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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2017 11:44 pm Title: The Narthex

Seeing this from Justin's side is perfect.

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Date: Oct 18, 2017 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 9

Damn, I can't say anything because of the tears in my eyes.  Why doesn't everyone have a chance to read this story.

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Date: Oct 18, 2017 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 8

Such sadness. 

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Date: Oct 18, 2017 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 7

Like how Micheal stood up for Brian.  Teo and Brian will make a great team, but Brian will always remember Justin thanks to Taylor.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2017 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 6

I think the diagnosis is wrong and that she is talking to her Tin.  That's my story and I'm sticking to it.

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Date: Oct 18, 2017 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 5

Brian's had a busy week.  First Deb comes to see him and surprise, surprise, she doesn't back Michael up.  Then Michael apologizes.  Soon he'll learn who Taylor's Tin really is.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2017 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 4

I'm sad that Ted is a shit, but what is Emmett's problem with Brian?  That Hobbs only got ten years was not great but it was so much better than the series.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2017 7:50 pm Title: Chapter 3

It looks like Brian might have someone else in his and Taylor's life, but he'll never forget his Sunshine.  

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Date: Oct 18, 2017 7:36 pm Title: Chapter 2

I just want to strangle Lindsay and Melanie.  They are so cruel.  I do think that Michael got a clue though.  Brian and Daphne have Deb, Vic and Jennifer on their side.  I'm hoping they'll soon have Emmett and Ted too.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2017 7:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

While this story is so sad, I love the progression of Brian into fatherhood.  He and Daphne will make great parents for Taylor Chanders

Reviewer: nickknack Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2017 7:05 am Title: Chapter 9

I thought this story was amazing. At times very sad but equally full of love and hope. I really liked this thoughtful and caring Brian and in this instance, for once, I quite liked Michael too.

Reviewer: CarolK1943 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2017 3:26 am Title: Chapter 1

I hate death fics, but this one is just lovely.



Author's Response:

Thank you for giving it a try. If you drift through my works you'll see I have a special soft spot for writing death fic. The emotions that can evoke are sometimes so beautiful. 

Reviewer: Solfyre Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2017 3:22 am Title: Chapter 1

I've read this before and just like before it brought tears to my eye.

You can't help but to fall in love with Taylor. Nicely done!👍🏾

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you. I tried to call on the wisdom of my own kids (even when they were being shits, LOL). My favorite line of Taylor's is "Daddy, I'm talking to Misser T!" LOL... that is soooo my granddaughter coming through. 

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2017 12:23 am Title: The Narthex

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!



Author's Response:

:) Thank you. 

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2017 12:21 am Title: Chapter 9

Is it weird how bloody proud I am of Taylor for getting up in front of everyone and telling her story??????



Author's Response:

I imagined her being the kind of precocious kid Justin would have been as a kid. He always struck me as an in your face type of guy. I wanted Taylor to have that kind of spirit. And no, it's not weird. At all. We need a lot more kids like that, I think. 

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2017 12:14 am Title: Chapter 8

This has me crying so much, Justin is there when Taylor is having her fits, making sure she's okay - when Brian was talking to the stars, my eyes were LEAKING :(



Author's Response:

If you notice the banner, every single element has a special meaning from the story. I actually made the banner first, and then kept adding elements as I was writing the story. Those stars... damnable twinkling stars. 

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2017 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 7

Ha, in your face Linds and Deb. I hate how they expect so much from Brian, but offer nothing in return.



Author's Response:

At least Deb eventually gets it. In this story she really is just dense about it, not mean at least. Although I have a love/hate relationship with Deb over all. 

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2017 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 6

The poor sweet girl :(



Author's Response:

But her Tin holds her hand every minute. 

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2017 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 3

Of course she fell on her butt

Author's Response:

Wonder where she got that padding from? Hmmm.... LOL

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2017 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 2

Tears on my face...luv the firefly, of course Justin is with him

Author's Response:

Always and always. 

I have a really special love for fireflies. I hate that they are disappearing. 

Reviewer: Sallyo Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2017 10:14 pm Title: The Narthex

Thank you. I’m so happy you posted this. I read it when it was first posted, but I forgot how much I love it. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading it again! Hope you like it as much this time. 

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2017 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hope this all goes well

Author's Response:

It does. Trust me. :) 

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2017 10:02 pm Title: The Narthex

I read this when you first posted this many moons ago.

And just like the first time, you have me feeling a range of emotions that are hard to describe.

Thank you for sharing your stories with us.  (going to a corner to get my crying under control.  Brought back memoires of a friend who has passed)

 

Sandy

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2017 8:13 pm Title: The Narthex

I just finished reading this. It was really good and sad. I normally hate death fiction, but this was beautiful.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2017 5:22 pm Title: Chapter 5

MY TIN <3



Author's Response:

:) 

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