Date: Oct 29, 2017 2:58 pm Title: Chapter 12
I love your story so far. It makes me sad Justin has to go through this though. Can’t wait to see what happens to the jerks that did this to him...including Debbie. You might want to add rape to your tag list though. It’s not a trigger for me but it might be for others. Can’t wait til you next chapter! 🙂
Author's Response:
I added that to the tag list. Can't believe I forgot that. Thank you for reminding me.
Hopefully I'll be able to post the next chapter soon :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2017 2:19 pm Title: Chapter 12
I knew what had been done to Justin was bad, but what Ethan did is the worst. Glad that Hunter sees things as they are. The kids are all adorable.
Author's Response:
Justin won't remember too much of what Ethan did but enough to know it happened. Fortunately, he has his true love Brian by his side and they'll deal with this together.
Hunter sometimes annoyed me on the show because of the way he was written but I refuse to believe that he didn't really like Justin. I think that Hunter really found Brian attractive and was a bit jealous that Justin had him but in the end, I think Hunter cared about Justin, too. They're all family.
Date: Oct 29, 2017 1:20 pm Title: Chapter 12
THAT SON OF A BITCH!!!!! He raped Justin and dared to call it 'making love!' He's just as bad as Michael and Lindsay. I hope he doesn't get off easy, even if they did trick him into being there in the first place! There is NO excuse he could give for knowingly sticking his puny, second belly-button into an unconscious Justin. OMG! I AM SO PISSED OFF!!!
As for Gus and Jenny, what a sweet scene, even though the subject matter was heartbreaking. But Jen and Daph handled it like the champion women they are, explaining it to him in language that he could process and understand. Hunter's reaction broke my heart! Debbie needs the FIRE and taste slapped out of her mouth!
Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
No, they won't get off easy, I promise!! Was it really that they tricked him? A sane person would know that 'making love' to someone who's not responsible is NOT okay no matter the circumstances. And Justin told him off but Ethan refused to see the truth.
This is part of therapy for me as something similar happened to me when I was in a hospital and on meds. It's hard to deal with it when you can't remember a thing but know something happened.
Gus and Jenny are smart kids but sometimes a child can make something really complicated into something easy just because of the logic they have. My nieces taught me that and it shows the innocence of children. Something so beautiful and I wish every child could have that.
Hunter only acts 'cool' to protect himself, like Brian did for many years. But I think that he would be like Brian and show his real self when his family is in danger. Neither Brian nor Hunter were cold for real. It was all just masks.
Glad you enjoy this story so far. Sandy xoxo
Date: Oct 29, 2017 1:14 pm Title: Chapter 12
I have been reading from the beginning and....I really don't know how to feel about this chapter. Ethan raping Justin was a little much for me, hopefully Sunshine doesn't catch anything because of the little chin-rat.
Author's Response:
I couldn't bring myself to write THAT scene so I decided to have it either mentioned or in flashbacks but I couldn't go into detail. Fortunately, Justin has a great support system, especially Brian who will help him to cope with this. And I won't allow Ethan to destroy Justin of course.
Stories like this are always hard and in a way, it's a bit like therapy for myself when it comes to dealing with such a traumatic event.
Date: Oct 28, 2017 10:34 am Title: Chapter 11
Leonie is a fighter! Just like her daddy.
Author's Response:
Yes, she is! :)
Date: Oct 28, 2017 8:28 am Title: Chapter 10
I hope Debbie will be all alone once this is over.
Author's Response:
She will be and there's nothing she can do to change that.
Date: Oct 25, 2017 9:15 pm Title: Chapter 11
Love the baby's name.
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Hope you'll enjoy the new chapter.
Date: Oct 25, 2017 5:00 pm Title: Chapter 11
Wonderful and heartbreaking at the same time. The pain, insecurity and guilt that brian is goingthrough is gut wrentching. Justin's obvious fear for the life of their child was brutal. thank goodness that was eleviated quickly.
Was cheering at the pain and suffering M&L endured. Hope there is much more of the same to come for them! Endless suffering!! :)
Curious as to what Deb will do. I wanted to reach through the computer screen and grab her by the throat in the previous chapter! ARGH!!!!! I'm curious as to whether or not she'll do a sudden about face and realize just how awful her son is. She has a lot to lose if she continues to support him, but I doubt she'll see that. she seems to think that everyone will eventually come back to her. Pfffffffft. Not gonna happen. Even more so if she actually tries to get custody of Jenny!
Lovely name for their daughter. You chose well and has special meaning to you. Nicely done.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad that it showed all the feelings and emotions they felt in that moment.
I hope to come up with some evil and painful things for L&M&E!!
Debbie is delusional. But she'll realize how wrong she was at some point... the question is will it be too late then?
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2017 3:58 pm Title: Chapter 11
What a lovely name. It's good that Justin now knows his daughter survived. Michael and Lindsay deserve whatever you pick out to give them. I'm looking forward to all the happenings for Brian and Justin and family.
Author's Response:
Thank you <33333
I don't think Justin would deal well if L&M had managed to kill his daughter. He would always blame himself :(
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2017 3:34 pm Title: Chapter 11
The name is beautiful and so fitting for Brian and Justin's daughter :)
Michael is such a whiney twerp and Lindsay isn't insane she is just greedy and evil.
Do how Justin is awake and will soon have Leonie Estefania in his arms.
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter:)
Sorry about your friend's daughter she sounded precious and a true blessing for all who knew her *Hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you! She really was precious. My heart's still bleeding for this loss. Why such a young, kind hearted child had to suffer so much is still a mistery to me.
Date: Oct 22, 2017 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 10
Debbie is almost as delusional as her son. I hope everyone on the avenue will take Briand and Justin's side and show her she is in the wrong here.
Not another coma for Justin, please let him be ok!
Can't wait for the next chapter now
Author's Response:
She is! The people who know the real story of Brian and Justin will stand by them :)
I promise that Justin will be okay :D I would NEVER kill him off.
Next chapter is finally up xD
Date: Oct 22, 2017 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 9
You did good with the plot with the car. Shame it was too late to avoid L cutting Justin open. Please let him be okay, and the baby girl too.
Author's Response:
I promise they will both survive and have a great life :) <33
Date: Oct 22, 2017 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 8
Annnnd Debbie is back, I had hope that she would be a support to Briand and Justin but no she has to defend M. Please let Justin and the baby girl be ok. Lindsey is completly nuts and I can't believe she wants to kill the baby, she's an innocent life!
Author's Response:
Of course she has to! In her eyes Michael can do no wrong.
I promise they'll both be fine :)
Lindsay only cares about Lindsay. And the baby is not innocent in her eyes. For Lindsay, this baby takes everything away that made her special :/ Freaky bitch.
Date: Oct 22, 2017 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 7
Brian is always trying to blame himself when things go bad but Justin and Daphne are right it's not his fault, he can't control people. I hope carl and Daphne will be able to help.
Author's Response:
Brian is so used to the 'blame Brian' game that he's convinced of being the reason for everything that goes wrong in the lives of the people around him.
They will try :)
Date: Oct 22, 2017 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 6
I can't believe Ethan, he's like M and L, he never listen when it's not what he wants to hear.
Cynthia is a awesome.
Mathilde
Author's Response:
Remember the guy we saw Justin with? That was Ethan, so full of himself. Of course he's as delusional as L&M.
I LOVE Cynthia. She's awesome and so supportive of Brian.
Thank you for all your lovely comments. They definitely made me smile :D
Date: Oct 22, 2017 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ethan is delusional if he thinks Justin will leave Brian for him. And the wonder twins contacting Kip, they are really desperate to create as much avoc as they can. Glad Brian didn't let him get away with his threat.
Mel and the kids living with Brian and Justin, one big familly under the same roof. You just have to get Brian to buy all the building and put a garden and everyone will be happy.
Mathilde
Author's Response:
L&M tried everything... but bringing back Kip was really low... and a failure from the first minute xD As if anyone like Kip could scare Brian Kinney lol
Well, the loft will change a lot in this story :D More than once.
Date: Oct 22, 2017 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm so sad about Mel, i really like her and I always thought that she was a bitch to Brian because of Lindsey. I hope you don't intent to let her die. (I will not beta for you anymore if you do that, lol).
I can believe the nerve of M and L, contacting Hobbs and Gold! I'm glad Hobbs is doing the right thing.
Mathilde
Author's Response:
I promise on Brian and Justin that I will NOT kill off Mel!! I promise.
Wahou.... you're really serious. I am, too. Well, my promise to you is serious.
I think after all the shit Hobbs put Justin through, he should have grown up and finally do something right ;)
Date: Oct 22, 2017 11:53 am Title: Chapter 3
I'm glad the familly is taking the news well. Even Debbie, I have mix feeling about her sometimes and it's good that she is not defending Michael. The same goes for Melanie, throwing them out was a good thing.
Mathilde
Author's Response:
Debbie sometimes opens her eyes when it comes to Michael's faults but not always :/
Date: Oct 22, 2017 11:46 am Title: Chapter 2
Well, I think Justin gave up a little to easily but I understand him lol. I'm glad everyone is worried about Justin, it proves that they care. Even if he's not with Michael anymore, I hope will still see Ben.
Mathilde
Author's Response:
Justin is still a sucker for Brian's love and he won't ever stop loving that guy. Also, Brian realized that he was wrong and truly meant his apology.
Ben will always be a part of the family as well as Hunter :D
Date: Oct 22, 2017 11:39 am Title: Chapter 1
I finally found the time to read your story. You know I love anti-Michael and anti-Lindsey stories so I think I will like this one. You're off to a good start. Michael is a weasel for taking the letter. Justin pregnant is always a good bonus too lol. I hope Brian will get his head out of his a.. about his "two best friends".
Mathilde
Author's Response:
Haha I know you're usually very busy so don't worry. Plus, the story isn't going anywhere so you can take your time :)
I think Brian will soon realize just how his 'best friends' really are!
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2017 7:01 pm Title: Chapter 10
Deb must want to go to jail too??
Does she know that they won't house her in the same place as Michael, no matter how much she yells?
So are Lindsay's parents coming to save her?
Poor Justin he has been through so much and now he has to fight again.
Deb is about to learn why you don't F#Ck with this family and I will cheer.
She really is to blame for Michael's behavior and she needs to face the consequences, because who would award custody to her?
Author's Response:
On some days I think she would gladly follow Michael everywhere and give up her own life and happiness for him.
Nope... they're very disappointed in her. ;)
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2017 6:49 pm Title: Chapter 8
Michael and Lindsay are going to die painfully and slowly as each member of the family takes a turn , they could have killed someone in that fire they mindlessly set!!!
Does Ethan realize they plan on putting the blame on him?
Deb Can Go To Hell Along With Michael!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2017 6:42 pm Title: Chapter 7
Daphne is coming back to Pittsburgh!
They Are Dead?
So Lindsay is spending the money Brian set aside for Gus?
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2017 6:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
Skip must really want Brian to destroy him because he really should have taken him seriously.
Ethan deserves everything that will come his way if he upsets Justin.
Mel staying with Brian and Justin and etc else helping out will take the pressure off her to rush her recovery.
Now Michael and Lindsay I want bury in concrete up to their necks and pour fire ants over their heads
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2017 6:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
Poor Mel!
At least she now has Brian and Justin to help her with kids and for emotional support.
Chris was smart to go to his lawyer and not fall for Michael and Lindsay's games.
Ethan is a moron if he thinks Justin was pining over him, that was a stupid fling that is barely a blimp on Justin's screen anymore.