[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2017 1:47 pm Title: The Talk and Dinner
Wow, just Wow! Why does Norman stay with Lindsay, unless it's for the kids. Michael needs his head checked. It's not in the right place. Love how everyone told him off. Great chapter.
Date: Nov 01, 2017 9:05 am Title: The Talk and Dinner
Excellent! I love when you mess with Michael's head, even if it seems so easy to do, you do it spectacularly.
Date: Oct 31, 2017 4:01 pm Title: And He Greets
Yay!! Public slapdown for Lindth!!
I so agree with Norm and Brian. To torment a child with a name like that.
And Lindth's way of picking on the poor girl is despicable. Norm worded it all very well. Just because the stupid heffer was picked on by her mother doesn't give her permission to do the same to poor Effy.
Good on Molly to go after Effy and comfort her. I can see them becoming great friends and sisters in a sway.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
XOXO
MeMa
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2017 5:52 pm Title: And He Greets
Lindsay just had to show her crassness first by trying to embarrass Gus, then being condescending to Hunter, but the piece De resistance was her trying to Fat Sham Effy.
I doubt Lindsay is as thin as Olive Oil and no amount of salads will help that, so she should shut her flat Ass up and let Effy grow into her body and the woman she wants to be.
Besides Lindsay trying to imitate Nancy just ensures that she is going to get her Ass kicked a lot quicker.
Norm must have lost a bet when he married Lindsay??
I sincerely hope Effy does change her name Edna Fanny is terrible and what the Hell was Lindsay smoking when she came up with that?
Michael is Crazy if he thinks anyone on Liberty Avenue would help him?
Moonshine and Hero are already great friends which paves a way for Brian and Justin to become friendlier :)
Date: Oct 30, 2017 4:53 pm Title: And He Greets
Great chapter!
I thought you would have made Brian lose to Justin at the poker game, just to see how he would have reacted.
I love these quotes that involve Lindsay:
“Don’t say it like you have a dick in your mouth. Say it like you mean it...you know enunciate, Lindsay.”
“I was not giving her a complex. It was constructive criticism.” As if she was constructive, ever!
“If you’re going to argue semantics, you are being a bitch!” I snap back.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 4:47 pm Title: And He Greets
Love when Lindsay gets put in her place!
I love this story!
Date: Oct 30, 2017 3:32 pm Title: And He Greets
Oh thank goodness "Lindth" (hehe) is being brought to task on her behaviour. Norman is not the limp dicked wimp she seems to think he is. There is definitely mmore to him than meets the eye. They're discussion should proved to be very interesting if not very amusing.
So Hero and Mooshine have hit it off. Effy and Molly have as well. Brian and Justin too. I think that Brian is going to be extremely protective of Justin.
Michael and Lindsey, are of course the idiots of the story. Again, all their intereactions should prove to be interesting. Will they work individually or team up?It's always fun to watch them crash and burn. ;)
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2017 1:04 pm Title: And He Greets
Love how Moonshine and Hero get along. What is Michael up to thinking Liberty Ave will back him? Love, love, love how Norman and Brian put Lindsay in her place. Why did Norman marry her? Is she his beard?
Date: Oct 30, 2017 5:39 am Title: And He Greets
That was great. They really gave it to Lindsay.
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2017 9:14 pm Title: They Meet
"Gus, for fuck sake calm down. He's a puppy, not your first vibrator!"
BEST live ever.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2017 8:51 pm Title: They Meet
OMG. Pomsky's are the cutest dogs ever. Love this.
~Lorie
Date: Oct 29, 2017 8:02 pm Title: They Meet
Oh that was sweet.
Date: Oct 29, 2017 7:05 pm Title: They Meet
Cocky meeting Baby Bombshell and both have pooches?
Epic lovestory in the making.
XOXO
Mema
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2017 4:07 pm Title: They Meet
Michael and friends should hang together all the time that way everyone on The Avenue can get a break lol
Brian has a puppy?!
That is so Adorable!!!
Why is Drew texting Emmett?
Wonder what else Michael is lying about???
At Last Brian and Justin Have Met!!!
Now it's really going to get interesting <giggles>
Date: Oct 29, 2017 2:32 pm Title: They Meet
Yeah, Husky buddies!
What did Drew send to Emmett? Details? As Emmett would say, dish!
Date: Oct 29, 2017 2:18 pm Title: They Meet
Great update.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2017 1:42 pm Title: They Meet
This gets better and better. I'm enjoying how Mikey is not getting away with things and love how Kiki is. Vic is going to be a big help. Now Brian has a pup!
Date: Oct 29, 2017 1:26 pm Title: Plotting, Tasting and Testing
Great chapter! Molly against Lindsey is interesting: I hope there will be more of that.
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2017 5:04 am Title: Plotting, Tasting and Testing
Norm is the friend that Michael thinks he is. This is such a fun read and so different.
Date: Oct 28, 2017 1:25 am Title: Plotting, Tasting and Testing
Go Molly girl.
So juicy!
Norm's a dream. Wh iis he still with her? Effy could live with him. Just what is he up to by calling Brian?
Well we know Ben doesn't seem interested in Justin but we'll see.
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2017 11:08 pm Title: Plotting, Tasting and Testing
Looks like Lindsay isn't as classy as she thinks and Norm isn't as stupid as she believes.
Ben got to meet Justin before Brian and I am surprised Brian is letting him sleep over lol
Gus is going to strangle Lindsay if she embarrases him at the soft opening.
Who likes Michael enough to vouch for him?
Who Likes Michael???????
Date: Oct 27, 2017 10:15 pm Title: Plotting, Tasting and Testing
Everyone is so sweet except Lindsay. It's weird to see her married to a man, but Norm sounds like a great guy.
Date: Oct 27, 2017 3:58 am Title: Her Aspirational Life...and Here's Effy and Amy
Hilarious! Lindsey doing her little madam is so funny, as everybody can read her.
The girls are so lucky to have Cocky and Bucky as uncles.
First meeting and what a promising one!
Date: Oct 26, 2017 8:25 pm Title: Homecoming...Part 2
What a moron!
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2017 5:26 pm Title: Her Aspirational Life...and Here's Effy and Amy
Yes Brian saw Justin!!
What a Sour-Faced Cow (Sorry Cows!) Lindsay is so mean to her daughter and an insensitive moron to make fun of her child.
I can't stand people who do the whole 'Polite Insult' just because you speak softly and smile doesn't mean you weren't being cruel.
Lindsay is so Michael's twin she is like him when he insults people (especially his friends) and says I was only joking.
It's only a joke when everyone gets it, it's being an Ass when only you think it's funny.
Effy and Amy are so charming and I like Norm who I think likes to exaggerate his lisp just to annoy Lindsay.
I hope Leda and Mel show up together they can help knock Lindsay on her flat Ass lol