando, this would mean they have the same count of clothes...
I think the end of the chapter is missing as the last sentence isn't complete.
Author's Response:
Ethan is a creepuy little asshole in this one. And you are right, there was several paragraphs missing from the chapter. I have since updated it. Thanks for pointing that out to me; and as always, thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 20, 2018 7:09 pm Title: Cat and Mouse
Great update. Could actually feel the tension between Justin & Ethan and Brian & Mikey. And, of course, the heat between Brian & Justin. Great job.
Author's Response:
They are so much fun to write in this and I do love to tease them so... BTW, I did realize later the next day (due to a review) that part of the chapter was missing. It as since been fixed. :) Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2018 7:40 am Title: The Hunter Becomes the Prey
I do want to read more but i know you are working full time on Britin so I can wait...this is a cute story. The boys are so young
Author's Response:
Well, now that I'm not so focused on Britin, I will hopefully have more time to work on this and post it moe often. My goal is to do it bi-weekly, but hopefully it will be more than that. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 20, 2018 7:47 am Title: The Hunter Becomes the Prey
Nice make out session! TAG
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
Date: Mar 12, 2018 5:51 pm Title: The Hunter Becomes the Prey
That kiss was so hot! They sure know how to turn the heat to the max!
Author's Response:
Thiose poor boys, they kept getting interrupted. So, when they finally had a chance, they made the most of it! :) Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2018 2:54 am Title: The Hunter Becomes the Prey
Love Brian's nicknames for Justin's friends. My question is who ends up topping?
Author's Response:
Well I suppose we'll have to see who gets the upper hand. :) Thanks for reading!
Date: Mar 12, 2018 1:37 am Title: The Hunter Becomes the Prey
Great update. It's fun that they are the same age. Good storyline.
Author's Response:
I do love college AUs, where we can have them on a more equal ground age wise. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Mar 01, 2018 9:46 am Title: Family Connections
So, DID Brian see the milkshake seduction? Is that in the next chapter? Can’t wait. TAG
Author's Response:
Well, Brian certainly saw something... ;) Thanks for reading and I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 01, 2018 12:21 am Title: Family Connections
I am loving this sorry if I haven't told you before. You write a great Michael (who I hate) Ethan Ugh Please get the boys together soon. Can't stand the suspense, either can they The ARE going to explode..Poor Ted
Author's Response:
The boys relationship will start to pick up soon. It definitely heats up in the next chapter for sure! Thanks!
Date: Feb 26, 2018 5:08 pm Title: Family Connections
Justin is so oblivious to the effects his way of eating / drinking his sweets might have on people around him.
So happy Cynthia is there and that she took care of Craig.
Author's Response:
Hah! That he is; all those poor people...
And I love Cynthia; she had to be there.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Feb 26, 2018 3:33 pm Title: Family Connections
I'm deeply impressed with how you bring Cynthia into this story. I take it this is Justin's first meeting with Ted. Brian is not going to like his lusting over Justin.
Author's Response:
No, Brian won't like it at all. And I love Cynthia and really wanted to make her related to Justin in some way. I actually have a story idea where Cynthia is Justin's older sister through an affair Craig has early in his marriage to Jen. I hope I can get to that once I finish up this one. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Feb 03, 2018 3:57 pm Title: With Friends Like These
Uh oh, Brian’s already hooked and he hasn’t even had Justin yet. Lol. TAG
Author's Response:
He just can't resist Justin's sass. Or ass for that matter. :)
Date: Jan 30, 2018 4:42 am Title: With Friends Like These
The teasing from Ted and Emmett is delightful!
Author's Response:
Poor Brian. So in over his head. And of course Em and Ted can't help but give him shit about it because he most certainly did the same to them when they were in the first flush of their relationships. Revenge is sweet.
And it's actually kind of funny, as I have to remember what
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2018 2:16 pm Title: With Friends Like These
Nice to see that Mikey is just as irritating as usual. Hope Brian gets the balls to tell Mikey off for good.
Author's Response:
Ah, Mikey. I so love to hate on him. Eventually Brian will tell him to fuck off as they are nt as close in this universe as they were on the show. They're still 'best friends' but Brian is a lot less likely to put up with his shit in this one.
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2018 2:03 pm Title: The Spider and the Fly
To come so close. Music and migraine seem to go together.
Author's Response:
Yeah, stupid Ethan, always interfering in places he's not wanted.
Date: Jan 26, 2018 9:04 am Title: The Spider and the Fly
Ethanus Interuptus . . . Lol. TAG
Author's Response:
He just has to show up and ruin everything. :) Thanks for reading!
Date: Jan 26, 2018 8:28 am Title: Walk Into My Parlor
Darn - they were so close to that kiss! Lol. TAG
Author's Response:
Just a few seconds more...freaking Ethan.
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2018 8:04 am Title: Worth a Shot (or Two)
No wonder Brian is intrigued by THIS Justin. LOL! TAG
Author's Response:
Justin is definitely working his A game here; he's heard the rumors that Brian is unattainable. Justin just sees that as a challenge.