[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2018 4:14 am Title: Chapter 32
Lindsay playing fast and loose with the truth is shocking <fake gasps>
Now we have Sam and Kip joining the merry band of idiots on their separate quest to break up Brian and Justin?
This is like the Dumb leading the Idiotic now.
So will Deb help or continue to follow Michael down the rabbit hole to Hell with Lindsay???
The suspense is going to have me biting off my nails lol ;)
Date: Jan 26, 2018 3:20 am Title: Chapter 32
Intirgue and mischief. I hope they don't believe Lindsay and find Michael before he does even more harm.
Date: Jan 26, 2018 1:51 am Title: Chapter 32
Ooooohhh! Why do I get the feeling that the lying, sneaky bitch used Sam's sperm to give to Michael, but is passing it off as Brian's? And as for Kip, what the hell was he promised for being involved? It couldn't possibly be a shot at Brian! Or could it?
Can't wait for the next chapter Star!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jan 26, 2018 1:39 am Title: Chapter 32
Oh WOW. This story is really so good. Great writing. Of course, I love all of your stories. Can't wait to see where you go from here, but I know it will be soooooooooooooo good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2018 12:57 am Title: Chapter 32
Glad to see that Lindsay didn't get what she hoped. Though I'm still not sure what her plan was. Now Michael, if he took Brian's sample without his permission should be looking at jail time. Hopefully?
Date: Jan 25, 2018 4:38 am Title: Chapter 31
It's a devilish plan and at least there is no physical danger for Justin and the kids.
Date: Jan 25, 2018 3:53 am Title: Chapter 31
It always sucks when you have to face the husbands.
Date: Jan 25, 2018 2:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Michael really is stupid. If there is/was an insemination Brian would sue his criminal ass and take custody of his child. How the Hell does Michael think it would help his cause?
Lindsay is the wild card here.....she really seems clinically insane.
So much going on but it's well paced and soooo so good. Please update quickly. ☺😀
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2018 1:58 am Title: Chapter 31
At least Justin had a good reason for not being home. And he found a nice clue that could break this wide open.
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2018 1:48 am Title: Chapter 31
Justin and Daphne will probably get spanked by their husbands with great relish ;)
But Michael and Lindsay are going to be wiped off the planet. (Hopefully Deb too?? <crosses fingers>)
What the Hell does David owe Deb??
How many samples did they use, who is the surrogate??
Date: Jan 24, 2018 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 31
Oh this is getting so good. Just want to smack both Michael & Lindsay, but they keep the story going and oh, so interesting. Love the cliffhanger even if it does make me crazy with waiting for more.
Date: Jan 24, 2018 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 31
HO-LY SHITBALLS!!!!!!!!!!! omg....omg...omg. At least Justin has the paperwork now. Hopefully that and least puts a damper on his plans. Unless the woman is alreaady inseminatd! Yikes! Oh man. This is intense!
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Jan 22, 2018 5:13 pm Title: Chapter 30
Oh man!! PLEASE update this one soon! I'm going to chew off what little nails I have. ;) Everything is pointing to M&L actually being aligned in their schemes against Justin. Assuming that Brian would drop justin if he were "no longe rpretty" Pfffft. Definitely not true. I'm really hoping it never gets to that point though. Maybe just to the bare brink so they can get their asses thrown in jail! ooooooooooooooooooooooh what will Deb do then??
Mel had some great lines. she really seems to be seeing life as it really is now, rather than the way she has been for the past umpteen years. While Lindsey may have helped in the battle between Mel adn Brian, Mel definitely chose to see Brian as Lindsey wanted her to rather than making an informed decision on her own. she allowed others to influence her impression. for someone who deems herself a strong woman, she certain was led by the nose.
cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2018 11:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Unfuckingbelievble ...that is one hell of plot ...soooooo looking forward to read more...excellent work.
Thank u for sharing.
Date: Jan 22, 2018 4:45 am Title: Chapter 30
Mel is on the right path, but Lindsey won't let her go easily.
The threat is stressing.
Date: Jan 22, 2018 12:07 am Title: Chapter 1
YAY! I was just rereading this earlier and hoping for an update. Happy dance. You are an amazing storyteller. Lindsay is starting to come across as seriously unbalanced. Her and Mickey will rule the day they were born if they hurt Justin. Brian, Jennifer, Daphne and Nick will l be out for blood. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2018 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 30
It's pretty Genius if it is actually both of them planning to get Justin out of the way?
They pretend to hate each other in public while plotting to get what they want in private.
Michael would never describe Justin as pretty he would say Blonde Fat Ass Gold Digger, but not Pretty.
Now Lindsay in disguise would describe Justin as pretty while trying to sound like Michael.
If she could step in before Justin was attacked then it would make her look like the hero, earn back Brian's trust and manipulate the situation to get Justin to leave taking Lindsay with him in the process.
She is so desperate to bask in the Art World that she will disregard everyone else to get Justin's limelight for herself.
Michael just wants Brian at his beck and call plus his big bank account and a chance to make his fantasy a reality that he will do anything.
They are both dangerous cause they are getting desperate.
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2018 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 30
Another fantastic chapter that leaves us wanting more. As soon as possible?
Date: Jan 21, 2018 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 30
And, the plot thickens. Such a great cliffhanger. Good job.
Date: Jan 15, 2018 3:31 am Title: Chapter 29
I almost feel bad for Lindsay. Her parents are part of the reason she is the way she is. I'm glad Gus is telling them the way it is.
Michael needs to just disappear. Justin apparently had eyes and ears all around the Avenue.
Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2018 2:59 am Title: Chapter 29
I actually feel sorry for Lindsay. I hope she learns that she's better off without parents who don't care for her. I'm assuming that Michael is behind wanting someone to rough Justin up. That's stupid, because Justin could take them on. I wish for another chapter because this story is sooooo good.
Date: Jan 15, 2018 12:14 am Title: Chapter 29
So is Michael looking for more trouble? Good chapter. So glad Gus can now see things as they are.
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2018 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 29
I would almost feel sorry for Lindsay with parents like Ron and Nancy, but she makes her own misery by trying to gain the respect of her parents and sister while riding on others coattails.
Lindsay had a chance to be happy but she threw it away to live like her parents, and she made her Wife and kids her enemies when they didn't do what she wanted.
How do expect to get Ron, Nancy and Lynette's respect when you don't respect yourself or anyone else?
Lindsay could be dripping in diamonds and have rubies for nails and her family would complain because they weren't the right diamonds or rubies.
Gus stood up for himself, his dad's, his Mama and Lindsay stood there steaming while opening and closing her mouth like a fish....How Pathetic!
Michael trying to find someone to beat up Justin means he is getting beyond desperate and into very dangerous territory cause Michael is escalating to violence.
Deb is going to lose her wig when she finds out Justin owns the diner and other establishments.
That should be funny :)
Date: Jan 14, 2018 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 29
Well now... Lindsay's letdown was MUCH deserved! Sorry NOT Sorry to say it, but she got exactly what she was bucking for, which was some more self-inflicted misery. I really think her masochistic tendencies are showing. I mean, seriously, how many times can you be emotionally destroyed before you don't keep going back for more? Yes, as you can see, I really don't feel sorry for her at all! She's old enough to know better, but too stupid to learn from past experiences....SMH
As for Hunter's take on Mel, I think she is really beginning to understand her part in her own downfall. It took her hitting her own 'rock bottom' (yeah, I saw her relationship to Lindsay the way I see addicts and codependency) before she realized that she needed to own her shit and do better by herself first, and then those around her. I really hope that now that Lindsay has the clue that she's really not needed or wanted, that she will move on. But either way, I hope Mel continues her progress to become a better, more self-assured version of herself. It's about time she finally learned to use the Gift of GOODBYE correctly! She should have used it on Lindsay, instead of her friends, years ago!
Gus....I soooooo LOVED his words to Nancy and Ron. That young man has a good head on his shoulders and his eyes are wide open (unlike his mothers) to the manipulations of those around him. I wonder how much Jen will have to take care of following his departure from the dining room because honestly, he's said it ALL!
As for the young boy found lurking around Brian and Justin's house...it doesn't take a genius to figure out the IDIOT offering money to harm Justin. What a MORON! Why can't there be a real life anvil that comes crashing down on his head the way it always does Wile E. Coyote in Looney Toons whenever he tries to think (sorry Wile E. You're actually a helluva more clever than your human conterpart of Michael Novotny and a whole lot more useful)? I mean, seriously Michael??!! Debbie should have swallowed instead of allowing him to be born...
Well I have a feeling that the Novotnys presence on Liberty Avenue AND their various sources of income are soon to become the stories past glories are built upon. I, for one, CAN'T WAIT!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jan 14, 2018 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 29
Poor Lindsey, so much disappointments; she needs to get her parents' approval since she was a little girl and was never able to get it. Fame and money are the only important things for Nancy, Lynette and Ron.
What an image to give to Gus, who, fortunately got his father's snarky elocution and his BS filter as well. Mel can be thankful for that because he defended her while Lindsey didn't say anything relevant.
The end was pretty disturbing; I hope Justin will be OK.