Date: Feb 10, 2018 9:00 am Title: Chapter 42
Yes, definitely lighter and brighter!
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2018 4:52 am Title: Chapter 42
Gus got his birthday wish and an extra gift of the loft. And it sounds like Brian and Justin might try to have another child hopefully a girl.
Date: Feb 10, 2018 4:39 am Title: Chapter 42
Just when I think this story has reached its best point, you make it better. Great job. As I have said, I love this story.
[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2018 4:38 am Title: Chapter 42
Gus is mature bet his years and yet despite everything he still has the innocence of a child, he hasn't let circumstances harden his heart.
He is one of Brian's Best Creations :)
Al and Brian are to alike not to like each other and despite his misgivings concerning his first born I do believe he trusts Al to protect and cherish Gus.
Lindsay getting probation..Boo!
Michael hopefully getting an eternity...Yes!
Deb finding a life away from Michael...Meh
Brian and Justin rebuilding their love and moving towards their own Happiness...Hell Yeah!! ;)
Lovely Chapter
Date: Feb 09, 2018 7:22 pm Title: Chapter 41
The mood is lighter with Michael away and the family making projects/plans.
I hope Al could come and spend quality time with Gus.
[Report This]Date: Feb 09, 2018 4:47 am Title: Chapter 41
Brian, Justin and the kids being out of Pittsburgh is good cause Deb would've tried to pull them back into the drama to keep Michael looking innocent.
But you can't tarnish something that never existed in the first place!! <eye roll>
Don't blame Blake for wanting to kick Michael's Ass he has quite a que building up.
Lindsay and Michael enjoy playing victim because it is the only role they have ever known, along with dictator too bad they never had anyone Scream at them ' The World Doesn't Revolve Around You, And No One Will Miss You If You Disappeared For All Of Eternity!!!'
Florida sounds like Heaven compared to the lunacy of Pittsburgh right now.
Gus has a good head on his shoulders and he figured out long ago that his path is his decision and bad influences don't control the man he wants to be.
The Kinney is Strong In Him ;)
Leave the whiners to make someone else's ears bleed, everyone else go to Florida get tans, have fun, laugh and celebrate the many new chapters getting ready to begin.
Date: Feb 09, 2018 4:02 am Title: Chapter 41
Good chapter. Wow, Gus turning 18. That is amazing to think about. Love this story.
[Report This]Date: Feb 09, 2018 4:00 am Title: Chapter 41
Love how Blake wanted to go after Michael. Now Brian and Justin have a dog to look after. Since they are staying at a beach the dog will be great in the water. Looking forward to Gus' birthday!
Date: Feb 05, 2018 6:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
REally gald that michael is so bloody stupid! I mean honestly...caught red-handed and still making excuses and lying.
As pissed at Brian as I was in the beginning, he's definitely trying now. He's putting heart adn sould into his relationship with the kids as well as Justin. Everyone else isn't going ot matter in comparison. Blinders are off when it comes to Michael Lindsey and Deb. I couldn't imagine how painful it is for him to realize just who those 3 really are, how far M&L would go. How far Deb would go to protect her son.
Lindsey is....I mean wow! She's so far over the top. Does she really think her game are going to foo anyone?
Jenny's reactin is totally undestandable. Mel is right...they should've told her before it got this far.
Emmett and Drew seem to have things finalized now. Whew! that baby is going to be well loved!!
Cheers
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Feb 05, 2018 6:02 am Title: Chapter 40
At least Candance is making the right choice. Lindsay didn't. Michael didn't. Deb hasn't. Gus has.
Date: Feb 05, 2018 4:45 am Title: Chapter 40
Poor children, they really don't deserve that, all of them.
Date: Feb 05, 2018 3:28 am Title: Chapter 40
Fantastic chapter. So happy for Em & Drew. And, maybe Brian & Justin will be rid of the pests.
[Report This]Date: Feb 05, 2018 3:24 am Title: Chapter 40
Lindsay like Michael is digging her own grave by running her mouth and ignoring her lawyer.
Can't Fix Stupid, But You Can Send Away.
Lindsay is definitely Deb's child she is using any excuse and anyone she can to save herself.
Deb is still blaming Brian and Brian is leaving Deb, Michael and Lindsay to face the consequences of his actions.
Jenny has a lot to deal with and right now anger is winning but once she talks to Dr. Turner she will be able to handle the mess Michael and Lindsay made and with her family she will heal.
Gus is confused and angered but he is already learning to not let it consume his life and take away his happiness.
He has a family who will be whenever he needs them and will always have his back.
Drew and Emmett will save that baby from the cruelty Brian experienced growing up.
Good is going to come out of the bad some will be stronger for it while others will be left further behind or forgotten Forever.
Date: Feb 04, 2018 4:45 pm Title: Chapter 39
Fantastic chapter. Finally Michael is no longer going to get away with his plans. And, whatever Lindsay gets she deserves. As for Deb, she is a mother, but she only sees what she wanted to instead of the truth. Can't wait to see the next update.
Date: Feb 04, 2018 2:39 pm Title: Chapter 39
So relieved Michael is out!
I hope Gus will start to heal and will become closer to his dad.
[Report This]Date: Feb 04, 2018 5:35 am Title: Chapter 39
Michael is own worst enemy because he seriously doesn't know when to shut or face reality.
Of course now he won't have any other choice because reality is about to come down on him hard.
Deb is also about to get her own dose of reality along with Lindsay when she sees that no one is coming to help Michael.
Gus and Al have the chance to have a great love story or a great friendship only time for both of them will tell.
[Report This]Date: Feb 04, 2018 4:02 am Title: Chapter 39
Maybe Al left a piece of clothing behind for Gus? Love that Michael got caught and Lindsay is in trouble too.
Date: Feb 03, 2018 1:23 pm Title: Chapter 38
Very interesting chapter!
The battle of egos with Ethan and Sam is great and effective thanks to Mel.
Michael is spinning towards to end with Lindsey behind.
Date: Feb 03, 2018 12:33 am Title: Chapter 38
Oh this is getting so good. Lindsay and Michael are finally going to get what they deserve. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: Feb 03, 2018 12:07 am Title: Chapter 38
Lindsay and Michael need to be locked up someplace where they can only hurt themselves and everyone else can be protected.
Neither one cares about hurting people it's All About Their Wants, Needs, and Desires and to Hell with pain everyone else has to deal with.
Sam is thinking about himself and to Hell with the baby as long as he gets back on top.
The surrogate sounds just as greedy and self-absorbed hopefully she only gets the penthouse until the baby is born then she gets kicked to the curb once they have her written agreement that she doesn't want the baby or try to get more money.
Ethan and Cody are very good friends and hopefully they both will be good for Mel.
Looks like it is time to for Michael to get caught in a trap of his own making and hopefully Lindsay will go down to??? :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2018 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 38
I like that Michael is getting what he has coming to him. Lindsay is getting off easier. Mel is finally doing what should be done. Loving this.
Date: Feb 02, 2018 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 38
Oh this is getting so good. Lindsay and Michael are finally going to get what they deserve. Great chapter.
Date: Feb 02, 2018 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 38
Oh this is getting so good. Lindsay and Michael are finally going to get what they deserve. Great chapter.
Date: Jan 30, 2018 6:10 pm Title: Chapter 37
Two great chapters. Oh, sometimes, I just want to smack Michael much harder than Debbie does. When I first started reading fanfics I realized that so many different writers feel the same about Michael being an idiot. I thought it was just me. Throw in Lindsay and Debbie and the story just gets better. Great job.
Date: Jan 30, 2018 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 37
My heart is so hurting for Gus. What aposition to be in. I know it's his choosing, but it's gotta hurt him to hear the words from his mother's mouth. To end up being so incredibly disillusioned by your mother. So betrayed. Thank goodness he has such a terrific support system around him. He is greatly loved.
Cheers,
Elaine