Date: Dec 30, 2022 5:58 am Title: Chapter 8
This was a great ending to the story!! I am glad that Justin got his sight back and am happy that Gus and JR got their lives back as well, living with Brian and Justin.
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2021 8:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm in the process of reading this. You have a heck of an imagination. Great writing.funny as heck.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Your comments are music to my ears.
Date: Aug 13, 2019 4:29 pm Title: Chapter 8
good one
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: Dec 16, 2017 11:57 am Title: Chapter 8
This story is so far out there but not everything has to be serious all the time. I enjoyed it a lot.
Author's Response:
I'm glad. It's hard to write something that hasn't been done, so I hope I managed it. I appreciate all the comments.
Date: Dec 16, 2017 11:49 am Title: Chapter 7
This is absolutely hilarious.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I tried my best.
Date: Dec 16, 2017 11:37 am Title: Chapter 6
So grandpa is going to live with them. That's great.
Author's Response:
I always liked Carl so I couldn't just leave him there with Deb.
Date: Dec 16, 2017 11:35 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow, just wow. I never expected that.
Author's Response:
Well I have to spice it up a bit.
Date: Dec 16, 2017 11:28 am Title: Chapter 4
I'm so glad the kids are happy.
Author's Response:
I wouldn't have it any other way.
Date: Dec 16, 2017 11:26 am Title: Chapter 3
Good question by Brian. What does Michael want? And who is Marty?
Author's Response:
He wants Brian. As for Marty you'll soon find out.
Date: Dec 16, 2017 11:21 am Title: Chapter 2
That was actually nice of Melanie. Is one of them really pregnant?
Author's Response:
Yes, I really wanted to change the perception of Mel and I decided to go with mpreg.
Date: Dec 16, 2017 10:45 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm really happy that there is a second part to the story. I can't wait to see what you have planned for everybody.
Author's Response:
Hope you enjoy it!
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:45 am Title: Chapter 8
Loved this...
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. I hope the ending was all you hoped for.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:42 am Title: Chapter 7
The exact fate Michael deserves... and yay for Papa Em
Author's Response:
I decided not to let Michael get off and Em makes a good dad.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:34 am Title: Chapter 6
I'd say poor Debbie, but she did it to herself
Author's Response:
Yep, I have to agree.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:33 am Title: Chapter 5
The MM twist was fantastic and only Brian is preggers? I hoped for both lol
Author's Response:
Well the story isn't over yet.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:27 am Title: Chapter 4
So glad to see this kids happy
Author's Response:
Me too. Brian, Justin and Emmett along with Ted treat them as equals.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:25 am Title: Chapter 3
Who is MM if not Marilyn?
Author's Response:
It's a mystery! One you'll find out in a later chapter.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:22 am Title: Chapter 2
Glad for Mel and seems appropriate for Lindsay
Author's Response:
Well I wanted something different.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Love hearing how the family is doing
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: Oct 30, 2017 7:35 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh, the end is spooky!
Author's Response:
Well it is Halloween.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 7:29 pm Title: Chapter 7
Excellent! Jack as the mayo in Joan/Vic sandwich: the threesome from Hell! Yeehaw!
I bet Emmett will be delighted to be a father and Deb will be so disappointed.
Author's Response:
Deb will never accept that she's not a grandmother. Emmett is happy as a clam. I just couldn't resist Jack with Vic plus I couldn't leave out Joan. Technically that was all Michael's doing.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 7:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
So Carl doesn't have the money from his house anymore and Deb's house is once again refinanced? I smell Michael on this new development.
Author's Response:
You smelled right. Michael is the bad egg.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 7:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
Excellent: Brian is pregnant and Justin is sick.
Will they leave the firehouse? I thought it was big enough for a big family, which they are getting.
Poor Ben: he really isn't good at picking a good partner. At least, he isn't sick anymore.
Author's Response:
I think the firehouse was tainted by Deb and Michael's interference so moving is a viable option. About Ben if it weren't for bad luck he'd have no luck at all on picking partners.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 4:04 am Title: Chapter 8
LMAO!!! I can't say that I blame Dummy for clawing out his own eyes with the images of the last scene. I'm still laughing hard at that!
So glad that they have all moved on beyond Manic Michael and Loony Lindsay. Hopefully they will have a life full of love and laughter, but most of all Novotny free!
Great Job Phyllis!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I thought, what could be the worse thing for Michael and ran with it. Living in a home with it's own playground and such an assortment of playmates for Becca and Gus will insure lots of laughter. Now that there are five kids to love it's a sure thing.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 3:54 am Title: Chapter 7
LMAO!!!!!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Well, I did try. Things just kept cropping up.