Date: Jan 30, 2018 3:42 pm Title: Chapter 37
Very difficult chapter, but the end is so worth is, for Gus and Brian.
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2018 5:00 am Title: Chapter 37
At least they know that Brian isn't the father so Emmett has a good chance to be one. Gus did good.
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2018 3:25 am Title: Chapter 37
Lindsay never deserved Gus because she just used him for her own selfish reasons.
Gus and Al are taking the time to see where this is going despite the instant attraction they feel for one another.
Emmett and Drew wanting the baby is good because this innocent child deserves love and not used as a pawn in others nefarious activities.
Gus has a strong support system who will help him through this madness just like Jenny and Hunter do aswell.
Lindsay can make all the excuses that she wants but this whole thing is about jealousy, spite and greed.
Date: Jan 29, 2018 4:27 pm Title: Chapter 36
Michael is so sick.
Now that Kip is away, are we sure that the kids he hired won't try something?
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2018 4:55 am Title: Chapter 36
So Michael could have cleared Brian and didn't. Very stupid. At least Kip is out of the way.
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2018 4:15 am Title: Chapter 36
Kip never stood a chance against Brian and Justin they make the temperature rise just by walking into a room, but when they are locked on each other they make lava look Luke warm lol
Al better be prepared for that can of heat when Gus is completely focused on him, those kisses rose the temperature up but when they are lock on each other they will incinerate everyone in the vicinity just like Brian and Justin.
Lindsay, Michael and their cohorts are going to regret coming up against Brian, Justin and Friends.
Date: Jan 29, 2018 3:46 am Title: Chapter 36
so glad you write fast!!!!! Al and Gus- that should be really interesting. I love that Justin got to show Brian his work persona- loving this story
[Report This]Date: Jan 28, 2018 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 35
Interesting plan. The fact that Gus is attracted to Al is cute. Can't wait to see if the plan works.
Date: Jan 28, 2018 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 35
It's going to be nasty and ugly. G-d help both Lindsay because she needs to be there fir her children, and Michael. Michael will get what he deserves one way or another and it won't be pretty.
Date: Jan 28, 2018 9:40 pm Title: Chapter 35
Okay, I'm liking your possesion, as you are updating my fave stories. Don't get an exorcism!
Deb
Date: Jan 28, 2018 9:16 pm Title: Chapter 35
I feel the danger, even if Justin won't be alone.
Gus and Al seem promising: I hope that, if they resume what they started and they are a great match, they will be able to see each other often.
It would be great if Brian and Mel could be in the same room and be at peace, teasing each other, but not hurting like they did before.
Date: Jan 28, 2018 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ohhhhhh......AL is my new favorite original Character. He's what I call a B4......brains, brawn,beauty and bravery. He make me wanna sop him up with a biscuit as my Grannie would say and I'm sure Gus would agree.
Anyone else thinking a sequel starring Gus and AL set five years down the road would be amazing?
Date: Jan 28, 2018 7:50 pm Title: Chapter 35
Thanks for all the chapters. I really love this fic. It has more twists and turns than a rollercoaster.
[Report This]Date: Jan 28, 2018 7:35 pm Title: Chapter 35
Justin parading himself around Liberty Avenue makes me nervous but it will get Michael to do something stupid and maybe up his plans?
He is arrogant enough to think he is smarter than Justin and equal to Brian.
Gus needing to find out just how deep Lindsay is involved and about the baby is a good plan, Lindsay like Michael has a need to gloat and she wouldn't pass up an opportunity to tell Gus or anyone else what is going on.
Al is trouble that Gus can't wait to explore over and over again lol
Mel and Brian could be friends they just need to put Lindsay in the past where she and Michael belong.
Date: Jan 28, 2018 7:28 pm Title: Chapter 35
On the edge of my seat again which is very good since the story has my full attention. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2018 9:27 pm Title: Chapter 34
Now this sounds like it might work. Thank god, Deb decided to talk.
Date: Jan 27, 2018 6:57 pm Title: Chapter 34
Is Justin going to confront Kip? Does he know what Kip and his ban planned to do?
I agree with Brian, he shouldn't do it.
Mel is coming to face her demons and she won't like what will be revealed.
Date: Jan 27, 2018 6:50 pm Title: Chapter 34
Oh boy, Michael & Lindsay are getting in deeper and deeper. At least Deb is starting to see the real Michael. Can't wait to see where this goes next.
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2018 5:53 pm Title: Chapter 34
Mel has opened her eyes to how Her Choices gave Lindsay the power to rob her of her self esteem and her voice.
Plus it is also showing her that while she blamed Brian for their problems, he was as much as victim of Lindsay's games as she was.
Rather than protecting Lindsay Mel is worried about Gus and Jenny who will be devastated when they find what Lindsay is doing, Mel going to therapy is seeing how she made Brian and enemy instead of embracing him as a friend thanks to Lindsay's manipulation and her own insecurities.
Deb is seeing how Michael isn't an innocent Angel but she is also still looking for excuses, Ryan is right that Deb has burnt all her bridges with Brian and Justin.
Apart of Brian will probably always love her but he could never forgive her or her bullying ways.
After Brian's Nap they should be ready to meet with Al and have paper towels ready for Gus lol
Seems Michael and Lindsay have painted themselves in a corner they have no way of getting out of.
Date: Jan 27, 2018 5:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Okay there is delusional and then there is Kip. What Drugs has he been smoking to think Brian would give him a nanosecond of a thought? And that psycho Mikey's bat shit crazy schemes will never get him who and what he wants. What does Mikey see happening? He and Kip time share Brian? I love this story....please please please update soon. Awesome Cliffhanger's.... but they killing me. I'm on the edge of my seat here.
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2018 12:15 am Title: Chapter 33
Now I'm wondering what Deb is going to do with the information she's found out. The right thing or try to protect her son. Whatever Brian and Justin end up doing will be just right.
Date: Jan 27, 2018 12:14 am Title: Chapter 33
And, the plot thickens. Such a good chapter leaving me on the edge of my chair waiting for what comes next.
Date: Jan 26, 2018 9:02 pm Title: Chapter 33
Debbie is finally opening her eyes; as she's the only one beside Brian that Michael could listen to, there is hope, very little hope.
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2018 8:47 pm Title: Chapter 33
Despite her many excuses Deb now knows that Michael is willing to go to any lengths to get Brian.
Of course any apology she gives will be Too Little Too Late Deb has shown how far she is willing to go to make Michael happy and how she will bully everyone to achieve it.
Besides would it even be sincere after Michael is arrested and charged???
Who is the woman Michael is paying to carry the baby and how much did he pay her?
It is going to be hard for Brian to tell Gus what Lindsay has been doing, but he deserves the truth and he is strong enough to handle it in his own way.
They need to find out about all the other players and what part they play on the chest board before they can come up with a plan to destroy them all.
Date: Jan 26, 2018 4:59 am Title: Chapter 32
The traps are revealed and it's quite a nightmare; I hope Debbie will see the light based on what Hunter told her.