Date: Oct 30, 2017 3:21 am Title: Chapter 6
Glad Carl decided not to waste any more of his life arguing a losing battle with Debbie. Her one track mind has finally cost her everything.
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
When Deb gets focused on something, she's like a dog with a bone. This time I didn't want Carl to suffer for it.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 3:13 am Title: Chapter 5
Love that Marty knows what Marilyn knows but not the other way around. Creates a very interesting dynamic between the two personalities.
So Brian is pregnant but Justin is suffering the morning sickness? SWEET! I can't begin to tell you how many times I wished someone else had the damn ANYTIME sickness when I had my two....LOL
So Ben married a married man with 6.5 kids....SMH I honestly don't know if he went from bad to worse where Michael is concerned. Now THAT says an awful lot!
Onto the next chapter!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I wanted something different and a reason why Mysterious Marilyn denied sending the cards. Unfortunatly once I get thinking on a plot line anything can happen.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 1:32 am Title: Chapter 4
Loving that Jenny and Gus are trying new things and coming into their own as young adults!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Thank you! I wanted to show how they were developing.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 1:22 am Title: Chapter 3
Michael is a head case! It's probably better that Brian doesn't try to figure out what the FOOL is up to...SMH As for this Marty twist, it's a really good one! Off to the next chapter!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I try to do things I haven't seen done. It's hard because there are so many good stories out there.
Date: Oct 29, 2017 8:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
Becca is a lot nicer than JR. Does she remember her father?
Author's Response:
Unfortunately I think she does and I think it has colored her interaction with Deb.
Date: Oct 29, 2017 7:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
MM as in Mysterious Marty? Not too far from Mysterious Marilyn, once the wig and make-up are gone.
Author's Response:
You will have your answer once you read Ben and Hunter's part.
Date: Oct 29, 2017 7:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
Happy to read that Mel opened her eyes and told Brian she was sorry: never too late!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I could have left her being evil, but after I found the pic I decided to do a nice twist.
Date: Oct 29, 2017 6:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yeah, MM is back!
Author's Response:
Wouldn't be the same without MM.
Date: Oct 29, 2017 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 8
Omg...ew ew ew he scratched out his own eyes? Jesus! What were Justin & Brian's babies & their names? Glad everyone was happy in the end but are they realing living in an old church? Hahaha
Author's Response:
Considering what he was seeing can you blame him? As for the babies names, I hadn't given it much thought. Do you have any suggestions? Yes, it is a church, I think it was Presbyterian.
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2017 3:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love the way you wrapped eveything up.
Great story!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, that's always nice to hear.
Author's Response:
Thank you, that's always nice to hear.
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2017 5:50 am Title: Chapter 7
Omg ...that was helarious...amazing.
Author's Response:
Thanks! That's what I was going for.
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2017 5:44 am Title: Chapter 6
Wow..poor carl...new home away from deb..good for him.
Author's Response:
You never know do ya.
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2017 9:30 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ya for Emmett being Becca's father!!
And the last scene you painted, WOW just WOW!! And LOL!!! Jack/Vic/Joan in a three way...can I say eeewwwww!!! Vic has better taste.
Author's Response:
I know. I said to myself what is the worst thing Michael could see and voila.
Date: Oct 28, 2017 6:11 pm Title: Chapter 7
Emmett is Jenny's dad? Holy shit! Didn't see that coming! And Mysterious Marilyn killed Michael? Is that right? Or was that just a nightmare? lol
Author's Response:
Yep. I thought of using Ted, but Emmett kept jumping up and down saying me, me. Sorry to dissappoint you but no one dies.
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2017 4:52 pm Title: Chapter 6
I can understand why Becca didn't want to see Deb. She doesn't know her very well and on a good day Deb is overpowering.
Carl can take only soo much. Glad Brian is helping Carl. He's the dad everyone wanted.
Did Deb re-mortgage her house for her man-child? Or did she hire a private eye to find Brian?
Author's Response:
Yes, that's where Michael got the money for the lawyer.
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2017 7:42 am Title: Chapter 5
Nope..i was clueless...there...brian prego...cool.
Author's Response:
Tricked you, did I? Bet you thought Justin was. And the story isn't over yet!
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2017 7:35 am Title: Chapter 4
Becca...much better then JR.
Author's Response:
I'm sure anything was better than Junior. Especially with who her father is.
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2017 7:33 am Title: Chapter 3
We would also like to know that ...lols.
Author's Response:
There is so much to learn and each chapter got carried away.
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2017 7:24 am Title: Chapter 2
Awesome chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you! : )
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2017 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
So Ben can pick them (not) but I can see that the couple may be able to get Justin well.
Is Justin having the morning sickness for Brian? I feel for him.(have all day sickness for both of my 2 children)
Sandy
Author's Response:
I feel your pain! Yep, Brian's the one with child and Justin's suffering from it.
Date: Oct 26, 2017 7:22 pm Title: Chapter 5
Would you indicate it’s mpreg so folks don’t start reading if it’s not their thing?
Author's Response:
I though I had. Let me check.
Date: Oct 23, 2017 5:35 pm Title: Chapter 2
WOW!! Such developments! I'm really interested to see if, now that Lindsay is out of the picture, Mel will finally become part of the 'new' family.
As for the card: Yep, if I was Brian, I would be queening out right about NOW! LOL
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Mel's a new her and I don't think she'll return, though she might if Ted needs her. Brian is like Gus, he doesn't believe men can get pregnant.
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2017 1:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Haha what a dream !! Good start I can't wait to see their new adventures !!
Author's Response:
Yep. It gets weirder as you go alone.
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2017 5:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Ohhh...great start...lols...looking forward to see what had u stored for Britin and family..thank u .
Author's Response:
Thank you. I hope you enjoy it.
Date: Oct 23, 2017 3:25 am Title: Chapter 1
LOL! Uh-oh.... as if there hasn't been enough drama in their lives to date, now this! I do see a war of the hormones brewing. LOL, I can't wait!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
You haven't seen the drama yet. I'm hoping the next chapter will be a surprise for everyone.