Date: Sep 05, 2018 3:12 am Title: Chapter 15
I love that Alex is upset for them but is right there for them both!
Date: Sep 05, 2018 3:06 am Title: Chapter 14
I love Molly! I hope Debbie sees the truth, but I also don’t think she should just be forgiven either... she just went too far
Date: Sep 05, 2018 3:01 am Title: Chapter 13
Relieved the Peterson’s have walked away from Lindsay... I hope Ethan learns how awful what he did to Justin is... repeatedly!
Date: Sep 05, 2018 2:55 am Title: Chapter 12
OMG... wtf Ethan raped Justin and thinks it’s ok???
Date: Sep 05, 2018 2:49 am Title: Chapter 11
Loved the doctors showing no mercy to THEM, and so happy Sunshine woke up
Date: Sep 05, 2018 2:44 am Title: Chapter 10
I’m just floored at how delusional Debbie has gotten... nothing is penetrating her thought process
Date: Sep 04, 2018 3:31 pm Title: Chapter 9
OMG... that's pretty much all I can say about this is OMG!!!!
Date: Sep 04, 2018 3:27 pm Title: Chapter 8
tbh, the fire was brilliant, but damn so evil... (just giving credit lol)
I can't believe Debbie.... common sense just is out of her reach when it comes to whiney ass
Date: Sep 04, 2018 3:22 pm Title: Chapter 7
I appreciate Brian asking for help.. he is scared, not just for Justin, but for his baby too... I love protective Daphne.. her boys and their baby!!! awwww
Date: Sep 04, 2018 3:19 pm Title: Chapter 6
go go Cynthia... Justin is already figuring out there is a bigger picture at play... I hope they stay safe... they are pyschotic and delisuional
Date: Sep 04, 2018 3:15 pm Title: Chapter 5
Kip was a surprise... but damn Ethan actually scares me... he believes his own BS and it plays right into the Evil duo's plans
Date: Sep 04, 2018 3:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm so sad for Mel, but I absolutely love that the first people she goes to are Brian and Justin... I just wanted her pregnant LOL... but I trust you wont kill her, so I'm with ya!
Date: Sep 04, 2018 3:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
ooohhhh, why isn't Mel feeling well... I'd love for her to be preggo too... so glad the family is standing up for our boys and their family!
Date: Sep 04, 2018 3:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
Brian better not let Michael slide on this one... he needs to make Justin and the baby his PRIORITY!!!
Date: Sep 04, 2018 2:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
I already hate Michael.... what an asshole... not even letting Brian see the note!???
[Report This]Date: Aug 14, 2018 5:35 am Title: Chapter 30
I am so sorry to see this end. But the main heros are happy and that's all that matters.
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2018 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 30
It Was A Wonderful Ending To One Chapter of Their Lives and The Start of Many More.
I just Love, Love, Love Your Writing and I look forward to more!
Take Care of Yourself and Thank You :)
Date: Aug 13, 2018 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 30
Wonderful.
Glad Mel wound up with Leda. She derserves to be happy. Drew and Em will be busy with the children of the group home and maybe somewhere down the line they may adopt. If not they'll still be happy.
Well at least Deb can see the family grow. It could have been worse.
No words for Michael and Lindsay or Ethan. They bought it on themselves.
Date: Aug 13, 2018 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 29
Chaos at the Taylor-Kinney's. Why not.
Thought I had commented before. Really going to miss this story. You did a great job. Now on to last chapter.
Date: Aug 13, 2018 3:19 pm Title: Chapter 30
So happy that you were well enough to finish this story. Love all the endings. They were perfect. Made me smile alot at the antics of the dogs and Brian. I love that you left no loose ends and told us what each family member was going through. Great story. Thank you for sharing it with us. I hope that you continue to improve with the new meds. Take good care of yourself and if you write again, I will be waiting to read it.
Date: Aug 13, 2018 3:11 pm Title: Chapter 30
Sandy,
This was such a wonderful end to this AMAZING story! I'm so happy that the family was able to move on in the end and came out happier despite the turmoil they had gone through. I definitely laughed out loud at the shenanigans of the pups. Definitely never a dull moment with them around!
There is soooo much more that I can say, but it would become a novel itself, Lol. So I'll conclude this by thanking you, and encouraging you to continue on your writing journey. You are an amazing storyteller!
Looking forward to more from you soon!
HUGS and LOVE,
~Nichelle
Date: Aug 08, 2018 9:28 pm Title: Chapter 29
Sorry you aren't feeling well .I get migraines but not to that extent. I love your writing so, rest up, heal and come back to us. We will be waiting.
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2018 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 29
Brian, Justin soon to be four kids, three dogs and a dog garden what else could they ask for? lol
Good for Deb standing up to Michael and deciding to get away from the avenue.
So Proud of Brian for seeing what is important and putting his family before his business, Ted and Cynthia can handle Kinnetik while Brian spends time watching the kids grow.
Sounds like The Family are finally at the place they have always wanted to be without certain influences.
Date: Aug 07, 2018 3:26 pm Title: Chapter 29
Wonderful chapter. What a great way to pay tribute to your dogs. Beautiful pictures. Hope you are feeling better.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :) I've been looking for pictures of dogs for a while until it came to my mind that I could use my own dogs. The stories I can use for the sequel and one shots I plan to do wouldn't even be fictional then :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2018 1:46 pm Title: Chapter 29
Three kids and three dogs. I hope the kids take care of them. Deb seems to be doing better. Glad she told Michael off, do you think he heard the truth in her words?
Author's Response:
And soon to be four kids :D I doubt that Michael heard anything. He only hears what he wants to hear. He'll be featured in the epilogue and then I want to do more in the sequel and one shots. Hopefully that will work better than keeping this story going and not knowing I'll be able to update it.