[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2019 12:59 pm Title: CHAPTER 15: THE ORIGINAL DEFINITION OF C.U.N.T. MEETS THE NEW ONE: Take ONE
Great writing!Looking fo ad to the smack down!
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2019 3:08 am Title: CHAPTER 15: THE ORIGINAL DEFINITION OF C.U.N.T. MEETS THE NEW ONE: Take ONE
Absolutely wonderful. I caught up and read all the chapters. Now I am ready for more. LOL Love the story is going. And, you know I love when Mikey and Linds are idiots and you write that so well. Great job.
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2019 8:41 pm Title: CHAPTER 1: THE AFTERMATH
Ok, I confess, I broke my own rule of not starting a new story unless it was complete, but I love your stories so much and am caught up on all stories that I decided to start reading this one. It is wonderful. As usual, your writing blows me away. I love to hate Michael and Lindsay and you make that so easy with your writing about them. So, once again, I am hooked. I know you will complete all stories, but as a senior citizen, I hope I am around to read the endings. LOL Fantastic writing, my dear, FANTASTIC!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 12, 2019 7:37 pm Title: CHAPTER 15: THE ORIGINAL DEFINITION OF C.U.N.T. MEETS THE NEW ONE: Take ONE
Well, if in just a few days, Michael has already spent over $5k, and then with the $750 he just doled out, how long is $4k gonna last him? Is every competition going to cost money? Buh-bye money! What will Lindsay do after Michael's money is gone?At least Michael is entertaining the idea of getting a job.
It's going to be kind of hard for them to bring Rita Montgomery in, as she's DEAD!!! And I don't think a rotting corpse will do them any good.
What in hell does Craig Taylor want? If it's a loan, or any financial help at all, he can kiss that thought away while he's filing Chapter 7. Maybe if he had paid Justin's tuition at the time he asked, Justin might have even allowed him to ask, but he certainly isn't now. Way too much crap between them for Justin to give him the time of day.
Good to see an update of this story,
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Aug 12, 2019 1:11 am Title: CHAPTER 15: THE ORIGINAL DEFINITION OF C.U.N.T. MEETS THE NEW ONE: Take ONE
Michael only has five thousand left? lol
He will be broke in a few days and then what they do?
Why does Craig suddenly want to talk to Justin?
Justin owns The Bloom Gallery?
Lindsay does realize those papers she signed are legally binding and there is no cooling off period for her to change her mind later.
Though I think she will be in the most pain because she will have to draw on Michael who will be semi-naked for hours rofl
Yeah that time limit is going to chafe Lindsay's ass especially with Michael whining and complaining for the cameras to record forever
Lindsay's mask of serenity will slip at some point and then her true vulture face will be seen by everyone.
If Michael is a hyena then Lindsay is a crocodile with tears to match when she can't get her way.
Yes do bring in Rita Montgomery it is time Hunter put her in her place too cause she needs to be expunged from Hunter's life just like Michael.
Lindsay may have her foot in the door but she won't be staying long Justin has already surpassed her mediocre expectations and Brian has already found his Happiness so why would he settle for tuna when he has filet mignon waiting at home?
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2019 11:39 pm Title: CHAPTER 15: THE ORIGINAL DEFINITION OF C.U.N.T. MEETS THE NEW ONE: Take ONE
Wouldn't it be wonderful if Mysterious Marilyn could tell Michael and Lindsay just how badly their plan is going to work.
Author's Response:
HA! Now there's an idea, Phyllis! I just may have to use that. Thanks, Darling!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Aug 11, 2019 10:27 pm Title: CHAPTER 15: THE ORIGINAL DEFINITION OF C.U.N.T. MEETS THE NEW ONE: Take ONE
thanks for update
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2019 7:43 pm Title: CHAPTER 15: THE ORIGINAL DEFINITION OF C.U.N.T. MEETS THE NEW ONE: Take ONE
Yes, Do Deck him, Deck him, Deck him Lindsay! Its so great read Lindsay Mad. Foaming & fuming. *inner Emmett clapping .
Proud of Hunter & Daphne. Seriously Who needs enemy, if one have friends like Micheal & Lindsay *cunt-dick in cohoots.
Lovely update. Enjoyed it. Hugs â¤
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2019 3:44 pm Title: CHAPTER 15: THE ORIGINAL DEFINITION OF C.U.N.T. MEETS THE NEW ONE: Take ONE
Lindsay's dream is slowly turning into a nightmare and when Michael will realize how much she used him, he won't let her go easily.
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2019 3:10 pm Title: CHAPTER 14: STRATEGY AND PLANNING
Hunter will have a huge responsibility, but I believe he will be able to find out who should be let in or out.
Lindsay is really living her memory a little too much: she should remember that Brian left her to fuck the first guy he found during this summer madness.
Date: Jun 15, 2019 4:14 pm Title: CHAPTER 14: STRATEGY AND PLANNING
Seriously, Nichelle, you need to STOP putting some of these images in our heads!!! Condom Dress? Latex Babies? Snookie giving Justin Head? Enough said!!!
Keep dreaming Lindsay... Keep dreaming. And I hate to bust your bubble Lindsay, but Make Love is a term Brian would never use. You are, at best, one of his pity fucks if he ever had one.
Michael... Wake up! She's manipulating and using you. EVEN IF she won the competition, she would NOT give you a penny of her earnings. She will drop you faster than a hot potato once she has no use for you anymore. e.g. - place to live, money to spend.
Glad to know Ted and Emmett have moved, too. If Lindsay thinks Emmett will give her the time of time... After all, I am Gus’ mother and should know where he lives, right? Uh, wrong. You were Gus' incubator, but you are NOT his mother!
Who in their right mind would allow Lindsay to ink their body? Not to say I wouldn't trust her to not get the needle too far in, also, it is ridiculously expensive to have one removed. She will scar them and give them something hideous to look at. You need top notch art skills to be a talented tattooist. I doubt she will be able to hire anybody, so look out Michael. Your hideous body will become something NOBODY will want to look at!
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jun 15, 2019 3:05 pm Title: CHAPTER 13: GROWING UP and BRANCHING OUT
Although he’s losing Lindsay, I have the feeling that it would have hurt him worse to lose Melanie. Yes, Gus, or any child, DOES not need the influence of a mother like Lindsay. I hardly doubt he will miss her.
So happy to see that Hunter and Daphne will be on board. And, I think Daphne would be best suited to have as the personal assistant. Nobody will get to Justin that she doesn't want passed through. Besides, between her verbal SAT scores, and her upper WASP training, she will be able to talk circles around Lindsay. Lindsay won't know what hit her.
Michael can try and put Hunter down all he wants... but we see just who is the smarter of the two and who has accomplished what. Could you imagine Michael trying to sit through one class that Hunter did? He wouldn't be able to make head or tails of what was being said!
Glad to know Brian had Lindsay's number even back in college. She's just a Mrs B Kinney wannabe. Both her and Michael. It would be wise for them to wake up and smell the roses.
Seventh orgasm, Brian. And Viagra wasn't even involved!
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jun 15, 2019 1:22 pm Title: CHAPTER 12: A DANCE OF VICTORY… and THE AGONY OF DEFEAT or SHOULD THAT BE OF A FOOT?
Justin had a 3.5 million dollar inheritance? WOW!!! If Lindsay and Michael were aware of THAT!?!....
And if the two dumbwits were smart, they would heed the 'WARNING' as a restraining order, because I don't think they will like the consequences it if they visit a business they are banned from.
And in the meantime, I could use the time to pitch a new comic idea to Connor and Brett. Sure, go ahead Michael... they'll laugh you right out of the building! He thinks he sold his soul to the devil... well, Michael... and then some!
Other than the loft, we have no idea where the two of them live. Hopefully this holds true for Debbie and Carl once they get out there. Michael won't be able to run to mommy when Lindsay plows through his money, and he's left penniless.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jun 15, 2019 7:18 am Title: CHAPTER 11: DON’T LOOK DOWN, LOOK RIGHT HERE
The beginning of Lindsay's humiliation and downfall. She just couldn't keep her mouth shut! And Miranda offered her an out. Her dream of being someone known in the Art World is about to become true... just not the way she was hoping.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jun 15, 2019 6:40 am Title: PART 2: (CHAPTER 10): THE REAL PETER PAN and HIS WASP WANNABE WENDY
I should be able to downgrade after you leave. I don't think she plans to go anywhere until your money runs out, Michael. And you idiot, you gave her more...
I deserve the credit for Justin becoming the artist he is!” “I WILL NOT LET IT GO! HE OWES ME HIS CAREER!”
Yeah right, Lindsay... dream on!!!
HUUG ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2019 4:03 pm Title: CHAPTER 14: STRATEGY AND PLANNING
😂 Omg, I lose it from "girl have some class. Lose that condom dress, it shouts desperate whore..." lol. I respect Daphne & Justin's wits, so of Brian. He rightly found Justin's own Cyn & Ted in Daph & Hunter. You are amazing. Loving the plot.
Micheal, the mindless, gonaa Penni-LESS soon, being with Lind-Say.
Date: Jun 07, 2019 1:21 pm Title: CHAPTER 14: STRATEGY AND PLANNING
So the hyena is on the prowl now trying to find all the players evil wench!
Date: Jun 07, 2019 8:25 am Title: CHAPTER 14: STRATEGY AND PLANNING
I love how you make Lindsay and Michael's brain work. I can not wait to see Daphne and Hunter at work and watch them bite!
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2019 1:50 am Title: CHAPTER 14: STRATEGY AND PLANNING
You've managed to find Justin the perfect employees and they'll be able to help keep the nasties away. Lindsay and Michael are two of a kind.
[Report This]Date: Jun 06, 2019 7:11 pm Title: CHAPTER 14: STRATEGY AND PLANNING
Lindsay can fantasize that what she did with Brian all the centuries ago was Making Love but Brian will say it was Any Hole Will Do and was as memorable as removing lint from one of his suits.
Michael and Lindsay think they are entitled to support for just showing up but Melanie and Ben think they are entitled to crumbs and then again maybe not even that.
Michael is so Stupid he will be broke in days Lindsay needs high quality paints now, later will be high quality brushes, then high quality outfits, plus she will have to get her wig done for the cameras, I will be surprised if he has two pennies to rub together when Lindsay go finishes with him.
Ted and Emmett have found new homes to share with their partners and keeping their whereabouts secret...Smart Move!
Whatever the competition is later I do hope Lindsay is up to the challenge?
Hiring Daphne and Hunter will help to protect Brian and Justin cause they don't take Crap from anyone and Hunter will enjoy the Wasp Training he will get from Daphne it will sharpen his Street Training so he is just as Formidable as everyone else on Brian and Justin's side.
Brian getting restraining orders for the business, hangouts and homes will drive Michael and Lindsay crazy and make them stupid, of course Michael will be the first to be arrested because he is very dense wonder if he will be arrested during or after the show? lol
Thanks For the Update 😃
Date: Jun 06, 2019 7:09 pm Title: CHAPTER 14: STRATEGY AND PLANNING
pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase more!!!!! pleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2019 11:26 am Title: CHAPTER 13: GROWING UP and BRANCHING OUT
With Daphne and Hunter on board, the fun might be amazing to read.
Poor Brian, barging in Mel's office and finding a quite disturbing view for his gay eyes!
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2019 10:46 am Title: CHAPTER 12: A DANCE OF VICTORY… and THE AGONY OF DEFEAT or SHOULD THAT BE OF A FOOT?
Brian and Justin owning the dance floor is always a delightful entertainment.
It's a good move from Carl to try getting Debbie out of her comfort zone. They should build a new life together elsewhere; no need to go very far though. Just somewhere unknown from the leeches.
Date: May 01, 2019 9:30 am Title: CHAPTER 13: GROWING UP and BRANCHING OUT
I can not wait to see Hunter and Daphne join the kinnetic team!
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2019 7:30 am Title: CHAPTER 13: GROWING UP and BRANCHING OUT
Yesss, Lindsay & Micheal are into for very hard Surprises. Idiots will never see what hit them & will be barfing with every jeolous bone.
I have always loves Kinney in "Protective Sunshine Mode". â¤